A Long and Weary Way by Canafinwe
shirebound · 18 January 2014 · Chapter 58: The Depths of the Earth
Bathed and cared for and fed and healing at last... whew. What a lovely chapter. But oh my... is that Gandalf come at last? I'm sorry you're having a tough month. It seems as if the pace andstresses of life have sped up for so many of us recently, with little time to indulge in the joy of imagining and crafting stories.
Marianel · 18 January 2014 · Chapter 58: The Depths of the Earth
Oh dear finally a bath for Estel! I almost felt the smell and dirt myself! Estel and Thranduil play on each other so well in your story and they are both humble and gracious.I love them both!Helegond is an absolute treasure too .I was so amused by the new guest in the end and I can guess who t is but I dont want to spoil the fun for the rest of your readers 😄 I laughed sl hard at the threat of roasting someone hahahaha!Fantastic writing !
Aromene · 18 January 2014 · Chapter 58: The Depths of the Earth
What a wonderful chapter! Having spent several days in the wild in rain and mud and not been able to wash because of the cold for too long, I can get a glimpse of what it felt like for Aragorn to have a proper bath. And I know all about how nice a hot tub feels on sore muscles. Though I imagine it pales in comparison to what he's feeling! He deserved such wonderful pampering and I hope it helps. Hum, could that be Gandalf arriving I wonder? Or someone else? Can't wait for the next chapter!
obsidianj · 17 January 2014 · Chapter 10: Down the Long Stairway
And so he fell at last. It is a miracle that he hasn't succumbed to his injuries. I hope he will find a safe place soon.
Author's reply
Yes, he could certainly use a little safety. He just can't catch a break.
Suzelle · 15 January 2014 · Chapter 34: The Hospitality of Lothlórien
I have had a long and rambling day so this may turn into a long and rambling review, apologies in advance: Finally got a chance to make further headway into this story today, and in many (trivial) ways it mirrored my own day very well! Had a nightmare of a morning commute which meant that I got to knock out four chapters at once, and it provided a much-needed distraction from the train disasters. Your descriptions of Fangorn are so vivid and beautiful, in their own haunting way--I love the notion of the forest itself being able to see into Aragorn's heart, his strengths and his weaknesses. I left off just as he gave the name "Estel" to the Elves, and I kept thinking about the story all day at work, and it aided in my motivation once some dreadful cramps started coming on--I kept saying to myself "come on lady, Aragorn has been dealing with all manner of unspeakable hardships and is still soldiering on, you can make it through a painless office job while suffering some back cramps." In the end, however, I was not as strong as Aragorn, and I had to leave work early so that I could go home and take care of myself for better to return tomorrow. And as I lay in bed with a hot water bottle it was very nice to read about Aragorn FINALLY getting some care and respite himself. I only wish that he could have given himself a longer break! Your Celeborn is positively wonderful--everything I'd imagine he would be. I got a little choked up once he started talking about Arwen--he clearly loves her so much ;_;. I find myself reluctant along with Aragorn to leave Lórien, imagining what lies ahead, but am relieved that he now finds himself with proper supplies and nourishment! This continues to be a phenomenal story, and I'm excited to keep reading!
Author's reply
What a lovely review! I'm sorry to hear you had such a rough day. It sounds like quite the adventure, and I'm happy my story was there to distract you! I am so glad you liked the descriptions of Fangorn; it's such fascinating place, and I would have loved to have Aragorn explore it -- but alas, it was not to be. It's wonderful to know that you like my interpretation of Celeborn. It was interesting to have him by himself, because Galadriel tends to outshine him when they're together. It is clear from his interactions with Aragorn in the book how much he respects his grandson-in-law to be, and I have always felt that he must cherish Arwen. But the time in Lorien is necessarily brief, and a long road still lies ahead. I am so glad you've been enjoying the story! Thank you for the wonderful feedback.
Linda Hoyland · 13 January 2014 · Chapter 2: Separate Roads
Aragorn is so brave.I love his friendship with Gandalf. You make me feel very lucky that I have clothes and soap!
Author's reply
Thank you so much! I love the interactions between Gandalf and Aragorn in the books; it's so nice to be able to explore it here where they have no audience but each other.
obsidianj · 12 January 2014 · Chapter 8: A Web of Darkness
*Shudder* What a horrible place. Shelob's lair. Poor Aragorn. How he got out of it with his mind intact is anyone's guess. This is truly horrifying.
Author's reply
I've often wondered how Frodo and Sam got out with their minds intact, phial of Galadriel notwithstanding. *Double Shudder*
obsidianj · 12 January 2014 · Chapter 7: Beneath the Ephel Dûath
Did I say Aragorn is brave? This is a totally creepy cave. Getting narrower and narrower without knowing if he can turn back. And then the room/cell whatever. I don't want to be in Aragorn's shoes. Now on to find out what the stench is all about.
Author's reply
Nor would I. Ugh. I'm not one for small dark places.
obsidianj · 12 January 2014 · Chapter 6: A Spot of Luck
So the Valar listened to Aragorn's prayer. Not quite the way he envisioned, but it was sufficient. And at last he found a pool with real water. Aragorn is very brave or crazy. Going into that cave with just a few torches? That is very dangerous.
Author's reply
Brave or crazy... maybe both? And desperate. Thanks again: so many lovely reviews! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.
Lily Baggins · 12 January 2014 · Chapter 53: Hobbled
Holy cow. Or should I say holy spider-as-big-as-a-cow? My hat is off to you... rarely have I ever read of a battle so chilling as that between Aragorn and the spider, and I was on the edge of my seat every moment. I haven't trusted Gollum at all, but I didn't suspect he had forged a pact with the spider while Aragorn slept... that is truly nightmarish---and of course, perfectly in Gollum's character given his later acts in LOTR. Aragorn is suffering mightily now, that is evident, and I am adoring every bit of it knowing the help that has to arrive soon. 'I can do to you what I did to your confederate, and with considerably less trouble.' Best line ever... and Aragorn truly has the patience of Job to be able to resist doing just that, too.
Author's reply
It's wonderful to know you found the battle to be a chilling one. You are wise not to trust Gollum! I think he must have struck a bargain with Shelob when he first met her, as evidenced by the fact that he survived the encounter... yes, he surely had a history of bargaining with spiders. I'm very glad you liked that line. Aragorn can be quite menacing when he has to be.
Lily Baggins · 12 January 2014 · Chapter 52: Harried and Hunted
The picture you paint of Mirkwood has me appropriately cowering in fear... just the eyes following Aragorn are enough to make me sleep with the lights on. Of course, we all know that Mirkwood is perilous, but you give it an extra dose of sinister here that is very fitting. The lynx screaming like a woman in torment would raise anyone's hackles---I'm sure that's not the last time we'll be hearing that. Oh, dear.
Author's reply
Thank you! I have always found the descriptions of Mirkwood in 'The Hobbit' to be deliciously eerie, and I am glad to know that I managed to continue that vein. And the cry of the lynx? Terrifying in any circumstances!
Noruinivel · 11 January 2014 · Chapter 57: Hurts Unseen
Ooops I meant Canafinwe of course--the n in my post was a bit challenged--I'm sorry!
Author's reply
No worries. I didn't even notice until you pointed it out!
Noruinivel · 11 January 2014 · Chapter 57: Hurts Unseen
Hi Carafinwe, I read this title and cringed for Aragorn... you're chapter only confirmed my suspicions, and you have written this chapter as vividly as always! I especially liked Aragorn's interaction with Losfaron. Such depth into both their characters: Losfaron means well, but all Aragorn wishes to do is sleep and you can feel his weariness of spirit as he is reminded of Gollum. Perhaps Mithrandir will need to bring along reinforcements. Or maybe the Peredhil could suspect that his son has need of him. In any case, I hope Aragorn has someone near soon to help restore his sorely sapped spirit. Thank you for crafting this so carefully that I can feel his state of mind!
Author's reply
Thank you for the lovely feedback! I am glad you found the chapter to be vivid, and that you like Losfaron, but especially that Aragorn's weariness and emotions come through as I hoped they would. He does indeed need someone in whom he feels able to confide; the journey has been just as hard upon his spirit as it has been on his body.
obsidianj · 11 January 2014 · Chapter 5: The Empty Pass
Fog is better than nothing, but it will not fill his water skin. At least he gets water slowly and is not in danger of drinking too much too fast. But how much fog do you have to breathe to re-hydrate? I hope it will start to rain in earnest. It seems his plea for help to the Valar was heard even if he didn't voice it aloud. This is one terrifying journey.
Author's reply
The Valar have their ways of answering earnest prayers, heard or not. I'm pleased it's terrifying. Thanks!
obsidianj · 11 January 2014 · Chapter 4: Mercy in Mordor
Ouch! That sounds so painful. Aragorn survived the immediate encounter, but what now? With no support, he needs to find a safe place. I like it that you distinguish between the orcs. That they are not just faceless cannon fodder. Even if they had no names, they were persons. Just hope that "Third voice" will not show up at the most inconvenient moment... I doubt, he will be grateful...
Author's reply
I am pleased to know you like my characterization of the orcs. I was trying to do exactly that: to show them as individuals and not just generic enemies. As for Third Voice... no comment. ;-)
obsidianj · 11 January 2014 · Chapter 3: Into the Shadows
Uh oh, Aragorn better be careful. Luckily, we know that he will survive. I just stumbled across this story and started reading. You paint a rich picture of the lands and characters. I especially like the little things you throw in like Aragorn mending his cote or trying to wash his hair without soap and in cold water. I have done that once... not an experience I want to repeat *g*.
Author's reply
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled to know you're enjoying the story, and the little details. Yes, washing one's hair in cold water is a miserable experience, isn't it?
Aromene · 11 January 2014 · Chapter 57: Hurts Unseen
Fantastic! Poor Aragorn's just deserves to be pain free and have a good rest. However, it's realistic that there would be major health consequences. My favourite parts are the little references to how much he wishes he were in Rivendell.
Author's reply
Thank you! Yes, alas, this is how it often goes. I am sure at a time like this Aragorn would yearn for home; however kind and considerate these Elves are, they are not his family.
UTfrog · 10 January 2014 · Chapter 57: Hurts Unseen
Poor Aragorn, I have lost count of how many reviews begin with those words. He is safe, but still utterly miserable. Thranduil's people are doing all they can, but the simple fact is that time is necessary for proper healing. We can all understand how much Aragorn wants to return to Rivendell. At least he understands that he must heal fully first. This is a good chapter for showing that injuries are not healed quickly. At least he is safe, warm, fed, and resting. Thank you.
Author's reply
Yes: time and rest and patience are needed. I am glad the chapter accomplished what I wanted it to: thank you as always for the lovely feedback.
Marianel · 10 January 2014 · Chapter 57: Hurts Unseen
Poor Estel when he looked in the mirror .I hope he will be able to remedy his health and looks over time. I imagine his current state as something near the pictures of the prisoners of the concentration camps of the second worldwar ...But human bodies do have a fantastic ability to heal after all but the hurts of the mind is an other matter though. I hope for some help of Gandalf and later Elrond there .Amazing insight in a tormented persons mind and gentle care of the best doctors imagineable and outstanding detail as usual :) :)
Author's reply
Yes, it was surely a jarring sight; but as you say human bodies have a remarkable capacity for recovery, and Aragorn has even more stamina than most. Still, he has a lot of healing to do and the psychological toll is worse than the physical. I'm so glad you liked the chapter.
shirebound · 10 January 2014 · Chapter 57: Hurts Unseen
Losfaron cast an eye over the Man, but there was admiration rather than pity in his gaze. 'Hardy is the race of the Dúnedain, to wander in the company of such a hateful creature through inclement lands and to emerge at last four-limbed and sane.' A very well-deserved compliment. The Elves have little to do with the affairs of Men, and are undoubtedly puzzled by their role in this strange turn of events. What a tale of hurt and healing this is! Your details are amazing.
Author's reply
Thank you as always. I'm glad the details come across well. Indeed: these Elves have little enough to do with Men, except those of Lake-town and Dale. Aragorn is quite unlike anyone they have known.
UTfrog · 7 January 2014 · Chapter 56: Safety and Slumber
Hooray he made it to safety with Gollum and can now enjoy rest and decent treatment. If anyone deserves to be well treated, it is Aragorn. He has so many hurts for the healers to care for. Thanks again. I had three great chapters to enjoy.
Author's reply
Yes! Safe at last. Aragorn does indeed deserve decent care, and he is at last in a position to rest and enjoy it. I'm glad you liked the chapters.
UTfrog · 7 January 2014 · Chapter 55: The Last Mile
One of your best chapters yet and that says much. I love your portrayal of the Elf captain and of Thranduil. I have not seen the newest hobbit movie yet, but your portrayal of Thranduil rings very true. Poor Aragorn is too stubborn for his own good, yet his feelings to complete the task are reasonable. Thank you so very much for this continuing story.
Author's reply
Oh, I'm so glad it was a good chapter, and that you liked the Elf captain -- over-kindly though he may prove in the end. I haven't seen the latest movie, either, but I'm very happy to know you like my portrayal of Thranduil. Pompous though he may be, he is not without kindness in the book; he is a noble and merciful king. And yes, Aragorn is a bit too stubborn for his own good...
UTfrog · 7 January 2014 · Chapter 54: The Dark Before Dawn
My heart was in my throat through this chapter. Even though I know Aragorn escapes, it was terrifying to read about this last ordeal. Your powerful writing makes the scenes live. Thank you.
Author's reply
My goodness: that's high praise indeed! I'm glad the suspense came across well, even knowing that Aragorn must survive. Thank you!
Anonymous · 5 January 2014 · Chapter 56: Safety and Slumber
What?! No bath? ;) Your stories are diabolically good. I've even gone so far as to "borrow" my sister's tablet so I can shove it in my bag and be one of those uncivilized people who are on their phones/tablets in company just to check for an update.
Author's reply
Hee. I can't give him EVERYTHING in one chapter, can I? I'm so glad you like my writing: thank you for taking the time to let me know. Cheers!
Marianel · 5 January 2014 · Chapter 56: Safety and Slumber
May Estel allowhimself many many days of healing,tender care , baths, food , Dorwinion, good conversations and friends! Hail to the elves and Estel and last but not least to YOU Canafinwe!
Author's reply
Yes, he deserves all of those things, doesn't he? I shall endeavour to deliver. Thank you as always for the lovely feedback!