The Seven Deadly Sins by Linda Hoyland
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Larner
· 4 July 2011
· Chapter 7: Rise and Shine
A little R&R benefits everyone! And he has a good deal to be thankful for, and to enjoy right now!
Author's reply
Aragorn does indeed deserve to enjoy the fruits of his labours. Many thanks for all your much appreciated reviews,
Larner
· 4 July 2011
· Chapter 6: After the Famine
And these all deserve a good feed if anyone does! Wonderful images here.
Author's reply
Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed this.
Larner
· 4 July 2011
· Chapter 5: The Watcher
Ah, the epitome of lust! Poor Eowyn, to be the object of such demeaning desire, as if being "possessed" by such a creature would bring her any pleasure.
Author's reply
I always feel very sorry for what Poor Eowyn endured.
Larner
· 25 June 2011
· Chapter 4: Vengeance is mine -Wrath
Yes, his kinsman was avenged most fully; and those who came in that troop will never again rejoice in the fall of the foe as they themselves become the fallen.
Author's reply
Many thanks for reviewing. I always feel Halbarad was a sore loss to Aragorn.
Larner
· 25 June 2011
· Chapter 3: Left Wanting - Envy
Not the manner proper to one with two equally worthy sons, of course. And this envy is certainly understandable.
Author's reply
It was very sad that Denethor favoured one son over the other.
Larner
· 25 June 2011
· Chapter 2: Too much of a good thing
No, greed can lead to one's undoing,as the child has now learned most vividly! Excellent!
Author's reply
Thank you. I'm sure Eldarion will think twice in future!
Larner
· 25 June 2011
· Chapter 1: Insufferable Pride
Yet a pride worthwhile to hold. Each man needs roots, and the soil of Arnor was once very rich....
Author's reply
It was hard to associate sins with men like Aragorn and Faramir.I think Aragorn has just cause to be proud of his roots.
AzureSkye
· 17 June 2011
· Chapter 4: Vengeance is mine -Wrath
Hmm. Well, I'm glad the man is dead, but Aragorn needs to be careful. Look what happened to Eomer just a few hours before. Beautifully written as always.
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review.Yes, I agree Aragorn should be careful!
AzureSkye
· 17 June 2011
· Chapter 3: Left Wanting - Envy
Oh, for--grr. Can I strangle Denethor right now? To say that behind his sons back would have been one thing, but to bs face! Anyway, wonderful as always.
Author's reply
Yes, you are welcome to strangle Denethor right now! I'm pleased you enjoyed my drabble.
Laikwalâssê
· 17 June 2011
· Chapter 3: Left Wanting - Envy
poor, poor Faramir. I could never understand Denethor to make such a difference between his sons. Like this very much. Thank you. Lai
Author's reply
I feel scenes like this were all too likely for Faramir as he grew up. I'm pleased you enjoyed the drabble.
AzureSkye
· 4 June 2011
· Chapter 1: Insufferable Pride
So, now I have time to review properly. I'll review the second chapter over at fanfiction.net so as to not double review. Denethor ticked me off in this one. "I fear our splendor must quite overawe you." Condescending much?! Ooh, just because he didn't grow up in the southern kingdom...He grew up in the household of the Herald of Gil-galad! Gotta count for something. Wonderful as always!
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm delighted you enjoyed my drabble. I guess Denethor would be overawed if he saw where Aragorn grew up and met those he grew up with!
AzureSkye
· 4 June 2011
· Chapter 2: Too much of a good thing
I fear you posted the wrong one! I'm running out the door at the moment, but I will review the first chapter when I get home. Lovely work!
Author's reply
Thanks ever so much for telling me! I've posted the right one now. I'm pleased you liked my drabble.