KathyG · 2 February 2025 · Chapter 2
I love how the others have helped Haleth! I wouldn't object if you were to write a sequel to this story about him. BTW, I've sent you a PM on Fanfiction.net.
Too Few Winters by Shireling
Reviews (13)
Elena Tiriel · 7 February 2009 · Chapter 2
A sad but compelling tale, with a hopeful ending. I was in tears when you wrote of the boy's demons (not least because I've suffered from migraine headaches myself), and was pleased that he met such helpful people at the end. Nicely done, Shireling! - Barbara
Linda Hoyland · 23 January 2009 · Chapter 2
This was a very moving story and held my interest despite a central OC.I loved the way Aragorn and Arwen unite to help the troubled boy.
Author's reply
Thank you Linda I really appreciate your support. Angst and no Faramir, what is the world coming to!!!! *grin* Helen
cathleen · 23 January 2009 · Chapter 2
The poor boy - all the guilt he's carried around. Nevertheless, he's done very well looking after himself and I particularly like the way he shows his morals by leaving game in place of the things he's taken. I'm glad they've finally found him and he's being well-cared for. Very realistic premise, too - a boy his age really wouldn't understand how war works and that the killing of his friend was not his fault. Loved Aragorn and Legolas in this too!
Author's reply
Thank you Cathleen Haleth is now in good hands and though the path forward may yet be rocky at least his guardians will be there to pick him up when he falters. Hugs Helen
cathleen · 23 January 2009 · Chapter 1
Intriguing beginning to this tale, Shireling! I love the descriptive "word painting" you've done, and am very curious about who the child is.
Agape4Gondor · 22 January 2009 · Chapter 2
This was a delightful tale all the way around and I am glad the Muse decided another Eomer tale was not needed, at this time. I loved the compassion shone to the boy... Especially Arwen's painstaking kindness. It was delightful to 'see' the boy whisper his name to her. Lovely tale - very nicely done!
Author's reply
Thank you Perhaps Eomer will get to play a bigger part if the muse ever guides us to more of Haleth's adventures!! Hugs Helen
Larner · 22 January 2009 · Chapter 2
Oh, indeed I recognize the boy from the film. An all too plausible occurance, of course. Am glad that Arwen was able to reassure him enough to allow him to talk once more. Alas for what he has known, but the future appears much brighter for him.
Author's reply
Hi Larner Yes, poor Haleth was another hapless victim. But his future now holds hope. Thank you very much for your support. Helen
utfrog · 22 January 2009 · Chapter 2
I had wondered if the young man was Haleth and now I know. This was an excellent story - very well done. Thank you.
Author's reply
Thank you very much for your kind words.
Aeärwen2 · 21 January 2009 · Chapter 2
This is beautifully written. Thank you.
Author's reply
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your kind words Helen
Linda Hoyland · 20 January 2009 · Chapter 1
Poor boy,what a dreadful ordeal,no wonder he is so traumatised!Very well written.
Author's reply
Thank you, Linda Yes, he is another tragic victim of the battle. Helen
Larner · 19 January 2009 · Chapter 1
An excellent beginning. Love the premise and how Legolas found his quarry. The poor boy, feeling so guilty!
Author's reply
Thank you, Larner I really appreciate your feedback. Hugs Helen
Agape4Gondor · 17 January 2009 · Chapter 1
What a beautiful, sorrowful tale. The poor little boy. My heart goes out to him. I hope Legolas can offer him some peace....
Author's reply
Thank you so much I thought this was going to be a story about Eomer but the muse shot of in another direction and poor Eomer barely gets a mention! Hugs Helen
MP brennan · 17 January 2009 · Chapter 1
Very impressive story! I love the imagery you've used, and the haunting language. You really pull your readers in. The boy is enough to break my heart. Excellent writing. I'm looking forward to more. -Brennan
Author's reply
Thank you for your kind words, Brennan, I really appreciate it. More of the boy's tale soon Helen