Serving Gondor by Larner

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KathyG · 21 September 2017 · Chapter 5: Justice Dispensed

Aragorn is clearly a wise ruler and an equally wise judge. He has done right by Andred and Norien, and now they have a chance to regain what was stolen from them.

KathyG · 20 September 2017 · Chapter 4: Reward and Punishment

I'm looking forward to seeing Andred's case come next!

UTfrog · 20 September 2017 · Chapter 4: Reward and Punishment

Excellent legal stories. I also enjoyed your descriptions of the court. Hooray for mentioning Ruvemir again. Thank you.

Freyalyn · 20 September 2017 · Chapter 4: Reward and Punishment

Another lovely chapter - and now I can't wait to see if Cotsedain really is that stupid or whether he's in with the thieves too. Nice little earner for them all, but they pushed it a bit too hard. But you sneakily leave us with a cliffhanger! (And I love that watching the King give judgement seems to have become a spectator sport! I'm sure that Aragorn makes sure it's a learning experience for everyone).

Bitsay · 17 September 2017 · Chapter 3: On Business, Hobbits, and Business with Hobbits

Oh, I am enjoying this lovely gentle story!

UTfrog · 16 September 2017 · Chapter 3: On Business, Hobbits, and Business with Hobbits

Excellent chapter. I am enjoying the new characters. Thank you

KathyG · 16 September 2017 · Chapter 3: On Business, Hobbits, and Business with Hobbits

It'll certainly be interesting to see how the hearing goes! It is well that Aragorn knows how to read the hearts of men, and is easily able to recognize a liar when he hears one.

Matt · 16 September 2017 · Chapter 2: A Quiet Talk

Interesting chapter. One wonders if the lords who think a bit too highly of themselves ever would conspire against Aragorn for his punishments for their hedonism. thanks for an interesting chapter, looking forward to the next installment.

rs · 14 September 2017 · Chapter 1: Finding Succor

Hi Larner! I am so thrilled that my drawing was an inspiration for this story! Squee! I am doubly delighted that you have expanded on what I have always thought the King and Queen would be... Hands on Royals who are approachable and personable to their subjects; ones who give back and take care of the less fortunate. I appreciate every detail that you put into this. It's like being transported into the streets of Minis Anor. I cannot wait to read more.

aiwendil · 14 September 2017 · Chapter 2: A Quiet Talk

This is so enjoyable to read, and I appreciate your attention to detail in things like the times the housekeeper lights the boilers. I particularly liked the idea of Arwen endowing a house of rest -- it seems a fitting tribute to Elrond and Rivendell. At the same time, it's hard to escape the thought that this is a highly idealized picture of life under Elessar.

Linda Hoyland · 13 September 2017 · Chapter 2: A Quiet Talk

You made me feel as if I were in Minas Tirith. Poor Andreth to lose her children to a fever.

UTfrog · 13 September 2017 · Chapter 2: A Quiet Talk

Larner, I always enjoy your stories. There are many I have read repeatedly. I was thrilled with a story of Minas Anor early in Aragorn's reign. Thank you so much

KathyG · 13 September 2017 · Chapter 2: A Quiet Talk

Andred is certainly fortunate to have met the King and Queen! One question. Aragorn referred to Pippin by his full legal name as well as his nickname, but he referred to the other three hobbits only by their nicknames. Is it because Pippin was a Guard of the Citadel?

harrowcat · 13 September 2017 · Chapter 2: A Quiet Talk

It is great to see the monument through different eyes and hear the King's loving recitation of their deeds. And Ruvemir is going to appear? Hooray! I think he is my favourite of your OC characters. You appear to be getting me back into the habit of reviewing so thank you for that too. Also, many thanks for your email and prayers.

Radbooks · 12 September 2017 · Chapter 1: Finding Succor

How nice to have a new story from you, Larner! I really enjoyed it.

Author's reply

Oh, my dear friend--how long it's been since I heard from you last! The wallpaper you once sent me of two aspects of Aragorn and the saying indicating he was the Guardian is wallpaper on this computer now. And this story will continue for a few more chapters. Heh!

Sharonb · 12 September 2017 · Chapter 1: Finding Succor

IT's so good to see you writing again. And it's an interesting start to the story. I am sure that Aragorn or Arwen or both will end up helping solve the problems you've put forth in the first chapter of the story.

Author's reply

I've been writing this for months, but my time for writing is too limited any more. It is finished, so it will go up rather quickly, I hope. And I suspect you are correct! Heh!

iboneki · 12 September 2017 · Chapter 1: Finding Succor

The King's Commission is one of my all-time favorite fics, so what a delight to read a sort of offshoot from that. Excellent work as always, thank you so much for posting.

Author's reply

I oam honored, and I even managed to briefly bring Ruvemir into this one, you'll find! Hope it continues to satisfy.

Matt · 12 September 2017 · Chapter 1: Finding Succor

Really interesting start. I have wondered privately whether the royals would have time to do as much charity work as you have them do in your story. That said, its certainly a good ideal for the wealthy and powerful to follow. Curious to see what you do next with this and thanks for your hard work on it so far.

Author's reply

This one is complete, and should go up rather quickly. I simply cannot imagine that Aragorn would be satisfied solely to serve as an administrator and warlord, but that he would willingly labor with the healers when allowed and occasionally among the poor in some way that people would think both safe for him and seemly. And after seeing the picture RS9 did, this story began insisting it be written in detail. Thanks so, Matt.

harrowcat · 12 September 2017 · Chapter 1: Finding Succor

A wonderful start to a new story. Just what I need at present. I am intrigued by this look at fourth age Gondor and I love the 'pay it forward' concept in action. I am feeling very much like your Sam and Rosie just now except that my Dad does not have the option of going 'by ship!' I will email you if you don't mind and if I can find your address again. Any way, Utopia after devastation. I pray the same welcome for many of your Countrymen and women.

Author's reply

I doubt that even Minas Tirith would ever be perfect, but under the King and Queen's influence it ought to have become a very desirable place to live. Good administrators tend to lead to good institutions over which they rule, or such has been my experience both in dealing with principals and business associates, not to mention those who have headed caregiving services I've worked in for the last decade or so. Your father is in my prayers, as are you and the animals. I know how hard it is to watch one you love die by inches.

Freyalyn · 12 September 2017 · Chapter 1: Finding Succor

Hurray! A new story, and lots of extra detail about Gondor in the rule of the King. I shall look forward to more of this.

Author's reply

It's complete, so it shouldn't take too long to get posted.

KathyG · 12 September 2017 · Chapter 1: Finding Succor

I hope that Aragorn and Arwen themselves will help Andred! I'm sure that they could help her make a new start in Minas Tirith.

Author's reply

And I am certain that you are right, Kathy. Thanks so!