Kaylee Arafinwiel
· 8 September 2012
· Chapter 67: Back at Edhellond
Atto,
Sorry I haven't reviewed for ages and ages...in fact I'm not sure when I last reviewed :( But I have been reading the whole time. I've just had a very, very hectic summer, ending up sick quite a lot and then at one point heading off to Disneyland one weekend and a wedding the next! O.o Well, anyway, I'm sure you could tell me where to start off so I can catch up, but to sum up: Poor Alex! (Not that you don't hear that enough!) Poor Derek as well, though I think he's doing wonderfully at being a gwador to Alex - he's just what Alex needs.
And oh lord, what have you done introducing Valinorean elves to Wiseman without them being prepared? What have the Valar done, I should say? The Three Amigos, as they've been nicknamed, are the best of the lot of new characters, though I quite like Nell, too...although she could do without the arrogance. I wonder what Uncle Finda is going to do with his wayward niece...something more creative than smacking the arrogant child, I imagine, although he could go the Alassiel route...hehe, I wonder if she knows about that. If she did, she should have known better than to piss off Finrod.
Or Alex. Heh. Well, she's learned now, hasn't she?
Have I gone this whole review without mentioning Ratty? If he's not with the Agency, just what is up with him? Is he an agent of Helcaran (or whichever Maia is hanging around screwing things up these days, but I remember Helcaran being mentioned in one of your early stories)? Just what is up with him? And where's Maddy? WHAT IS GOING ON?!?!?! *headdesk* Sorry, Atya, not screaming at you, just really confused and wanting to be in the loop. :P I imagine Alex and Derek feel the same way!!!
More Nate and Esther soon, please? Oh, and Manwe as Santa's friend was great before. Will he be coming back? :D
I wonder how the Three Amigos will do shadowing the other students - I must say, I was impressed that they behaved as well as they did in the language lesson. Speaking of language lessons, it's about time the other Valinorean Elves got rid of the 'haths' 'thous' and so on. :P
(And speaking of that, I posted some fics on "The Lizard Council", a Proboards site for constructive criticism and writing workshop type stuff. Huinare set me straight on the usage of "-est/-st" vs. "-eth/-th" when dealing with "thou" vs. "you". I got the usages mixed up a few times, and I think I'll do better now it's sorted out.)
On a personal news note, Wednesday before last, my Ada and I went to the chiropractor so we could have examinations done. My spine is pretty bad, and Ada's isn't great either. Last week we had our first adjustments, and we'll be going every Wednesday for 24 more weeks.
...That means I have to see Ada every Wednesday for nearly 6 more months. *headdesk*
Well. Perhaps after our treatments have progressed far enough, it might iron out some of his attitude problems, considering the pain is probably a big part of it. And I'll have less stress on me, so maybe I won't be as affected by him. What do you think, Atya?
All right, I'm rambling now so I'll leave it there. I hope I will be able to review more often. *huggles Atto Fiondil* I've missed you :( Please forgive me for my long absence!
Tye-melin tenn'Ambar-metta,
Kaylee
Author's reply
Hi Kaylee. As I said to another reviewer, summers are pretty busy for lots of people and they tend not to review even if they are reading. Usually reviews pick up once school starts and the summer fun is gone.
Anyway, we'll see what kind of punishment Finrod comes up with for Nell and we'll see what Farrell is all about by the end of the story. There's still quite a bit more to tell, though we are coming to the end of this sequel at least. Whether there's another remains to be seen. It wouldn't surprise me if there were though we eon't see it anytime soon.
However, all that aside, we'll be seeing more of Nate, if not Esther or Manwë, and we'll see how the Three Amigos do in shadowing Alex and Derek on their final exams.
Good luck with the chiropractor. I hope the treatments help both you and your dad. Tye-melin.
Calenlassiel
· 7 September 2012
· Chapter 66: The Enemy Within
Great Chapter... I like the idea of the Valar and the Mair not spilling the beans.. However, would it kill them to leave Alex and Derek some beer or some other small gift to lift their spirits..
I am loving this story...
Author's reply
Hi Calenlassiel. I'm glad you are enjoying this story and I appreciate you letting me know. As for leaving Alex and Derek some beer or other small gift to lift their spirits.... ah, well, even they can't think of EVERYTHING! LOL!
Fantasia
· 7 September 2012
· Chapter 67: Back at Edhellond
I haven't review for ages, I've been so busy....and when did Erestor and Lindorillë popped out? didn't remember them,and they are married! Fiondil, you have so much to tell in your stories...and where is Legolas, I always thought that he will be close to the twins and Glorfindel...
As it always happen in your stories, I like the three amigos now and find another one to dislike, Nielluin. That is one of the reasons I like read your stories, there are so many twists, plots, characters and as real life, nothing is black and white, a lot of shades of grays...
Thanks and read you Monday...
Author's reply
Hi Fantasia. Summer is a busy time for many people. I'm glad you are still reading even if you're not able to reivew all that time. With the Valinórean Elves, I am sort of introducing them a little at a time and mostly just mentioning their names. With so many it's impossible to list them all. So, Erestor and Lindorillë are mentioned here for the first time. We'll see something of Legolas of Mirkwood (as opposed to Legolas of Gondolin) in a later chatper..
The Three Amigos are becoming more likeable and Nielluin needs a few more lessons in diplomacy. And you're right, there is no black and white in my stories, but subtle shades of gray, which is true of real life. Even my villians are never depicted as entirely black, just as none of my heroes are entirely white. The two extremes are rather boring to write about and in fact there is nothing to write about them, since they are absolutes. Where it gets interesting is in the inbetween of moral ambiguity. That's where the action is both for a writer and a reader.
Anyway, thanks for taking the time to reivew. I greatly appreciate it.
Kitty
· 7 September 2012
· Chapter 67: Back at Edhellond
Martial arts classes for the new Elves sound like a good idea. They can't rely on their swords any longer, after all, or only in limited circumstances.
Interesting day for the three amigos – watching a movie has to be quite the experience for them *grin*
Completely agree with Glorfindel here – it's way too early to teach the new Elves driving, and even more so in winter in Alaska. God knows I've had enough problems driving here in Germany sometimes, and the snow here can't be anywhere as bad as in Alaska. And I've got over 20 years of experience!
Nielluin doesn't have that much tact, huh? It was surprising that Finda even got what she did wrong. But then, maybe not. After all, he was spending a lot of time around Alex and Derek and the others, and even if he only really got to know these two, I guess he got a good idea of when to keep his mouth shut. And I was impressed with what he said about Alex not wanting to be a guide, but admiring him for going through with it anyway.
Finrod is right, the new Elves aren't prepared very well to live in our world. Their lack of knowledge about modern day technology is bad enough, but add the language problem and all that, and it gets really bad. And they don't really have time to teach them even such simple basics, but they don't have a choice.
Author's reply
Hi Kitty. I'm sure that when the Three Amigos tell the others about the movie, everyone will want to go see it. *grin*
I live in the snowbelt myself and even after almost 40 years of winter driving I still hate and dread it. I actually took my driver's test in winter. I still don't know how I managed to pass on the first go.
Well, anyway, the Wiseman Elves have their work cut out for them in getting their friends from Aman up to speed about modern day life and technology. I don't envy them.
Thanks for leaving a comment. I am most appreciative.
Kitty
· 7 September 2012
· Chapter 66: The Enemy Within
While Derek shouldn't have yelled at them, I can understand him. Alex is his gwador, he cares for him deeply, and to watch what is happening can't be easy. So far he took everything in stride, but it was probably only a matter of time until he snapped.
At least Námo made it more clear why the Maiar won't interfere in most cases, maybe that helps a bit to settle things. Alex really chose the right time to come back ... but I was rather shocked about what he said. Last chapter I was so pleased that my suspicions about Farrell were true, and now you are telling me it might not be true and leave me hanging again with this? *mutters something about evil authors*
Well, at least Derek feels better now ... and I never doubted that he would stay. He just needs a break from all that stress, and he's not the only one.
Author's reply
Hi Kitty. Sorry about Farrell. There's more than one type of mind game being played here and we'll learn more about that and him eventually. As I keep say, nothing is as it seems.
Derek was overdue for a blow up. Hopefully now that the air has cleared a bit, things will be better. Alex's problem is that he's been playing the loner card for so long he's forgotten what it means to be a team player, hence his disregard of Derek in not telling him where he was going and why.
Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it very much.
Sunny
· 7 September 2012
· Chapter 67: Back at Edhellond
The Three Amigos clearly had fun getting tossed about by Amroth and Vorondur. And learning unarmed combat lets them do something warriorly without breaking the "no weapons" stricture. And they need to get used to not toting swords around anyway. Also good to see that they are starting to like and respect Alex and Derek.
Nielluin clearly needs to work on her compassion, and her attitude of "Mortals die all the time, so why bother getting upset about it" is definitely not one that will fly if she wants to blend in!
So classes are over at the Elf Academy, but are clearly going to start at Edhellond. The newcomers have a lot to learn! And if they are going to get used to dealing with Mortals, perhaps the Wiseman Elves are going to call on some of their Mortal friends to help with that? That would have the added benefit of the newcomers getting used to being around Mortals (and those who have previous experience, it gets them used to _modern day_ Mortals!)
Author's reply
Hi Sunny. Yeah, learning unarmed defense will be helpful when swords are not available and seeing Alex and Derek in their everyday life, they are learning more about what Mortals are all about, so they are learning to respect them and their abilities. Nell, of course, really needs a lesson in compassion, but I suspect that she is not alone in her thinking; other Elves (not necessarily those who are now residing in Edhellond, but many of Aman who have never known any Mortal) probably have similar thoughts.
I think eventually the Wiseman Elves will call upon their Mortal friends to help out in integrating the Valinórean Elves. Perhaps some of them will even help teach them how to drive. *grin*
Anyway, thanks for leaving a comment. It's always appreciated.
Larner
· 7 September 2012
· Chapter 67: Back at Edhellond
Now, dealing with Galadriel's daughter would indeed be an interesting situation, as she has not had yeni of congress with mortals and half-mortals to temper her perceptions as happened with her much older sister, who after all has not lived with her parents for far longer than she's been alive, probably. Interesting arguments here, but ones that were bound to come up.
Author's reply
No, Nell has much to learn about dealing with Mortals and how to temper her perceptions. And I imagine Finrod and the others are feeling as if they aren't getting integrated quickly enough to be effective, hence their desire to learn to drive and so on. Glorfindel, though, is correct in saying that it's going to take time and they have to go slow. Learning how to speak modern English will help with the integration. Thanks for leaving a review, Larner. It's much appreciated.
6336
· 7 September 2012
· Chapter 67: Back at Edhellond
Oh, goodness I hate to think what the premiums would be for their car insurance if they start teaching 20 some odd Elves how to drive! I can understand Glorfindel's reluctance to teach them how to drive in snow, it's bad enough on dry roads, let alone wet or icy!
Something tells me Nell is going to be a problem until she looses her disdain for Mortals. I am waiting to see which page of his book Finrod uses! Though I think the flat of his hand on her rump might be a better answer, something Nana and Ada should have done many years ago! Ooo! Ooo, I know have him do to Nell what he did to Allasiel(sp?) in E.I.
I think Glorfindel is feeling a little overwhelmed, it might have been better if the Valar had not sent as many as they did, three or four new Elves would not have been a problem, a smaller number would have been so much eaiser to blend in, not a whole clan!
Now to set up history and language lessons for the Valainorian Elves and figure out some way for Glorfi to sit in the snow with out getting his butt wet!
Good one Fiondil,
Huggs,
Lynda
Author's reply
Hi Lynda. Yeah, can you just see Glorfindel trying to teach Finrod how to drive and keeping his eyes closed all the time? LOL!
Nell has a lot to learn, especially how to be a bit more tactful. We'll see what Finrod does with her soon enough.
You may be right about Glorfi feeling overwhelmed, but he's been there before so he should do alright and at least he now has Finrod as backup.
Thanks for leaving a comment. I always appreciate you doing so.
UTfrog
· 7 September 2012
· Chapter 67: Back at Edhellond
Excellent chapter. I am glad to see you are dealing with the enormous differences of modern times vs what the elves remember. Taking the rest of the elves to the movies might be useful. I certainly cannot imagine what the Valar were thinking in sending unprepared allies. Everyone including the mortals has so much to learn. It does keep everyone busy.
Do I dare hope that Alex and Derek's final exams will be as interesting as those in the first book?
Author's reply
Hi UTfrog. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. There's a lot of work to be done in getting the new Elves integrated into Wiseman. And we'll see something of Alex and Derek's final exams. Thanks for commenting. I greatly appreciate it.
someone
· 7 September 2012
· Chapter 67: Back at Edhellond
Strange, it seems that the three Amigos are in fact sensible, at least compared to Nielluin. And Erestor is married! Does he have children, too?
What is going on in the Agency sounds alarming, for there is now no way to know who is reading Alex' emails. I'd really like to know how many agents there are actually in Wiseman and who is controlling them in reality.
Author's reply
Hi Someone. Well, the Three Amigos have had a bit more exposure to Mortals than Nielluin. I have no idea if he has any children. Maybe someday we'll find out.
As for what's going on in the Agency, only time will tell.
Thanks for reading and revewing. It's much appreciated.
Tari
· 5 September 2012
· Chapter 66: The Enemy Within
I do hope the mortals take the wisdom of the Elves and Vala to heart as it would definetly benefit them to do so. And no, we absolutley to not whant to give up our freedoom. Ever!
Author's reply
Hi Tari. I'm sure the mortals will as it's to their best interest to do so. And freedom is too precious a gift to give up. Thanks for leaving a comment. I appreciate it very much.
bookworm
· 3 September 2012
· Chapter 66: The Enemy Within
Wow I'm glad the usual time I check means I usually get two chapters at once from you, or I would have started this with "FARRELL ISN'T REAL?!?" As it is tho, whoof, Derek, don't rouse the dragon! Poor guy's had a lot on his plate, and seems Alex vanishing & then coming back the way he did was the last straw. Am glad that he decided to stay, although, based on his character, he was always going to, wasn't he? Alex/Ambrose is one of his precious people. And now the revelations about Farrell and the Agency! The game's afoot, I see. As always, you are a mean mean writer, dangling us tidbits like that! =D Looking forwards to the next update!
Author's reply
The game's afoot, indeed, bookworm, and we'll see what game it is soon enough. Things are not what they seem to be (are they ever?). Anyway, Derek needed to vent and Námo was the right person to help him through his anger at Alex. I think things will be better between them now. Alex has learned a valuable lesson as well.
Thanks for reviewing. It's much appreciated.
6336
· 3 September 2012
· Chapter 66: The Enemy Within
Erm, can I get a map please? This story is going off in so many directions I am not sure just where I am!
I see the Valar and Mair where being their usual charming, helpful selves, not!
Namo is right though, in every war there are casualties, the worst are the innocents, the ones who have no idea that there is a war and what it is being faught(sp?) for!
Something to think about at work today!
Good one Fiondil,
Happy Labor Day,
Huggs,
Lynda
Author's reply
Hi Lynda. But they eventually come back to the center, so don't worry. It'll all be tied together, more or less, by the end. And the Valar and Maiar are being as helpful as they are allowed by Eru. And the innocents are always the first casualties in any war, unfortunately.
Happy Labor Day and thanks for taking the time to review. I really appreciate.
Larner
· 3 September 2012
· Chapter 66: The Enemy Within
Things do appear to be rather overwhelming at the moment, so I can appreciate the frustration building to anger that everyone's tending to. Now, to find out who it is that's playing with emails, and who in the dickens is sponsoring Farrell.
Author's reply
The frustration and anger had long been growing and Alex's little stunt has set it off. Now that the air has cleared a bit, things should be better between Alex and Derek. As for who is playing with emails and who is sponsering Farrell, those questions will be answered eventually. Thanks for commenting, Larner. I really appreciate it.
Sunny
· 3 September 2012
· Chapter 66: The Enemy Within
Oookay - I suppose Derek was about due for a bit of temper - his life hasn't been quite as stressful as Alex', but it also hasn't been a picnic by any means. Ans while it was good that Alex hadn't gone round the bend after all and gone hunting Farrell, the e-mail that supposedly was from Alex' alternate contact in the agency has opened up a can of really nasty worms. Clearly someone with some really nasty plans is behind Farrell, the termination orders for Amroth and no doubt a number of other things as well.
Good that Derek chose the stranger, brighter and darker reality. He will no doubt be needed.
I wonder, now that everyone is counting down to Dagor Dagorath (even if they don't know it), is Námo enjoying these little breathers in Wiseman, and away from his job in Mandos? If it is so late, presumably fëanor and those of his sons who are with him, plus the other permanent residents of the Elven parts of his halls are no doubt making his life even more interesting than Finrod and Glorfindel together ever managed. ;-)
Author's reply
Hi Sunny. Yeah, he was overdue, if you ask me. *grin* We'll find out what all this is about by the end of the story, I promise.
You may be right about Námo. He probably thinks dealing with the Elves and Mortals of Wiseman a bloody holiday. LOL!
Thanks for leaving a comment. It's always appreciated.
obsidianj
· 3 September 2012
· Chapter 66: The Enemy Within
Wow! This chapter took an unexpected left turn. Derek finally lost it. I think it was a long time in coming. He was too calm in taking it all in. Although, he surprised me. And Farrell might be a 'victim' and not the enemy??? Huh, that's something to think about. You turned all my expectations upside down with this chapter. Can't wait for Friday.
Author's reply
Hi obsidianj. Yes, a rather unexpected left turn. Derek has been pretty cool so far, but events are catching up with him and Alex doing a bunk has really scared and angered him. Hopefully, now that the air has cleared, he'll be fine. And often our 'enemies' are as much victims as any. Thanks for commenting. It's much appreciated.
UTfrog
· 3 September 2012
· Chapter 66: The Enemy Within
What a dramatic opening to a whole new plot line! Lots to think about while waiting on the next chapter. I so love the way you write Namo. He feels very real.
Author's reply
Hi UTfrog. Yes, very dramatic. I'm very glad you like how I write Námo and how real he seems to you. That is high praise that every writer hopes for. Thanks for letting me know. I really appreciate it.
Kitty
· 1 September 2012
· Chapter 65: The Three Amigos Go to College
Hm, a tracker isn't as bad as what I had feared, but still, it's suspicious.
Oh, it has to be very hard for the Elves to listen to these language lessons without saying anything or laughing. Good on the three Amigos that they didn't just laugh about the Mortals. They are really improving – as is their English; I notice how they keep correcting themselves. Well done!
The Elves writing a book about their adventures over the millennia sonds like a great idea. I'd certainly subscribe!
To explain Santa to the Elves who have no concept of mortal beliefs would certainly be a difficult thing. Maybe Glorfindel and the others can try later. And the letters had to be really confusing, they probably didn't understand much further than 'doll' or some other age-old toys. But the modern day electronics and what comes with them ...?
Oh, I knew it, Farrell is not from the Agency! This once I was far ahead of Alex – I suspected something like that as far ago as chapter 27. Now I just want to know who he really is – some son or other relative of the guy Amroth had to kill to get away? Or someone Amroth once crossed?
But where on earth is Alex, and why had he to run off without telling anyone?? Or was he kidnapped? Though it doesn't sound like a struggle happened in the room. Why do you have to leave us with that sort of cliffhanger all the time?
Author's reply
Hi Kitty. Well, a tracker's not as bad as a bomb but it is bad enough.
I think the Three Amigos get points for not laughing out loud at the Mortals atempting to speak Sindarin, especially at Alex's gaffe. And, yes, I think trying to explain Santa and the letters would be difficult when these particular Elves have no cultural background with which to compare it.
As for Farrell, all I will say is that nothing is as it seems and we'll see that in the nexr chapter, as well as learn what happened to Alex.
Thanks for taking the time to review. It's much appreciated.
Kitty
· 1 September 2012
· Chapter 64: After the Game
What I have read about Rugby so far suggests it's rather violent, yes. Not exactly my cup of tea, either.
*sigh* Somehow I had a feeling Farrell would turn up, but in this case I can't say I am happy to be right. Nice how Derek went straight to defend Alex! He's really a dear. As for the loggers ... for some reason I had to think of the first attempt of the Valar to go around as Elves (with all the hilarious, if somewhat damaging consequences) and suspect that they were in truth either Valar or Maiar.
Ah, it was to be expected that 'Nate' showed up again. He loves that Café, does he? His remark about what would have happened if the three ellyn died left me grinning. It would have kept him a bit busy, at least ;)
Hm ... what did Farrell do with the car this time around??
Author's reply
Hi Kitty. I couldn't honestly tell you if the loggers were Maiar in disguise or just loggers who didin't like Farrell's attitude and decided to step in. In the end, it hardly matters, since the result is the same: Farrell leaving. And 'Nate' is pretty cool whenever he shows up. I think Námo gets a kick out of playing him.
Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it.
obsidianj
· 1 September 2012
· Chapter 65: The Three Amigos Go to College
Oh, no. I knew the peace and quiet couldn't last. I got a sinking feeling when Alex left the table alone. So, who (or what?? is Farrell. He seems to be more dangerous than anyone expected. If he doesn't work for the Agency all bets are off.
You were lulling us into believing for a change, they can attend classes as 'normal' students, and then you drop the bomb. Nasty cliffhanger *grin*. But I love it.
Author's reply
A nasty cliffhanger, indeed, obsidianj, but I'm glad you love it. LOL! Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate it very much. As for Farrell, we'll learn what he's really about eventually. Things are not quite as they seem on the surface as we'll see in the next chapter.
obsidianj
· 1 September 2012
· Chapter 64: After the Game
So, Farrel is back... and nasty as ever. Loved Derek's confrontation of him. He is a true friend to Alex. Luckily for our friends, the Valar and Namo especially are looking out for them. Loved the 'incognito' dress of Nate. Derek is pretty cool when meeting Namo for the first time. Or didn't he realize who that might be and just thought there is something odd about this guy because of the reaction of the elves and Alex?
Alex is in shock about meeting Farrel so out of the blue or he would have thought about being careful with his car on his own.
Author's reply
Hi obsidianj. Yes, Farrell is back and as nasty as ever. Derek is pretty cool here and we see him at his best. I think he sort of knew who "Nate" was but he appears so ordinary compared to how the Maiar, especially Eönwë, appeared, that he doesn't feel as threatened by Námo's presence as he probably would be if Námo showed up in all his glory.
And Alex is indeed in shock.
Thanks for taking the time to read and reivew. It's much appreciated.
Sunny
· 1 September 2012
· Chapter 65: The Three Amigos Go to College
So not a bomb - or even brakes that were tampered with. "Only" a tracer. It makes me wonder when Farrell put it on the car, though.
That Sindarin class must have been extremely amusing for the three young Elves - but at least the managed to appear ignorant of the language. It must have been hard, though, especially when Alex made his mistake - whatever it was.
A nice, quiet chapter, which means that probably all hell will break loose in the next - especially given the e-mail Alex got. So Farrell is not with the Agency?? And here he has presented himself as being a senior agent there, really putting the squeeze on Alex, and even giving Alex termination orders for Amroth. So has Alex now gone off the deep end?
Author's reply
Hi Sunny. Yes, one does have to wonder how long the tracer has been there.
I'm sure the Three Amigos were biting the inside of their cheeks raw to keep themselves from laughing, but they did a very good job of playing at being ignorant.
As for just who Farrell is and where Alex went, we'll find out something of that in the nexr chapter. And you're right, all hell will break loose but not necessarily from the direction one would expect.
Thanks for commenting. I appreciate it very much.
Clouded Leopard
· 31 August 2012
· Chapter 65: The Three Amigos Go to College
The question is "What is Farrell up to?". Alex should be lucky is wasn't a bomb and only a tracer.
The Three Amigos seemed to have had a good time going to class with Alex and Derek. Listening to the other students attempting their language was probably amusing to them but they were polite enough not to laugh and embarrass the ones trying to learn. And it looked like they found the Nature Studies class worth while. Hopefully the Three Amigos will get their weapons back soon. They seem to be behaving well and learning more about how the mortals of this world live.
I hope Alex hasn't gone and done something foolish by going after Farrell without back up. Or is it possible he was taken without so much as a fuss? I hope the others find him quickly if he is in trouble.
Another good chapter that's a cliff hanger. Have a nice Labor Day Weekend.
Author's reply
Hi Clouded Leopard. That is the question of the hour, isn't it? We'll learn the answer to that soon enough.
Yes, the Three Amigos seem to be shaping up and willing to learn from the Mortals around them. We'll see if and when they get their swords back by the end of the story. For now, they still have a ways to go before they have proven themselves worthy of having their swords returned to them
We'll find out what Alex did in the next chapter. Thanks for taking time to leave a review. It's greatly appreciated. Have a nice holiday weekend yourself.
Larner
· 31 August 2012
· Chapter 65: The Three Amigos Go to College
Now, THIS is a most interesting turn of events. Who is this guy, then, and why is he after Alex and the Elves? And just who is his sponsor?
(Biting knuckles, as I have no fingernails left!)
Author's reply
Very interesting, Larner, and it gets more interesting as the story continues. As to who Farrell is and why he is there, we'll learn about that eventually. Thanks for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it very much.
Tari
· 31 August 2012
· Chapter 65: The Three Amigos Go to College
Why am I not surprised to find out that Farrell is not part of the FBI? He is totally evil and would not fit the quallifications of an agent.
Author's reply
Hi Tari. Well, Farrell isn't a member of the FBI although he is a member of a government intelligence agency. Obviously he's working outside accepted parameters and we'll learn why before the story ends. Thanks for reviewing. It's much appreciated.