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Kaylee Arafinwiel · 25 November 2014 · Chapter 94: Family Ties

Atya, So they're related to Tulcafindil! :) That makes me happy, to know that they're related (Gareth and Gwyn I mean, and Tristan) to an Elf we know, even if Tristan and Iseult themselves aren't Elves we've met before. I wonder who else will bring the parents out of their reluctance to talk a bit more? Hmm... Glorfindel calling Tristan a child was funny, but in relation to their ages, accurate. And I adored the in-joke between Finrod and Namo. :) Tye-melin, Kaylee

Kaylee Arafinwiel · 25 November 2014 · Chapter 93: Meeting the ap Hywels

Atya, Tristan ap Hywel should try ordering from Loot Crate. That is, if he moves to Wiseman permanently, since I can't remember if they go internationally other than Canada. (I get the feeling he would ADORE the Ninja/Pirate t-shirt I received in my box yesterday!!) But he would absolutely adore it. And Iseult, from what I can see, would probably whinge about it. *snickers* Tristan is such a geek, but that just makes him awesome. ^_^ Iseult would get along well with my mother, who is, after all, at least partially Jewish and very much acts the part. Heh! So, they don't believe that Glorfindel, Finrod and Daeron are who they say they are. Letter of introduction? Let's have Lord Namo turn up instead. "I get that reaction a lot." Ha! Yeah, especially when he makes people walk his maze, so at least they didn't have to do that! And, of course, "You rang?" Which I heard in Lurch voice, which is not at all how I usually hear Namo, so that was priceless! *Giggles* Kaylee

Kaylee Arafinwiel · 25 November 2014 · Chapter 92: Countdown to a Wedding

Atya, "When in Rome" indeed...I think that's only polite really. The rendition of 'My Fair Lady' made me giggle. I remember my friend Jeff singing it in a performance at our high school but that was ages ago so I don't remember it well. (Well, not *ages*, but over ten years, so...) Edhellond, Inc.? Interesting idea...O.o I wonder how that will work out. Dear God, that wedding china from Angband. :P I swear, I hope whoever does the designs has MUCH better sense this time around. Haha. Sorry for playing catch-up (again), but it's been a busy couple weeks...any fun Thanksgiving plans? Hugs, Kaylee

bookworm · 25 November 2014 · Chapter 95: The Ride to Wiseman

Gandalf! And enjoying trolling I see XD I think Olorin spent far too much time with Merry & Pippin back in the day =p Now you've got me all curious as to the surprise~

6336 · 24 November 2014 · Chapter 95: The Ride to Wiseman

Well we know about Tristan's family, or some of it, what about Iseult's family? No, they did not do their sons any favors by not, at the very least telling them some of their history, even if it was just a quick family tree. That sort of thing has a nasty habit of coming back and biting! Well they seem to have mended the fences, or at least made a start. I am wondering if the surprise at the collage has any thing to do with wedding guests? Yes, I know, wait until Friday. It will give me some thing to unwind with when I get in at 4a.m., you should have it posted by then. That is assuming I am even working, the jury is still out on that. My foot has been extremely pain full for the last four days, so off to the Dr.s I went today, x-rays, blood tests, possibly an auto-immune problem, I get the results on Wednesday, till then it is elevate it and ibuprofen! Oh, Joy! Hobbles up to Cliff House and settles in to wait, contemplates installing elevator. Huggs, Lynda

galathil · 24 November 2014 · Chapter 95: The Ride to Wiseman

Oh no you cant'n do this to me! I have to know what is waiting for them at school. Now I have to wait a whole week! Can' t you give us a clue "please". I am sure that the miar just love being annoying for the sake of it.He! He! Love Galathil

Eruherdiriel · 24 November 2014 · Chapter 95: The Ride to Wiseman

Everyone is going to jump out and yell, "Surprise". And Olorin is in on it, because it fits his sense of humor really well. Glad to see a little bit of familial rebuilding going on. ~Eruherdiriel

Ellie · 24 November 2014 · Chapter 95: The Ride to Wiseman

Muwahahahahaha! What a lovely cliffie!

Larner · 24 November 2014 · Chapter 95: The Ride to Wiseman

I'm more than a bit surprised that Glorfindel doesn't slip sometimes and call Olorin Gandalf. Heh! But it will be interesting to find out what the group is doing at the college.

Kevana · 24 November 2014 · Chapter 95: The Ride to Wiseman

Forever in love with Tristan's supply of geek shirts. "You are here," pffft! Reminds me of one I saw that had an image of the planet as seen from space and the caption "human race group picture" or something like that. Heh, an Elf is an Elf no matter what they're wearing, but it always tickles me to see unusual Elven wardrobe choices. Dreamflower, what an insightful analysis, it makes so much sense. Oh no, Gareth let Gwyn's courting slip. There's no way he's going to be able to keep that quiet for long now that it's out there, LOL. I am sympathetic for Gareth here. That love at first sight thing certainly comes with a few downsides. Heh, don't feel badly, Gareth, nobody expects the Námo inquisition. Love the glimpse into their family's history. Maybe Tristan and Iseult will learn a little more about their own family that even they didn't know. At first I thought that perhaps the other Elves had planned a surprise party for the ap Hywels, but that doesn't seem to be the case. And now Olórin is here, hmm. HMMM. Well, Friday can't come soon enough for us to find what is waiting down at the college. It has to be something big if all the Elves left and almost forgot to lock the door! It's good he remembered to knock and not just pop in, very nice, Olórin. At least there are a few house-trained Ainur around, even if they are not tame. :P Happy Thanksgiving, hope it's a good one! -Kevana

Sunny · 24 November 2014 · Chapter 95: The Ride to Wiseman

Hehe, I suspect Tristan has a big stack of geeky science t-shirts in his luggage. And I wonder how long it will take before the Maiar (and Valar) start showing up in t-shirts with funny pictures. A small idea for an element in future fics, perhaps? ;-) So there is a surprise in the offing. It shall be interestig to see just what is waitig for them at the college!

Celeth · 24 November 2014 · Chapter 95: The Ride to Wiseman

It seems that Tristan and Iseult are more relaxed now, more Elvish if that's possible. It will be so nice seeing them interact with fellow Elves and not trying to hide their true identity from mortals. that sounds like quite a surprise. I've missed Olorin, and I can't wait to know what his surprise is.

Anonymous · 24 November 2014 · Chapter 95: The Ride to Wiseman

Oh! That's not nice, now I have to wait till Friday to know what they are doing! I can't wait. Parents taking stupid pills is something I hadn't thought about, but now that you say it, some things they say or do make sense now ;). Don't worry, I don't mean it and the adults must think the same about us teens. Thanks for the laugh, I needed it after my history test. I can't wait for your next update, Ora.

Dreamflower · 24 November 2014 · Chapter 95: The Ride to Wiseman

A long and interesting journey, we learn more about Tristan and Iseult's background. The family dynamics between Gwyn and Gareth and their parents are revealing. The two ellon are centuries old, and have spent most of their time among mortals where they must hide their nature by pretending to be the age they appear, and not the age they are. Without any Elven culture in their lives to ground them, they seem to be locked into a permanent post-adolescence in their attitudes and reactions. Their parents treating them as children exacerbates that, making them seem even more immature. But their parents have clearly done their sons a disservice by refusing to give them any of the traditions and grounding that would have been so useful to them. Yet now we learn that part of the reason for their reticence may have been rooted in the rift left when their parting from their own families had been bitter. Vorundur may need to do some family counseling. And what in the world is going on in Wiseman? I will be eager to see Monday's update!

UTfrog · 24 November 2014 · Chapter 95: The Ride to Wiseman

You even managed a cliff hanger for a relatively simple and charming chapter! Love Olorin showing up. Equally love that he is smirking. I am guessing a party of some sort pre wedding, but I know I have to wait until Friday. I did enjoy the conversations on the way to Wiseman. Guess everyone is a bit more comfortable. May you have a good Thanksgiving, filled with love and family from the bloodline or the heartline.

Silmarien · 22 November 2014 · Chapter 94: Family Ties

Oh, can we get to watch Tristan have a discussion with the Valar about the 11th Dimension?

obsidianj · 22 November 2014 · Chapter 94: Family Ties

Lot's of shocks and revelations in this chapter. Poor Gwyn! Always being blamed for the misdeeds of your younger brother is no fun. In this case there was nothing he could do about it and when Iseult calms down I think she will see reason. I hope that when the apHywels come to Wiseman and meet the other elves they will loosen up. They are not alone anymore. I love your Lord Namo. The way he gave Glorfindel the introductory letter was too funny. If that does not convince Tristan, nothing will. But it is a shock to have one's whole worldview turned upside down.

obsidianj · 22 November 2014 · Chapter 93: Meeting the ap Hywels

LOL! This chapter was great. I had to laugh at the Neutrino joke and wisely put my coffee away before Namo showed up. Sitting in bed with a cup of hot coffee reading this chapter is hazardous. Poor Tristan, Namo was not what he expected, but he just invited him, and Namo is not someone to ignore such an opening. Be careful what you wish for. Iseult is such a contrast to Tristan. I know a couple that is similar. She is always dressed to the nines, very stylish and elegant, and he looks more like a hobbit in dress and manner. Seems like opposites are attractive. Now Namo has to convince both about the identities of the Wiseman elves.

bookworm · 22 November 2014 · Chapter 94: Family Ties

I must confess I like the ap Hywels as Tristan and Iseult better anyway XD

Kevana · 21 November 2014 · Chapter 94: Family Ties

I was wondering whether you'd even have electricity to post a chapter today! Did you get a piece of the action from the Buffalo snowstorm? I am so happy to see the truth come out! Sad to hear they had something come between them and their family members who Sailed - was that ever explained? I can't remember, but I wonder how Valandil will react to this, and who else might remember their families. Tristan follows the true scientist's creed: if you encounter something strange, poke it with a stick. Or a finger, if a stick is not readily available. Great characterization about the couple clinging only to what can be empirically proven. I can't recall ever seeing an Elf portrayed that way, as they're always the ones "in the know" spiritually. It's amazing and mind-bending to see Elves actually expressing doubt in a higher power. And such a good way of showing how they might logically have been affected by living among Mortals for so long. I had to lean back from the computer and put my face in my hands and shake my head helplessly at the letter of introduction. I'm sure it was exactly what was needed, as it proved to be. I just can't get over the mental image of the decision-making process that had to have gone into that. "He wants word from Atar? Manwë, come put your John Hancock on this thing, we'll call his bluff." It is priceless. And so was Finrod's little inside joke. And Námo dropping the bomb about Nell and Gareth. Sidenote - "Little tumult" is a fantastic name, though maybe just not in Sindarin. Love that bit about folks recognizing Daeron by his singing - makes a lot of sense! This was a great set of contrasts and complements in one chapter. Oh my, sounds like we're in for some wild twists and turns - I can't wait! Have a wonderful weekend! Take care, -Kevana

Eruherdiriel · 21 November 2014 · Chapter 94: Family Ties

Good balance of reveal and reluctance here. At least there's no long feud with some member of the Wiseman Elves. And Namo was his usually charming self. ~Eruherdiriel

Sunny · 21 November 2014 · Chapter 94: Family Ties

Hehehe, I guess thst by now Námo is the one amon the Valar who has the largest number of friends - I don't doubt for a second that ALL of the Reborn regard themselves as his friend. I loved that parchment. and I'm sure it will look great in a place of honor on Glorfindel's wall. So Námo dropped the bomb about Nielluin, though I would guess that if he hadn't mentioned it, Gareth would have waffled on bringing it up. But I notice that the boys have not yet mentioned the possibility that there could be a double wedding in the offing. If, that is, Gwyn manages to talk Mithrellas into marrying again.. ;-)

Laer · 21 November 2014 · Chapter 94: Family Ties

Poor Gwyn. to be the oldest (and I was not) has to be the bane of every child's life. :( Well, maybe their parents will not be so critical once they get around the elves that knew them back "then" Stories might be shared including ones that would explain why mom and dad are so strict :)One can hope :)

Larner · 21 November 2014 · Chapter 94: Family Ties

So, they were born at the end of the war against Morgoth, then? And they've been living in suspended belief in their own histories ever since? Aha! So, now we know! Love the certificate sent for Glorfindel! Nice touch! And love the in-joke as well.

Laer · 21 November 2014 · Chapter 93: Meeting the ap Hywels

Wow,rude elves to other elves. I understand it is like meeting a fictional character and they think this is a con; but again wow. Rude much? I have a feeling good ol' Nate will be getting this all straight and right with them tho. And maybe the over protecting role will be replaced with a much nicer one? :)