The Tower of the Cunning Mind by Larner

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Eirinn Leigh · 1 September 2015 · Chapter 4: The Treasure Unsought

This chapter is heartbreaking both in the news it delivers, and the brevity of unconcern in which it is delivered. Smeagols whole family, slaughtered. And without even information on how long after he left and how long before he briefly returned that this was found. When Gollum went into his family hole and stood before the door to the tomb but did not open it- Sarumon's men had already come and gone by then correct?

Author's reply

I am sorry it has taken so long to respond--I managed to miss this one. I suspect that Saruman's people found this smial perhaps only a few years before Bilbo's arrival at his lake stirred him to seek after the Thief who had Gollum's Ring in his pocket. The family Smeagol had known would undoubtedly be centuries dead themselves, but their descendants would have been easily slaughtered by Saruman's agents. I'll have to look again at when it was that it says in the Tale of Years that Saruman began to have the banks of the Anduin scoured in the region where Isildur was known to have died, but it would have been at that point the final slaughter of Smeagol's kin would have happened.

Raksha The Demon · 19 February 2012 · Chapter 3: How to Style Himself

So that's how Saruman got the idea of going multi-color! Really, he was rather vain; white was not good enough for him, or just maybe not his color. Perhaps, if the Valar had sent him to Middle-earth as Saruman the Orange, all that treachery with Sauron might have been avoided. Good work, as always; I am enjoying this look into Curumo's cunning mind.

Raksha The Demon · 19 February 2012 · Chapter 4: The Treasure Unsought

How sad, the final fate of Isildur's bones; to be found and most likely discarded by Saruman and his agents. One hates to think of Saruman hoarding the crown of Elendil and his son; but at least, at long last, it returned to Isildur's heir. Excellent piece that shows Saruman's villainy...

Soledad · 18 February 2012 · Chapter 9: A Parting Commanded

Despite the actually serious background, this was absolutely hilarious. *g* Hairdressing indeed...

Author's reply

Why these hairdressing prompts spoke to me of Saruman I'm not certain, but it was fun to find the theme doing so.

Tari · 5 August 2011 · Chapter 6: Cutting Remark

Up to mischeif again, is he? It's not surprising. I don't think he ever saw the error in his ways.

Author's reply

Oh, yes--Saruman lost a good deal of his former wisdom when he became so self-centered. Thanks so, Tari.

Teresa · 28 July 2011 · Chapter 7: Setting Conditions

Raises eyebrow.....confident, isn't he? It's rather ironic that the fate he chooses for Theoden and his people becomes his own. By the time Treebeard and Quickbeam are through with him he'd really need a soothing bath! After all that shower the Ents provided wasn't the pampering a spa would provide! Sauruman really threw all his wisdom and knowledge away when he joined the darkness. I wonder what his previous self would have thought of the later model? Many thanks for the vignette! :)

Author's reply

Yes, far too confident. And in this case, we can all be glad that his best laid plans gang aglay!

Ellynn · 28 July 2011 · Chapter 7: Setting Conditions

Well, well, he'll be surprised in the end, won't he? But I like how you describe his certainty of his victory in this drabble.

Author's reply

Oh, yes--it's neat to know that in spite of his misplaced confidence that it is for naught in the end. Thanks so much, Elynn!

Armariel · 17 July 2011 · Chapter 5: Worries Brushed Aside

I like the use of the beards in order to depict the contrasting mindsets of the two wizards.

Author's reply

Oh, I'm so glad you do. I thought each was typical for each. Thanks, Armariel!

Andrea · 15 July 2011 · Chapter 4: The Treasure Unsought

Oh yes, I remember your story about Gollum's family and how he came back to find his former home destroyed and empty. So, it was Saruman who sent the murderers? I'm not surprised about that! But I'm surprised about his conclusions regarding the prism experiment. It should be obvious that White is composed of all other colours. And therefore changing of single colours can never be a replacement for White. That's what Gandalf told him later, but I fear he never understood.

Author's reply

According to Unfinished Tales, Saruman sent agents to the Gladden Fields to search for the Ring, but instead they returned with the original Elendilmir and the locket in which Isildur carried the Ring, and these were found hidden in Orthanc by Aragorn and Gimli at some time between the end of the War and the visit to the Brandywine Bridge when Elanor was fifteen, at which time Aragorn gave one of the Elendilmirs to Sam. I'd read a few stories in which Smeagol's grandmother has Isildur's body and/or possessions, so decided to do my own take on it, although I couldn't imagine the good hobbitess drinking from Isildur's skull as one person did. That was how I came to write "No Going Back." So in my-verse, these agents were responsible for the massacre of Gollum's relatives who'd lived along the unnamed tributary to the Anduin, perhaps as they tried to force whoever was family head at the time to tell them what might have become of the Ring Itself. But you certainly right about Saruman and his conceits regarding himself as somehow superior due to his ability to break white light into other colors. No, he never understood what Gandalf was trying to tell him. Thanks so, Andrea!

Armariel · 14 July 2011 · Chapter 4: The Treasure Unsought

Oh my. Did I miss something? What is this Elendilmir, and how were hobbits slaughtered? Brrrrr!

Author's reply

Ah, Armariel, the Elendilmir, also known as the Star of Elendil, is one of my favorite artifacts within Middle Earth. Actually, there were two, which led to me beginning "Stirring Rings," which I swear I will return to once I'm done with my Big Bang project, which as usual has taken on a life of its own. In the "Tall Ships" lore poem, it says there were nine ships, seven stars, and seven stones that Elendil and his sons brought to Middle Earth from Numenor. The seven stars, as I understand them, were the jeweled diadems worn by princes of the Royal House in Numenor, and indicated that there were seven princes who came in the ships of the Faithful, of whom Elendil, Isildur, and Anarion were apparently three, with Elendil being the most senior and highest ranking one present. I suspect that the ancestor of Imrazor the Numenorean, whose descendants became the Princes of Dol Amroth, was one of those princes as well. When Elendil died in the final battle of the Last Alliance, Isildur took his father's diadem, the Elendilmir, and carried it with him, along with the shards of Narsil. He is said to have worn a locket in which he carried the Ring he'd taken from Sauron (he didn't wear It threaded on a chain as did Frodo and as was shown in the movies), and had the Elendilmir upon his person at the time of the attack at the Gladden Fields. He left behind the shards of Narsil, put on the Ring at his son Elendur's insisistence, and tried to elude capture while Elendur and his two next younger brothers and their men fought the orcs. But although he was invisible, he left a scent, and the orcs followed it and him to the Anduin. As he sought to swim to safety, the Ring expanded Itself and slipped from his finger, leaving him visible to the archers among the orcs, and one shot him in the back, killing him. When Saruman decided to search for the Ring for himself, he told the rest of the White Council that the Ring had been carried to the Sea by the river and was lost in its depths, but he still sent agents to the area of the Gladden Fields to search for It. Instead they returned with the original Elendilmir, which he stored in a hidden closet within Orthanc. Much of this is told in the Unfinished Tales. The Rod of Annuminas was the sign of kingship in Arnor as the Winged Crown was in Gondor; but the Elendilmir was also one of the heirlooms from Numenor that indicated Elendil's royal descent and marked him as the High King within Middle Earth. Elrond had a replacement diadem crafted for Isildur's surviving son Valandil, who having been but a child when the war started had remained with his mother in Imladris when his father, grandfather, uncle, and older brothers went to Mordor. It was this replacement Elendilmir that Aragorn wore as he joined the Battle of the Pelennor, and that he put off when the battle was over and he came into the city to begin the healing of those stricken with the Black Breath. In the Appendices it is indicated that once things had quieted down, Aragorn returned to Orthanc with Gimli and others to do a survey of the tower, and that they found Saruman's hidden closet and in it both Isildur's locket and the Elendilmir, indicating that somehow Saruman's agents had managed to find Isildur's remains and with it these two relics. When Aragorn came north to the finally rebuilt northern capital, he brought with him both Elendilmirs, and he removed one of the stones from one of them and gave it to Sam at the official greeting at the Brandywine Bridge, just before he took Sam, Merry, and Pippin and their families north with him to Annuminas. What Sam did with it I'm not certain, but I've seen tales written that he took it with him when he sailed to Tol Eressea himself. I wrote of the finding of Isildur's remains in "No Going Back," which is in the "Neath Anor, Ithil, and Gil" collection. And in this I sort of expand upon some of the details in that other story. Ah, now this response has grown in the telling! Aack! Beware tales about the Elendilmir--they have a tendency to expand!

Teresa · 14 July 2011 · Chapter 4: The Treasure Unsought

Hmmmmmmmm........so Saruman's investigations about the Ring led to the murder of Gollum's family. I remember Gollum saying that his grandmother had a beautiful treasure in her home. Will you tell us someday how the Elendimir got there? It looks as though Saruman's fall is progressing....sigh. If he's also using the palantir would Sauron be aware of him, and possibly influencing him? Then again, since he'd already decided to go for power Sauron might watch and be rather amused at what his old "friend" is up to. Many thanks for these vignettes! :)

Author's reply

I've already written how the Elendilmir came to be in a Hobbit smial along a tributary to the Anduin in "No Going Back," number 41 in the "Neath Anor, Ithil, and Gil" collection. I'm not certain yet whether or not he's been using the palantir, but he's definitely on a downhill slide now. And I suspect you're all to correct on Sauron's evaluation of his old comrade. And thank you for the comments!

eiluj · 14 July 2011 · Chapter 4: The Treasure Unsought

The treasure unsought -- Yes, what irony. And there's nothing worse than killing hobbits. [No, Saruman didn't do it himself, but he hired the sort of folk who did.]

Author's reply

Didn't find the Ring, but did find something else. And I can so easily imagine he chose to employ bully-boys from the start, leading to the loss of those families that returned to the Anduin valley. It was sort of cool to write something that works into my longer fic, "No Going Back" as this one managed to do.

eiluj · 12 July 2011 · Chapter 3: How to Style Himself

He would need no others of any hue -- Chilling.

Author's reply

Oh, I agree. He'd become so arrogant and dismissive of others by this time.

Armariel · 12 July 2011 · Chapter 3: How to Style Himself

I've thought his appearing in many colors symbolized his "getting above himself"...attempting to transcend the divine even, or give it his own definition. Break down the truth, and it is no longer truth.

Author's reply

Oh, love this evaluation of Saruman. And you are right that in trying to break down the truth we manage too often to destroy it. Thanks so, Armariel!

Armariel · 9 July 2011 · Chapter 2: Drinking It In

Just starting reading and looking forward to more of this. Fascinating.

Author's reply

Oh, glad you'll be following these, Armariel. Thanks!

harrowcat · 6 July 2011 · Chapter 2: Drinking It In

What a shame that he couldn't have stayed that way. I thank the Lord for my view every time I look out of my window - it is so green.

Author's reply

I agree--he was a good deal nicer before he let his new role as Lord of the Keep go to his head. And I love looking out my kitchen window to see deer cropping grass in my back yard, and to stand on the front porch and watch the bald eagles who live down the highway swooping over the property, or the owl doing so in the dusk.

Ellynn · 4 July 2011 · Chapter 1: His New Power Base

I love how you depict Saruman's greed. Perfectly done!

Author's reply

Oh, I'm so glad you enjoy it. Thank you so!

harrowcat · 3 July 2011 · Chapter 1: His New Power Base

I can empathise with his lust. Knowledge and time to persue it! Ah well, Summer is here and I might, finally have time to do some reading without fighting sleep! I enjoyed this a lot Larner. And I will return your e.mail soon I promise.

Author's reply

I can, also. Love my books--love my books! And thanks you so, Harrowcat!