In Deep Water by Avon
Nienna Elanesse · 26 May 2004 · Chapter 1: In Deep Water
I never know when I'll be called away, so I'll write this quickly. Do you need more praise from me? ;) While I'm in Boromir's place as the eldest, I do understand why Faramir doesn't relax enough to get water in his ears! lol.
Antigone_Q · 22 November 2003 · Chapter 1: In Deep Water
I loved this. Your descriptions of the river (sun, dragonflies, and all) and the boys were so vivid, and I think you got the characters exactly right.
Author's reply
Thanks, Antigone! This was only about my second LOTR story so I think there was a fair bit of luck involved in getting the characters right so I'm pleased to hear that you think they worked. Thanks, Avon