Larner
· 29 August 2009
· Chapter 1
A delighful, perhaps even inevitable competition, and an excellent distraction from the disappointments of the day's interview with Thranduil. Loved it! They are so well matched!
Author's reply
I'm glad you liked it. I do think a game like this was inevitable, as is just about anything they can turn into a competition. It was a definite distraction. I agree, which is why they always ended up tying.
ziggy
· 29 August 2009
· Chapter 1
This is lovely- I love the way they became so absorbed in their competition that htey have lost all sense of time and purpose except besting the other.You have written this with such a light touch too. I really enjoyed reading this.
Author's reply
Thank you. They definitely got absorbed in the competition, each focusing only on winning. I'm glad you liked the humor. I love hearing that a reader has enjoyed reading one of my stories.
Beverly
· 27 August 2009
· Chapter 1
Awww, such a cute story, White Wolf. I can just see them both, yawning and looking bleary eyed at their target, as the sun peeped over the horizon; then falling asleep, slumped against each other, next to a tree.
Loved it.
Peace
Beverly
Author's reply
I'm glad you liked my little tale. That's a sweet scene you've envisioned. I believe I'll adopt it and picture it in my mind whenever I think of this story. Thanks. :o)