Antane
· 31 March 2013
· Chapter 4: Shadowfax, Prince of Horses
Happy Easter, dear cousin! Christ is Risen! He is truly Risen!
Nice last two chapters. Keep them coming! I will hold onto the hope you gave me that more of the other will be coming and I do want all to be right so I will wait.
Namarie, God bless, Your bloom and berry :)
Author's reply
Hello m'dear!
And a belated Happy Easter to you, too. Felicitations and great joy!
Am delighted you continue to enjoy the new drabbles. They are a pleasure to write (mainly because they're so short, admittedly!).
Thanks for R & R-ing, and all the very best, cousin mine!
Mrs -G- ;)
Linda Hoyland
· 30 March 2013
· Chapter 4: Shadowfax, Prince of Horses
This drabbles are lovely. I really enjoyed reading them and recalling the unsung heroes. Especially enjoyed those about Bill and Shadowfax.
Author's reply
Hello Linda Hoyland,
there were so many brave horses and valiant creatures that defended ME alongside the humans/elves/dwarves/etc, that - as an animal lover - it seemed only right to honour some of them. I'm glad you're enjoying the series. I particularly liked hearing who your favourite two drabbles were about: Bill's & Shadowfax. From sweet and humble to majestic and kingly - it makes a lovely contrast!
Thanks for R & R-ing,
M ;)
Andrea
· 27 March 2013
· Chapter 4: Shadowfax, Prince of Horses
'Urgent need' his hoof!
LOL!!! This is great! Why did the word "diva" suddenly come into my mind? ;-)
Author's reply
Hello Andrea,
why did 'diva' come to mind? Because Shadowfax was being one. Eat your heart out Diana Ross!
Thanks for R & R-ing, m'dear.
M ;)
Larner
· 26 March 2013
· Chapter 4: Shadowfax, Prince of Horses
Oh, but I love this one! He'll walk if there are any trolls, eh? Don't blame him! Heh!
Author's reply
Hello Larner,
carting a wizard around who was seemingly determined to throw himself into the worst hotspots in Arda couldn't have been any fun, eh? Still, Shadowfax is a meara - and not just any old meara at that! I'm sure he laughed often in the face of danger himself.
Just so long as there were no boulder-chucking trolls involved ...
Thanks for R & R-ing,
M ;)
PS: I tried several times to leave a review for Chapter 57 (A Moment of Light) of your Another Moment of your Time frodo-centric fics, but regardless of how often I clicked on the 'Leave Review' button, or how quick, hard/soft I tried to click said button, it just wouldn't let me, even though I was logged in. I even (rather craftily, I thought) navigated to the Chapter List page, then worked my way down every chapter, clicking on each one and scrolling to the bottom of the page to see if it would let me leave a review. Again no joy.
So, let me just tell you now that I thought 'A Moment of Light' was poignant, wonderfully vivid and beautifully poignant. Poor wee Frodo ...
*sniffle, sob*
M ;)
Author Reply: I said 'poignant' twice. What a numbskull! I meant to say'descriptive' the first time, because you have such a gift for it!
M ;)
shirebound
· 25 March 2013
· Chapter 4: Shadowfax, Prince of Horses
I love the idea of Shadowfax having a sense of humor, and a mind of his own.
Author's reply
Hello shirebound,
it was hard to resist the temptation to portray him as the noble, heroic Lord of the Mearas.
Hard, but not impossible ...
Thanks for R & R-ing,
M ;)
Andrea
· 25 March 2013
· Chapter 3: Asfaloth
Ivory outpaced ebony as Asfaloth streaked along the last lap of the Road
Great image! I like it very much.
And what a contrast! It seems that Asfaloth still has a large amount of energy available and can't wait to fool them more.
Author's reply
Hello Andrea,
I'm glad you like that line in particular. Initially I thought it might seem a bit too pretentious, but the contrast between the shining purity of Asfaloth and the corrupted steeds of the Riders' won out in the end. I do feel really sorry for the wraiths' horses, though - those once-magnificent beauties should be grazing safely on the lush plains of Rohan, not carrying the foulness of Mordor on their backs.
Poor wee horses!
Thanks for R & R-ing,
M ;)
Larner
· 24 March 2013
· Chapter 3: Asfaloth
And well he did! Bless the Elf horse, bearing such an important rider!
Author's reply
Hello Larner,
a precious burden indeed! And a very blessed horse - his best pal was the very dishy Glorfindel ...
THanks for R & R-ing,
M ;)
shirebound
· 24 March 2013
· Chapter 3: Asfaloth
harness bells rang in wild defiance of screeching Riders
I like your imagery. You say so much with so few words!
Author's reply
Hello shirebound,
thanks very much. That particular line gave me problems, because I wanted to write 'melodious defiance' (in contrast to the unearthly screeches of the Nine). But in the book, they're described at that point as being 'wild and shrill', and to use melodious when they were clearly anything but (at that point) might've seemed like downplaying the gravity of the situation too much.
*shrugs*
Still, I'm glad the alternative worked as well for you as it did! Thanks for R & R-ing,
M ;)
Lindelea
· 24 March 2013
· Chapter 3: Asfaloth
Ah, yes, Asfaloth! Well drawn, especially his determination and defiance.
Author's reply
Hello Lindelea,
he is a remarkable steed, isn't he! Just wish PJ had had Glorfindel riding him in the films ...
*sigh*
Thanks for R & R-ing,
M ;)
Antane
· 23 March 2013
· Chapter 2: Gwaihir the Windlord
Another sweet little vignette, my dear cousin! It is nice to see you around a little more often. Hope springs eternal that more will be coming. :)
Namarie, God bless, Your bloom :)
Author's reply
Hello smelly bloom,
I was going to tyoe fragrant bloom, but 'smelly' made me smile more ...
*chortles*
It's nice to be seen, I must admit, though you might still have a wait on your hands for a new chapter of you-know-what. That fic demands more attention than I can give it just now, and I'd rather not make a mess of it in my haste to post a new chapter. Rest assured that I shall get back to it, though! Glad you're enjoying these wee offerings in the meantime!
Thanks for R & R-ing, cuz.
M xx
Lindelea
· 23 March 2013
· Chapter 2: Gwaihir the Windlord
You paint such vivid pictures in my mind, with your unkempt figure gesticulating wildly, and the silent soaring... Thanks!
Author's reply
Hello again Lindelea!
Well I'm really pleased you're enjoying the drabbles so far. And the choice of words :o)
Thanks very much for R & R-ing,
M ;)
Lindelea
· 23 March 2013
· Chapter 1: Almost Bill the Pony
I love your way with words. raised a fist which flowered open and Bill-to-be are wonderful turns of phrase!
Author's reply
Hello Lindelea,
thanks very much! Did Bill(-to-be) some good to see a raised fist in a positive light. At least we know he'll always be happy from then on.
Well, apart from that infamous flight from the Ring-wraiths. And the equally frightful encounter with those hungry wargs at Moria ...
Ahem.
Thanks for R & R-ing,
Kara's Aunty ;)
Kevana
· 22 March 2013
· Chapter 2: Gwaihir the Windlord
What a fantastic idea for a series! Sweet Bill, so sad to think animals were abused even in Middle-Earth. And the Eagles have long been a favorite of mine. I wish we knew more about their society.
Thanks for the great stories, I'll look forward to seeing more when you add them! I'm so happy I found your works.
Have a great day!
-Kevana
Author's reply
Hello Kevana,
it is a pity they didn't have the Middle-earth SPCA to look for those poor abused animals. Still, at least Bill had Sam. And lots of kind-hearted (and, frankly, quite yummy) elves to soothe his many injuries.
The Eagles are fascinating. Don;t think Tolkien elaborated too much on their race, but I do recall stumbling across a fanfic that explored their society in a bit more depth (it was really good, too). Naturally, I read the fic so long ago that I can't remember what it was called or who wrote it ...
*sheepish smile*
Thanks for R & R-ing, and for your lovely feedback!
Kara's Aunty ;)
Andrea
· 22 March 2013
· Chapter 2: Gwaihir the Windlord
"Most assuredly not the view,"
Great reply!
And I like the choice of words in this drabble.
Author's reply
Hello Andrea,
crikey! I didn't realise I forgot to reply to this review - I'm so sorry!
Ah, Gandalf's so droll. Even when his life's in peril, there's still a hint of acerbic wit about him. Which is nice, 'cos it helps to lighten up an otherwise very dramatic moment!
Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks very much for R & R-ing, m'dear.
M ;)
Larner
· 20 March 2013
· Chapter 2: Gwaihir the Windlord
Hooray! I love Gwaihir! A good exchange.
Author's reply
Hello Larner,
thanks very much! Gwaihir is magnificent, and really very noble and brave. He deserved a chapter honouring him, methinks!
Thanks again for R & R-ing,
M ;)
shirebound
· 20 March 2013
· Chapter 2: Gwaihir the Windlord
"Most assuredly not the view," croaked Gandalf
Love that. This is a nice scene.
Author's reply
Hello shirebound,
even stranded at the top of Orthanc, Gandalf never loses his dry wit, eh? What a man!
Thanks for R & R-ing,
M ;)
Larner
· 19 March 2013
· Chapter 1: Almost Bill the Pony
Oh, but I love this, M! What a beginning of the association between poor Bill and the Hobbits, and especially Sam, who well knows how to soothe the poor abused beastie!
Author's reply
Hello Larner,
Sam is a natural with Bill, isn't he? Sometimes I think he's part-elf himself!
Thanks always for R & R-ing,
M ;)
Antane
· 16 March 2013
· Chapter 1: Almost Bill the Pony
How delightful to see another little piece from you, my dear cousin, and posted on my birthday too! I gladly accept this present which you didn't even know you were giving. :) I've been so busy that I haven't been here for days and just decided to look today to see if there was anything new from you and here you are. :) Always looking forward to more... :)
Namarie, God bless, Your happy bloom and berry :) *hugs*
Author's reply
Happy Birthday, my Tooky bloom!
I didn't even know I had these last three reviews for this chapter. Must be something wrong with my alerts. But I'm pleased you enjoyed Bill's little outing, and would be honoured if you would indeed accept it as a birthday gift.
21 again, eh?
*chuckles*
Thanks for R & R-ing, m'dear!
Cousin Mo xx
Andrea
· 3 March 2013
· Chapter 1: Almost Bill the Pony
the hobbit raised a fist which flowered open, revealing a shiny green apple.
Wonderful image! I liked this very much.
Author's reply
Hello Andrea!
Thanks very much. I'm sure Bill appreciated it too - especially as it contained food. Poor wee, half-starved pony!
Thanks for R & R-ing,
M ;)
galathil
· 27 February 2013
· Chapter 1: Almost Bill the Pony
What a lovely life Bill is going to have,after a terrible start.We just won't tell him whats install for him.Can't wait for the next chapter.LOL Galathil
Author's reply
Hello galathil,
a lovely life indeed! After he escapes those bothersome Nazgul on the road to Rivendell, and those hungry wargs at Moria ...
Crikey, he deserves his rest after all that! It's more than a pony should ever have to deal with!
Thanks very much for R & R-ing,
M ;)
Ellynn
· 27 February 2013
· Chapter 1: Almost Bill the Pony
Poor Bill. :( I'm sure he was really happy in this moment.
Author's reply
Hello Ellyn,
I'm sure he was, too. And his life only got better from there on - despite being chased by Ringwraiths and wolves!
Thanks for R & R-ing,
M ;)
shirebound
· 26 February 2013
· Chapter 1: Almost Bill the Pony
a fist which flowered open... what a lovely image.
Author's reply
Hello shirebound,
thanks very much. Seemed a fitting analogy for our favourite gardener!
THanks for R & -ing,
M ;)