The Fall of the Falas by perelleth
Larner · 3 July 2021 · Chapter 6: Those Who Are Most In Need
An enlightening look at Gil-galad's youth as he begins his transition to adulthood. Well wrought.
Author's reply
HI, Larner! Thanks for letting me know. Gil-galad fascinates me, and this tory had been sitting in my hard disk for years and years. I'm glad that you liked it.
mystarlight · 8 June 2021 · Chapter 5: The Walls of Eglarest
The atmosphere in this chapter is simply breathtaking.
Author's reply
Thanks! I'm glad it got through... must have been a harrowing times but I wanted some eerie over the basic war and slaughtering.
mystarlight · 8 June 2021 · Chapter 4: May The Forest Keep Them
Love Erenion.
Author's reply
He still has a lot fo growing up to do, but he is sweet, isn´t he? Thanks!
Aranadhel · 8 May 2021 · Chapter 6: Those Who Are Most In Need
Suilaid, mellon. Can't thank you enough. This story and the rest I've read. Makes me cozy inside reading your stories regarding the Noldor, my favourite clan. Thanks. A
Author's reply
Hi, Aranadhel, thanks for letting me know!
Larner · 2 May 2021 · Chapter 5: The Walls of Eglarest
A terrible event to watch, even as he has come to appreciate what is being done, and how the very walls of the city have cooperated to destroy the enemy. But Ulmo loves Cirdan, while Osse and Uinen will combine their wills to bring him to the remaining fleet. I would be surprised if Ereinion were not weeping at the sacrifice of the place that has sheltered him for so long.
Author's reply
The Fall of the Falas alwayss hit me hard when reading the Silm... a couple of lines and yet so devastating that only a handful survived. I wanted to explore how that must have felt. Only one chapter left, now, thanks, Larner!
Larner · 2 May 2021 · Chapter 4: May The Forest Keep Them
All are doing what is needful, in spite of grief, fear, and danger. Ereinion must now follow his orders, and Hathol will hopefully receive the medical aid he needs. Now, to ride as fast as can be wrought from the horses....
Author's reply
Thanks! Fortunately to move such an army would take time, so some will still be saved!
Larner · 2 May 2021 · Chapter 3: A New Star Rises In the Sky
They are doing well so far. Now, to get back to Hathol and then the city in time to retreat properly to the havens Cirdan has had prepared for them.
Author's reply
I guessed they might have had some sort of plan in case of failure, but still Morgoth's victory after the Nirnaeth was so sweeping and swift!
Larner · 2 May 2021 · Chapter 2: The Tide Is Turning
Terrible thoughts that need to be tested. Where IS Ereinion right now? And if he is at the site of the fired watchtower, so much might happen, and might be lost with the young ellon.
Author's reply
Poor Falathrim...barely returned from the Nirnaeth and having to abandon their cities. Thanks!
mystarlight · 18 April 2021 · Chapter 3: A New Star Rises In the Sky
Breathtaking chapter!!!
Author's reply
Thanks!
mystarlight · 18 April 2021 · Chapter 2: The Tide Is Turning
I love all your stories. I am so happy with another chapter.
Author's reply
Happy to hear! Thanks!
Larner · 12 April 2021 · Chapter 1: The Wind Is Rising
He should perhaps have been more careful of the unusual packing of the leaves.
Author's reply
Hi Larner! Yes, fortunately for him, we know he will live to learn from his mistakes.. Thanks!
mystarlight · 11 April 2021 · Chapter 1: The Wind Is Rising
Wonderfully written story. Can't wait for more chapters!!!
Author's reply
Oh thanks! They are coming up!