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DoggieGirl · 12 October 2015 · Chapter 81: The First Debate

The debate of the wise. All of them have such logical approaches. Only Aragorn seems to have some measure of foresight in the case of Saruman. But they all seek to find the best solution. The dialogue was well written and real. Now it seems they have to wait a bit before they can do anything more. So Aragorn is going to have a little more time at Home and gets his full strength back. Thanks for giving another fine chapter.

shirebound · 12 October 2015 · Chapter 81: The First Debate

Oh my, what a fabulous back-story this is. The logic to choose Frodo (should he agree) is absolutely flawless. They seemed such tiny players upon a vast board of stratagem, and yet on the side of light they were the prime movers, the great captains, the Wise. It's only right that Aragorn should include himself in this assessment. I doubt that any dragon, scions of ancient evil that they are, could bear to destroy the work of he who is their overlord, acknowledged or no. Mayhap it was that, as much as his keen wit, that spared Bilbo from death amid the golden hoard. Fascinating. You continue to give me new things to think about.

someone · 11 October 2015 · Chapter 80: Revelries in Rivendell

Great chapter! It seems that Bilbo is really determined to honor his friends, especially Aragorn. It is fitting to have him recite that particular poem (was it made for this occasion?). He must have truly enjoyed the Flight of the Eagle, perhaps even more than most of the others. Good choice of a song for a duet! It is nice to see a song that is not about tragic love, as Elves' poetry seems to concentrate on it. It is also amusing that Aragorn couldn't think of songs other than love between an elf and a man. I'm also glad to see that Arwen seems to yearn for a shared future as much as Aragorn does. (Oh, and about her stage-fright: "after two score centuries and more", wouldn't that mean over four thousand years? Score centuries and more would be closer to her age, unless score has more than one meaning.) It is interesting that although this chapter is about celebrating and people being happy, there is a constant undertone of almost desperation, that this happiness is almost an illusion and will not last. It shows when people speak of being joyful to spite the darkness, when Aragorn knows he will think of this evening in harder times, when it is said that Elrond practically forces the peace and warmth on his realm... It shows well the type of time they live in, and also that they do not intend to give up to the darkness.

Lori · 10 October 2015 · Chapter 80: Revelries in Rivendell

This was quite a different setting and theme than your other writing and shows the diversity of your skills. There was much to love in this chapter. Aragorn seeing Arwen’s pride in his accomplishments, Aragorn and Arwen’s relaxed, fun, tender, and romantic moments, Aragorn joining in the hymn of praise, the surprise and reaction to the Thorongil song, and so much more. I liked this line “One of the wood-elves who had been a frequent rider on patrol when Aragorn had yet been Estel, roaming out under the close supervision of the sons of Elrond, clapped him on the shoulder,” because it reminds us that Aragorn was known and respected by many elves in Imladris not just Elrond and his family. Many fics seem to sort of give that impression at times. But I am sure that since Estel lived until he was twenty there and road with Erond’s sons before he even knew who he was that he would have had to have ridden with other elves on patrol before and had other acquaintances and friendships throughout the valley and household. I loved their duet together. Simply beautiful. Elrond certainly enjoyed it. I can really see how if Aragorn wasn’t mortal, nothing in the world would make Elrond happier than to have those to marry. He so obviously loves them both and respects Aragorn tremendously for his character and accomplishments already. If only… one small but rather significant detail that gets in the way of the future father-in-law’s perfect bliss. But it is good to see that your Elrond, despite his personal loss and grief at the future loss, sees Aragorn and Arwen’s joy and truly supports them in it because he loves them and knows how unhappy either would be without each other. I think that is how it would have been. It was one point that really, really bothered me about the readaption in the movie. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

UTfrog · 10 October 2015 · Chapter 80: Revelries in Rivendell

Lovely chapter filled with great imagery. Thank you.

Anne · 10 October 2015 · Chapter 80: Revelries in Rivendell

I enjoyed the celebration and pure joy that abounded in this chapter and all the characters that it touched on. One of my favorite lines was “often they fell to quiet laughter that seemed all the more raucous for its restraint.” I so completely understood that because it has happened to me. Two very well crafted and intriguing lines that captured my fancy were: ‘To be beloved of those who cannot spare the leisure to bow to fashion is to be beloved forever,’ and ‘And perhaps it shall not triumph at all, if things promised in the seedling-beds of history blossom into their fullness in time. We have seen promising shoots sung of this evening.’ They painted such interest word pictures in my brain. Aragorn and Arwen’s colluding about their upcoming song was adorable. I did like the almost kiss scene. It appears that this Aragorn hasn’t and won’t kiss Aragorn until his wedding. That definitely means that the anticipation and nervousness of his wedding day and night must have about killed him, even more than I thought. I would love to read a story with your take on that sometime. The pure bliss and satisfaction at the end would have been worth it all I am sure.

Aromene · 10 October 2015 · Chapter 80: Revelries in Rivendell

*makes noises of pleased delight* How wonderful! I loved the focus on moving away from what's happened and the nightmares of it, and actually taking the time to be joyful, as that is what truly keeps the Shadow at bay.

Robnrun · 10 October 2015 · Chapter 80: Revelries in Rivendell

Lovely! It is no small thing to write a party/ball scene as well as action. The break to the dialogue with Glorfindel was well timed. It kept things from dragging and felt realistically placed in the evening.

DoggieGirl · 10 October 2015 · Chapter 80: Revelries in Rivendell

Ahh Aragron and Arwen sang a duet together! That created such a nice image and your description of its sound made me think it was truly a sound to hear. I loved that it was Elrond who requested it. I really do believe that he wants them happy and loves them both. So to see them together, so happy (so in love despite their care to hide much), singing such great music together, it must bring a parent true joy however bit tempered in the knowledge of the tragic twists of fate. I loved Aragorn's refresher course! I completely understand the need too. But the results were precious. The moment where there noses where so close and they both realized each others' desire was powerful. But I greatly admire Aragon for nobly diverting the moment. It was not the right time or place. But at least we know that they do have those feelings. I am curious though on your own personal views about kisses though. Do you think that restrained, chaste kissing is ok after in engagement? I was a little unclear as to the exact reasons why Aragorn broke away from the moment - it was not the right time or place considering where they were and who was watching, or that the kind of kissing both of them desired was a little more than what would be acceptable at this point, or if he thought kissing wasn't something they should do until he had indeed won her hand by claiming the kingship of Gondor and Arnor. So if you could clarify your meaning it would be greatly appreciated. Aragorn is so much more relaxed in this setting. It makes me wonder and think that he possibly will never feel has relaxed a celebration in Gondor as king. Here he is known and respected by all as a beloved son, friend, and fellow former dweller in the valley. He has no pressures of rank, no people constantly looking to win his favor. He can just be. Somehow I doubt that will be able to be said about the more public gatherings in Gondor. I am so glad that Elrond suggested that Aragorn could dance to a slower song. You raised my hopes as soon as Glorfindel made mention of the dancing. It would have been cruel to take that away. So I am eagerly looking forward to reading another chapter on this rapturous night.

shirebound · 10 October 2015 · Chapter 80: Revelries in Rivendell

Oh my, how we would love to hear Aragorn and Arwen singing together! I love the idea of that. This chapter is such a delight, and Bilbo's words and perceptions are spot-on.

Cimarron's Girl · 6 October 2015 · Chapter 79: Children of Lúthien

Another marvelous chapter in this epic tale! I'm glad Aragorn finally got his hair trimmed up, and I enjoyed his conversation with Arwen; it was sweet music to my ears, and so perfectly in-character. I also appreciated the mention of Glorfindel (I really like his character in "The Valley is Jolly") and Moroch and Roheryn. I wonder if they would compete for Aragorn's affection if they were to meet. Basically, I enjoyed your writing (as always) and I can't wait to hear about the revelry and singing following the feast! Cheers!

UTfrog · 4 October 2015 · Chapter 79: Children of Lúthien

Love this chapter. You filled it with the tiny details that make all the characters so real. Thanks

Aromene · 4 October 2015 · Chapter 79: Children of Lúthien

Wonderful! I loved that we finally got the scene between Arwen and Aragorn and that, at last, he's found his understanding and can see it from another's perspective (one he finally believes). I'm glad he got to enjoy the feast, as it seemed pretty nice...

Lori · 4 October 2015 · Chapter 79: Children of Lúthien

I am really starting to enjoy your characterization of Arwen more and more. You seem to have really captured the heart, wisdom, support, and love of her character so well. I am not sure I have read anyone else's work that has done such a great job with her. Then you add your characterization of Aragorn into the mix and you have pure gold. By any chance could you be tempted to write a story about Aragorn's meeting with Arwen after his time spent in Gondor and their betrothal? Or the final culmination of their long wait and their final reunion and wedding? You have such a unique and wonderful take on their relationship and their characters it would be a masterpiece I am sure. You have a way of writing them that is much greater and more meaningful that just a simple romance. Plus it would be chance to delve into the world of Galadriel and Celeborn again which you gave just a taste of in this story or see Aragorn and Arwen achieve their dreams that they have long been unable to speak of.

Sneha · 4 October 2015 · Chapter 79: Children of Lúthien

I was ecstatic to see so many updates! But this chapter is my absolute favorite. I have searched long and hard for good Arwen stories. She is such a shadowy figure in the book and yet there are hints all along about Aragorn's devotion to her even before the appendices. Most stories would have her sewing or sobbing and it was so wonderful to find a story that showed her wisdom and strength. I loved the absolute trust you showed between them. Aragorn must be used to keeping his own counsel and that he would unburden himself to her shows the ultimate testament of his respect for her as well as love. The whole setting, the mundane mixed with heartfelt confessions was amazingly intimate. I can truly feel how wonderful their love was despite all the pain it brought to Arwen and her kin. Their rule must have been glorious! I don't know how long this story will continue (I am hoping you would continue on to the War of the Ring) but I truly hope that you would write a story someday about his coronation and their wedding. Like I mentioned before, he comes alive to me through your writings. I will definitely wish that the muse hits you! I know this is a long review but I cannot stop raving about how good this tale is! Thank you so much!

shirebound · 4 October 2015 · Chapter 79: Children of Lúthien

Her words wove for Aragorn a gloriously vivid tapestry of the merriment and joy that had flourished here even as he had been groping his way through the vile blackness within the Ephel Dûath. He let himself enter fully into the telling, until it seemed as if he could taste the frost of a moonlit winter night upon his lips and smell the rich spiced wine. Beautiful. What a peaceful, gentle chapter.

Celeth · 4 October 2015 · Chapter 79: Children of Lúthien

Wouldn't every man wish he had a wife or a girlfriend as understanding and as supportive (not to mention as lovely) as Arwen! It is indeed true that behind the success of a great man is a woman (or an elleth, if you will hehe). Then again, wouldn't every woman wish she had a man of honor, wisdom and integrity as Aragorn was. Truly then deserve each other. Finally I got my wish of "meeting" Glorfindel in this tale, even if only briefly. But just having his name mentioned is enough for me!

Anne · 4 October 2015 · Chapter 79: Children of Lúthien

I was able to catch up on the last few chapters. It is a shame that i don't have time to read your story more regularly since it is such a jewel. Thank you so much for taking the time to explain a bit about your interpretation and understanding of Aragorn and Arwen in one of the previous comments. I really appreciated this last chapter with them. They truly seemed like a couple in love. I can't wait to read more. By any chance will we ever get a kiss between Aragorn and Arwen before he leaves? Whatever the case, I look forward to reading more of your great writing.

someone · 4 October 2015 · Chapter 79: Children of Lúthien

I really enjoyed this chapter. Aragorn might finally believe that he did only what was needed when traveling with Gollum/Smeagol. Arwen's wisdom and love are something that cannot be ignored, even by a guilt-ridden ranger. I'm glad that Arwen didn't listen to the whole story calmly but let Aragorn know her feelings. And the partly very formal breakfast was entertaining. I do hope that Roheryn and Moroch are able to share Aragorn for a while. Roheryn just might get jealous of the young mare. Glorfindel is so joyful that even though he is just a character in a story, he makes the reader happy, too. And the boots make an appearance! Aragorn apparently can't get rid of them. Hmm... Most of the people don't know the origin of Elrond's circlet? It must be in that case very old, either from Doriath or Gondolin - or from Maglor. But if it symbolizes Elrond's rank in Imladris, it might not be older than the refuge in the valley. You have made me curious. The Flight of the Eagle should be even more popular in this setting, as people know the Eagle in question!

DoggieGirl · 3 October 2015 · Chapter 79: Children of Lúthien

Wow! I must say I think I enjoyed this last chapter more than any other of your writing. It would be a hard task to pry the smile off of my face during and after reading it. It was exquisitely crafted in perfection. There is so much to say about it that I scarcely know where to begin. First, I thought that your portrayal of Aragorn and Arwen was so, so very well done. I know that Aragorn likes to keep all his hurts, worries, and self-put-upon shame to himself, but I would not have truly been able to see any true deepness to Aragorn and Arwen’s love if he hadn’t been willing to bear everything to her if she so chose. His words “Yet you have the right to more, if you wish it. I would willingly keep nothing from you, if you ask it” as well as his reassurance to her that he would not be pained by the retelling, thereby enabling her to freely ask anything she truly desired to know, showed in way like nothing could how deeply he trusts and loves her. He made himself vulnerable to her in a way different than to any other, even including Elrond. No question he would have refused her. That is such a testament to his love for her. At the same time, she responded to that open vulnerability equally. She was willing to put aside her own wants, burning curiosity, and longing to know what had befallen her beloved if it would cause Aragorn fruitless and pointless pain. In both of their responses you see the foundation of true love: self-sacrificing love. I also loved the tender hug between the two. I have been waiting and waiting for them to finally hug. Like you said, people sometimes just need to touch and be touched, love and feel loved. Arwen touch and love are different but no less deep than Elrond’s. It was beautiful to see them together like that. It makes me think about how truly awesome their marriage must have been when they were finally able to freely and openly without any inhibitions share their life together in every possible way – body, mind, and soul. Your characterization of them truly help us envision what a truly epic love story looks like. Everything in this chapter was such a joy to read and kept making me smile bigger and bigger. I loved how Aragorn was able to greet his matchingly clad beloved and escort her through the room as the noble son of kings completely besotted by his beloved that he is. I also liked how you said that almost all who saw them together loved both of them too much too cast any ill judgment upon their desired union. In my mind, this is how it would have been. No matter the tragic consequences of their love, how could anyone who knew them well willing wish to deny them the happiness they so obviously deserved and found in each other. I know that this is turning into a rather long review, so sorry about that. But one more thing. I absolutely love the fact that Elrond and Arwen will be surprised by a song about their very own hero. And we know that Arwen at least is planning to spend the night beside Aragorn, so he should have close hand view of her reaction to the surprise. It should be very interesting to see their reactions to that and Aragorn reaction to their reaction. I better stop babbling anymore. Just thanks again for such a delightful chapter. Truly one of the most enjoyed you have ever written.

someone · 3 October 2015 · Chapter 78: Where the Trees are Grey

"Such diversions always seem more onerous beforehand than they prove to be in the end." So very true! It seems that Aragorn is unable to escape Gollum even in Imladris. It must be frustating to see his former prisoner dreams, free and hunting for him this time. And leading the nazgul to him. Good that Elrond was there to wake him, it would have been horrible to have to watch that dream for the rest of the night. A "breathless, plaintive command that rang with the music of Elder Days" must be one of the best sounds to hear at that moment. I feel really sorry for the rangers. I've never before understood that they might have known the Nine would come, and most likely wouldn't be able to stop them.

Marianel · 2 October 2015 · Chapter 78: Where the Trees are Grey

These last chapters feels like an easing of even my own troubles with Estel talking to the old wise hobbit and his loving foster father. Your Elrond even soothes my own aches and worries for a little moment while I read your story and I feel happy afterwards. I have to gather several people in my real life to collect all of the healing and calming effects Elrond provides solely on his own to Estel!That says a good deal of Elronds enormous kindness, power and patience.Even Estel has lots of that.It must be fantastic to have such a person in your life if that is possible.I have old teachers, my mom and Grandma, my son, my hubby and a few others who could or can give me something close to that feeling. But theyre not 5000 years old alas !!Neither are they elflords but wise in their own little ways.Im fortunate to have them in my life to give me some unique treats.Thank you for fantastic chapters and please go on and restore Estel to his old handsome self.

Aromene · 1 October 2015 · Chapter 78: Where the Trees are Grey

I admit, I read through quite quickly, to see who would come to Aragorn to awake him from his nightmares! I'm glad it was Elrond, though for a little bit there, I thought Arwen might be the one. So many things aired in the darkness of the night, but it was wonderful for him to finally voice his deepest thoughts. I hope that means no more nightmares!

shirebound · 1 October 2015 · Chapter 78: Where the Trees are Grey

The healing of a heart required rigours no less exhausting and painful than the healing of a twisted limb So true, and what a wonderful conversation. And poor Gandalf, constantly wrestling with so many levels of past, present, and future. ‘I know not what should be done, Aragorn,’ he said. ‘Neither with our knowledge nor with the Ring itself. It was for this purpose that we were sent, my fellows and I: to labour for the downfall of Sauron. Yet how to proceed from this juncture I dare not guess.’ Oh my. And, as he says, these are just the 'early days'.

Celeth · 1 October 2015 · Chapter 78: Where the Trees are Grey

What a horrible dream!!! And so well-written too. I keep repeating this, but you are really the best! And I love the interaction between Elrond and Aragorn. In my mind I see the scenes you paint with words; the irony of the seemingly youthful immortal tucking the middle-aged man who looks old enough to be his father into bed, just like he used to do when Estel was two years old. Elrond is probably one of the very, very few people in Middle Earth with whom Aragorn can entirely let his guard down and trust implicitly. (Incidentally, I was captivated by the scenes of Estel's childhood as narrated in your story, The Valley is Jolly.) For Estel, Elrond and Imladris are bastions of strength and peace amidst the evil and turmoil that he must face every time he leaves the valley. As for Elrond...I guess every parent can imagine how he feels every time he has to let a beloved child go, knowing all the horrors and dangers that he must face in his journeys. Oh, but I just love the way you tell this story!