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galathil · 27 July 2011 · Chapter 8: In Which There is Rebellion in the Ranks and a Trial is Held

Hi Fiondil. I have just read all the other reveiws and I agree with every one of them.So I am just dropping this line,to let you know that I am throughly enjoying the story. However if I was Namo I would take a long long holiday say for a hundred years,but then he would be missing out on all the fun.(or headache)depends on your point of veiw.LOL Galathil

Tkid · 27 July 2011 · Chapter 8: In Which There is Rebellion in the Ranks and a Trial is Held

Poor Finrod - with everything that has happened he can't be looking forward to the wedding. It has become something to endure rather than happily anticipate. His wedding guests snigger at him, and he can't trust the kitchen staff wih the menu - not if they are actively sabotaging his cooking efforts. And Glorfindel-it is no wonder he remained in middle earth as long as he did when he went back.

Erulisse (one L) · 27 July 2011 · Chapter 8: In Which There is Rebellion in the Ranks and a Trial is Held

OK, now I am confused. Marila. I seem to recall (and I'm tired, so I may not remember correctly) that she was the maia in charge of Nienna's kitchens. I suppose I could check my EI2 copy, but I'm already running behind on my errands for the day. Anyway, if that is the case, surely Glorfindel would recognize her from his time at Nienna's, and perhaps Vondo and Vorondil, although you do have them conveniently away on a camping trip. Also, you have Namo reminding the ellons about the destruction of the Lorien grove, but what about the Tournament and the dimensional shift. That was later than the grove, wasn't it? As I said, I may be remembering incorrectly, but... I adore the way this is developing. Now, maybe it's time to return to wedding planning... - Erulisse (one L)

Anonymous · 27 July 2011 · Chapter 8: In Which There is Rebellion in the Ranks and a Trial is Held

this outburst was to be expected and maybe intended. I can sympazise with Glorfindel but I feel sorry for Finrod. Isildil should be removed however, despite his abilities. Poor kitched stuff should he return. The "trial" was necessary to get both ellon back to the ground. Who is this Marilla? Eager to find out. Liled this chapter very much. Thank you. Lai

AzureSkye · 27 July 2011 · Chapter 8: In Which There is Rebellion in the Ranks and a Trial is Held

Well, I officially have my computer back, and have caught up, so I can start reviewing again! If Marilla is who I think she is, or even if she isn't, Glorfindel's frustrations where pushed to the fore on purpose. I suppose it was better resolved now, than causing trouble down the road. Glofindel and Finrod are just a little too alike to always get along. About that mountain tarn...Is it the same one from In Darkness Bound? The one in...oh,(runs to check reference) Chapter 25? Wonderful chapter as always. Can't wait to see how this little stint clears up, and what future trouble is down the road--especially when Sador gets there. *grin* I'm also mildly curious as to what the other elves listening to this tale are thinking....

Larner · 27 July 2011 · Chapter 8: In Which There is Rebellion in the Ranks and a Trial is Held

Isildil's own attitude probably was the reason he got the worst duties. As for his plans for revenge--that doesn't reflect well on his suitability as head cook. Poor guy didn't deserve the beating he got, but he certainly did deserve his comeuppance. But to learn that the others in the kitchen have been sabotaging Finrod's work is disheartening.

Sunny · 27 July 2011 · Chapter 8: In Which There is Rebellion in the Ranks and a Trial is Held

So it takes Námo having a little talk with the Dynamic Duo to get them to kiss and make up. But I suppose it was almost inevitable that the situation with the two of them would blow up in some way - and considering what they did to that grove in Lórien, who know what kind of damage they could have caused if they had started a fight somewhere in Tírion? The mind boggles. I can actually think about someone else who might benefit from one of Námo's little talks just about now - it's a real pity the Valar are only fictional.

Fantasia · 27 July 2011 · Chapter 8: In Which There is Rebellion in the Ranks and a Trial is Held

I only will say that planning a wedding makes everybody crazy. It gets so out of control and overcomplicated, no wonder they all are acting strange. Why the kitchen staff will treat Finrod in that way and the lesser nobles too? He is a prince after all, are they no afraid of his revenge? I really don't care what happens to the Royal Cook, what a cretin he is.

6336 · 27 July 2011 · Chapter 8: In Which There is Rebellion in the Ranks and a Trial is Held

Well that was a little unexpected, but knowing Glorfindel and his maturity issues it is understandable, he's only been reborn what, about 15 to 20 years at this time? One almost feels sorry for Isildil, he did do it to himslef though. As for the rest of the kitchen staff I am surprised at their attitude, why they should pick on Finderato in this way is beyond me, unless they are afraid that if and when Isildil gets his job back he will be even more unbearable. Shame on the rest of the population of the palace, to tease their Prince in this way is a little childish. I think Earwen should have tried to teach them embroidery, Lazy Daisy and Backstich are very easy after all and you can do a lot with just those two stitches and with their eyes on their work they would not have had the opportunity to glower at each other! Is Marilla related to Nienna's head cook? Huggs, Lynda

Kaylee Arafinwiel · 27 July 2011 · Chapter 8: In Which There is Rebellion in the Ranks and a Trial is Held

Well, things finally came to a head, didn't they? And at least Namo intervened. I should have known Marilla...or should I say (at a guess) Marilliën? *raises eyebrow at that* was not exactly a normal Head Cook...Well, there you go, that's my guess. :D I'm so glad Glorfindel's finally left off the "bassoneth" nonsense. And I do hope Marilla...ien...*tries the guess again* is more understanding to the ellyn now. Isildil's an idiot, by the way. *pokes him* Tye-melin, Atto! Kaylee P.S. I'm spending time with my Adar today. I need all the good wishes I can get. Assuming he stays in a good mood, we're to go see Deathly Hallows part 2 today. And he bought me a 20 dollar floor lamp at the thrift shop, because he decided I needed one. Ada is so weird, Atto. This is why I like you better. =P Though I do love him very much too, he just confuses me. You're not confusing like that.

Shemyaza · 27 July 2011 · Chapter 8: In Which There is Rebellion in the Ranks and a Trial is Held

Are we absolutely sure that either of these two are adult enough to join the grown up world? Especially Findarato who is on the point of marrying someone, possibly one of the most serious undertakings of his life. They are both acting like snot-nosed kids to be honest and a good slap around the earhole wouldn't come amiss. I am sure that the Valar really appreciate being dragged away to deal with their infantile histrionics. If Findarato really wanted to play a part in the wedding arrangments, which, let's face it, most blokes don't, then he should have got the various parents plus his intended together and told them so. The lad obviously doesn't have enough to do with his time. Perhaps he needs a few orcs to kill? Hard to believe that this lad was the King of Nargothrond and a foe of Melkor. Surely he's been out of Mandos long enough to have gained some sort of emotional stability?

Eliza · 27 July 2011 · Chapter 8: In Which There is Rebellion in the Ranks and a Trial is Held

I am suddenly very glad my teenagers are off to college. Poor Namo, he must have a roaring headache by now. No one can pull off "sulky" and "whiny" like a teen who feels they have been wronged. LOL, enjoyable as always.

Larner · 26 July 2011 · Chapter 7: In Which the Palace Gets a New Head Cook and Finrod Gets a New Title

Well, at least Finrod is now the equal of his sister! Heh! I'm certain she'll get a much enjoyed laugh out of it whenever Glorfindel tells her of it, whether it's here in the Mortal Lands or there in Aman. Ah, dear--a much needed light time, and I do find myself considering just who might have come under the name of "Pearl" to serve as head cook. And that Isildil is behaving as childishly as he is does not bode well for his chances at returning to his former glory, does it?

Larner · 26 July 2011 · Chapter 6: In Which Lies are Revealed and the Doom of Arafinwë Falls Upon Our Heroes

Not a wise idea, behaving as he did and assuming childish behavior from Finrod while responding like a spoiled brat himself. I almost hope he gets sacked for good! And it won't hurt any of them to serve on the bottom of the ladder for a while, which Finrod and Glorfindel know from the beginning.

Ta · 24 July 2011 · Chapter 4: In Which Information is Gathered and Further Plans are Made

The plot thickens. This is going to be one very interesting wedding. Even the Valar have to be chuckling.

Tari · 22 July 2011 · Chapter 3: In Which a Conspiracy is Formed and Plans are Laid

What fun!!! Can't wait to find out who the witness is.

Tigger · 21 July 2011 · Chapter 7: In Which the Palace Gets a New Head Cook and Finrod Gets a New Title

Mistress Marilla? You aren't an Anne of Green Gables fan are you by any chance? Just wondering...As that name is one of the major characters in one of my *other* treasured and beloved book series, my eyes lit up when reading last night. I've actually had the privledge of visiting Green Gables and in turn, visiting L.M. Montgomery's gravesite. I hope to have the same prviledge someday when it comes to visiting/paying my respects to the Professor's gravesite. Anyway... Poor Vorondil. He really is still having problems w/his confidence, isn't he the poor thing. Thankfully, he's "attached" to the right Family when it comes to treating those near and dear to them w/love and understanding. Loved how Finrod approched his Mother and how the Queen then in turn handled the entire situation. I think that little hair pin will end up being the best gift Her Majesty recieved that year and for many different reasons. :o) Glorfindel noticing how the Staff was *not* taking Isildil's dressing down of Finrod well...Why do I have the feeling that little fact will be filed away for future use? Arafinwe needs to know that after all, but I don't think Glorfindel will say anything until and unless he has to. It's also another sign in just what the overall feelings towards Isildil by his Staff is. As I said last week, people like that who are in charge, don't use the people under them well. If at all. I'm also sure that Isidil's uppitty insulted manner of recieving the Queen's praise, which was justified after the damage done by the Boys eariler and should have been recieved w/more grace, didn't go unnoticed either by the King. So, Isildi's been the Head Cook of one of the more sought after positions among the Eldar residences of Aman, yet he only has one star? Which he obtained on his Mastery and only then? Interesting...That to me says quite a bit right there. Or maybe it's just me seeing something that isn't there, but I don't think so... ;o) Love how Marilla took charge right away and how Isildil ended up being the one scrubbing the pots. I don't think Marilla would treat him the way he was treating Finrod however. Not that the twit'll see that. Oh and Finrod's right. Baking bread is *very* hard work. Kneading it...You discover shoulder muscles and ligaments you never knew you possessed before. :o) I just wish mine turned out like my Mom's. For some odd and unknown reason, I end up killing the yeast. I've tried and tried and she's even watched me do it, but...I still end up w/heavy bread that's better used for a door stop. :o/ I can also see Glorfindel eating every other Ginger Biscuit. I know I have a hard time myself not doing that when making Ginger Snaps, so... :o) So long as he takes some to Vondo, then it's okay. :oD As for the chase...Nothing to see here. Just the two of them being themselves. ;oD ROTFLOL!!! Glorfi had better hope Finrod doesn't catch him. After all, didn't Namo once say he'd just toss Glorfindel back out if he ever darkened Mandos again? Then Finrod would have to face Namo and I don't think he wants to do that again either. ;oD Sigh...I wish I and everyone else didn't have to wait until next Wednesday for the next chapter. So enjoying this so very much. Hope you're not suffering w/this wicked and wild heat that we here in Ontario are dealing w/. I never, ever, thought I'd see temps of 43 Celcius around here, but... Take Care!! (((HUGS)))

bookworm · 21 July 2011 · Chapter 7: In Which the Palace Gets a New Head Cook and Finrod Gets a New Title

Why do I have the feeling that Glorfindel will be eating as many ginger cookies as he bakes? Also I love how the palace staff have become so immune to their antics they just ignore them now. Looking forward to seeing more of Mistress Marilla too!

Alquawende · 20 July 2011 · Chapter 7: In Which the Palace Gets a New Head Cook and Finrod Gets a New Title

This has been quite fun to read. I do feel rather sorry for Isildil though because Finrod and his friends were interfering and did cause the mess. Isildil was just doing what he was told to do, even if he is rather a jerk. I do hope Finrod and Glorfindel suffer more than just a light, I think, punishment for their actions under the new head cook. When will Amarie appear in the story? I hope we get to see her soon. Thanks for writing, Fiondil!

6336 · 20 July 2011 · Chapter 7: In Which the Palace Gets a New Head Cook and Finrod Gets a New Title

Some how I don't think bashing pots and scrubbing floors is going to work with Isildil, I think he needs a stint with Nienna, she would soon knock him down to size! (Just realised this is a baking term!) I liked the way Finrod and Earwen handeled Vorondil's gift, he still has some esteem issues but, both he and his uncle are doing much better. I am glad Earwen is welcoming Finrod's help with wedding, it is his wedding and Amnarie's after all! I hope Glorfi can run fast enough otherwise he will end up cluttering up Mandos, again, Namo will not be amused! I take it calling him 'bassoneth' is equivalent to calling Finrod 'Hiril Finrod'? Huggs, Lynda

Sunny · 20 July 2011 · Chapter 7: In Which the Palace Gets a New Head Cook and Finrod Gets a New Title

So Vorondil's gift was appreciated. And I am certainly one who can certainly appreciate a good-looking hair ornament! ;-) Isildil's attitude of wanting to lord it over the rest of the kitchen staff - and Finrod and Glorfindel - certainly isn't particularly promising. The Dynamic Duo jumping in to start helping with clearing up after the feast shows considerably more promise! Hopefully they will be reasonably well behaved, but I suppose it will be too much to hope for that they will not take the opportunity for creating a bit of fun while doing kitchen work. Assigning the two of them to different tasks should help a bit with that. :-)

Erulisse (one L) · 18 July 2011 · Chapter 6: In Which Lies are Revealed and the Doom of Arafinwë Falls Upon Our Heroes

I finally returned home from my latest conference and am busy catching up with your chapters. Oh dear, they really managed to cause quite the fuss, didn't they? I suspect that the punishment will teach all concerned about the points of view of the opposite sides, and I hope that Finrod's desire to actually be an active participant in his wedding planning will be understood, and celebrated. It is important for him and Amarie both. I look forward to this coming Wednesday. Now to catch up with many chapters of In Darkness... - Erulisse (one L)

Tari · 18 July 2011 · Chapter 2: In Which Invitations are Sent and the Valar are Amused

Very wise is our Glorfindel. He couldn't have given a better gift to the Valar, but will Eärwen see it that way or will she become very upset.

6336 · 14 July 2011 · Chapter 6: In Which Lies are Revealed and the Doom of Arafinwë Falls Upon Our Heroes

You and your Muse should come with a warning label, Caution, reading this story could be hazardus to your sanity and your computer! Since every body seems to be intent on apologising to their Better Halfs for not letting them assist in the wedding plans, I had a good excuse, he was out of the country until the week before the wedding and even then he was most helpfull in gathering libations for it! I am enjoying this so much, since I did not get to help plan my daughters wedding, she eloped! (Little Stinker!) Now I have to wait another whole week for the next chapter, even though I.D.B. is coming faster, you and your Muse can be very cruel sometimes, making us wait like this, but, I love you any way! Huggs, Lynda

Serindë · 14 July 2011 · Chapter 6: In Which Lies are Revealed and the Doom of Arafinwë Falls Upon Our Heroes

Oh dear, oh dear. I had the feeling that the figure lurking in the shadows had to be the King. It was the royal garden after all, the gardeners were probably enjoying evening with their families and the Queen was to busy with all the wedding preparation. And a pale rose satin with yellow-green brocade? It is a nice combination, but for the groom? And moreover for the groom with Finrod's colouring? Whose bright idea was that? The balrog's? And the Queen has not still be informed to expect 14 additional guests at the wedding. And aran Finrod started a battle in the kitchen? It is something I would expect more from Glorfi. On the other hand, I suppose, it was better idea than the obvious solution - to mop the floor with the Cook. And where is the Cook coming from? He does not know Amarië's food preferences (she has been living in Tirion for long years) and he does not know the food preferences of the King? I originally thought that he was in the league with Arafinwë and he was winding up Finrod purposely. How can anybody be so stupid? I had the feeling that Finrod and co. would probably end in the kitchen for some time. They should not mind very much. Glorfi must be used from Turgon's times and I suppose Finrod did not have very much choice in the middle of grinding ice than to do everything which was needed. But embroidery? It could be classified as a cruel and unusual punishment. I can reasonably well do cross stitching, needle point and some pulled or counted embroidery (assisi, bargello, blackwork). I would like to start, thanks Glorfindel, some ribbon embroidery. It looks like a fun. So I have bought few books from Britain and my first kit combining cross stitch and ribbons from Russia (I had never heard about it previously and I have never met anybody doing it. I suppose because it was very difficult to buy even needles and some simple cotton yarns under the communist. To buy metallic yarns? Wishful thinking). But crewel, richelieu or needle painting are completely in different league. I have never learned it properly. Knowledge of basic sewing or even simple embroidery is no help here. So I think Glorfi underestimate the task. OK, Finrod could had been also more clever and instead saying that the Queen has sent him, he could had say something along the line that he would like to inform his wife-to-be ... so he would like to have the needed information. Or he could had simply informed his parents that a) they start to include him and his bride into planning of their own wedding or b) they can celebrate his wedding without him and his bride, because they two are going to have wedding according Sindars custom. The choice is theirs. I think Earwen will feel slightly guilty that she has not been listening to her son more attentively.