*This was originally written for a HASA Friday the 13th challenge but missed the deadline.
*It’s fairly soppy (though I think I have dried it out slightly), fairly slight and very short and I’m under no illusions that it is wonderful – but feedback would be, as always, very welcome. This is my second second-person story in LOTR fandom and I'm not 100% convinced by it. The other one I think does work in that form and couldn't be recast. This one, well... maybe it is just pretentious and would do better rewritten in first-person - I'm open to suggestions.
*Oh and there’s a whole bunch of fragments masquerading as sentences at the end – I couldn’t get them to work any other way but I’m open to suggestions.