UTfrog · 28 October 2023 · Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Fabulous story. I am really enjoying this.
Author's reply
Thank you so much! I am very glad!
Stay by Aldwen
Reviews (28)
Renata · 26 October 2023 · Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Another story! YAY! Nicely done thus far; I always love your descriptions of the natural world, and I am pleased to read something serious about Elrond's sons. Can we hope that Maglor will finally find forgiveness and healing? (Though it looks like it might take some doing for the twins to forgive him... and however will they react to Maedhros?) However, I have to say that I am very confused. It sounds like there was some sort of rift or disruption or something, some kind of loss of healing power, wrt Elrohir and/or Elladan? I don't mean the temporary rift (because each was worrying about the other changing their mind on leaving), but was there something else there? I am all for not beating the reader over the head with the obvious, but there's clearly something there in the background which escapes me.
Author's reply
Thank you so much for the review! I am very glad you like the story! There are several unanswered questions so far, and not everything is obvious. There is indeed something in the background concerning the twins. It will be revealed by the end of the story, I promise! :) And... there is always hope. ;-)
Aranadhel · 25 October 2023 · Chapter 3: Chapter 3
You never disappoint and this is wholesome where everything comes full circle! I've always envisioned Maglor to finally leave Arda and what better way with his foster grandsons! Can't wait for last chapter! Aran
Author's reply
Thank you so much! I am very glad you like the story so far! It will take a few more chapters until the end. :)