Ryanwe · 30 June 2017 · Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow, this is absolutely breathtaking! I love how you manage to show the difference between Finrod's voice and the other. As I read, I thought I could feel Finrod's guilt, pain and hope... The other voice almost manages to win, but then!! The last paragraph!! I absolutely loved how you used the quotes from the Athrabeth... I loved the pace you set and your wording and your characterization of Finrod... A heartbreaking and amazingly written story, thank you so much for writing!
Author's reply
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the story, especially the Athrabeth quotes. I came across those words as one of the "Quotes of the Day" on this site, and they resonated very deeply with me. Thanks again for the feedback!