The Birthday Guest by Primsong

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Dreamflower · 20 May 2010 · Chapter 1: Huzzah!

Oh, I just love the irony of that last paragraph! You captured so perfectly the insularity of many hobbits. It makes me wonder who-- the bit about the gold and treasure makes me think "maybe a Proudfoot"? After all, it was Sancho who went digging about in Frodo's cellar. Or the disrespectful tone makes me wonder if it could have been a Sandyman? Who knows? This is very well done!

Larner · 20 May 2010 · Chapter 1: Huzzah!

Ah, a perfectly awful guest--could well be old Odo Proudroot as I envision him. Heh! Filled with envy and deceit and incredulity. Well done!