Out of Darkness, Song by Mirach
Larner · 16 December 2011 · Chapter 1: Out of Darkness, Song
How perfect, Mirach! Love the contrast of the tapping of the slaves' hammers to that of the rain on the window, and the final realization that the nightmare is now over, and he is free and home again once more. And waking to his adar's presence was such a blessed relief and joy!
Author's reply
Thank you again! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Linda Hoyland · 13 November 2011 · Chapter 1: Out of Darkness, Song
You used the musical theme well here. Poor Aragorn!
Author's reply
Thank you very much! I used most of my ideas for the musical theme in "The Song in the Darkness", so I wanted to write something different - but at the end, it ended with almost the same title =)
Estelcontar · 11 November 2011 · Chapter 1: Out of Darkness, Song
I really liked this story. I think you did a great job of letting us feel Aragorn's plight without going into too much detail about his horrid experience. The poems were very well chosen too. It got one of my votes this month.
Author's reply
Thank you again! I'm really glad you liked it, and thank you for voting!
shirebound · 11 November 2011 · Chapter 1: Out of Darkness, Song
Oh my, how suspenseful! I was as relieved as Aragorn at the end. What a gentle awakening after such a fever.
Author's reply
Thank you very much! I'm gald you liked the story on the border of dream and reality, with many things just foreshadowed.