Lindelea · 6 October 2003 · Chapter 1: Blessings Outweigh the Curse of the Gift
Just lovely, friend. Noticed a couple of typos, such as "craved" instead of "carved", and a word missing. You might try to read it out loud, in order to spot the place where the missing word belongs. Other than those little quibbles, I found this a very satisfying read (and one of yours I'd not seen before). Glad you posted it!
Author's reply
Lindelea: Thank you for the review and for letting me know about this typos/missing word! I corrected the typo and I hope to find the missing word soon! LOL - I realized today that I have managed to complete 15 LOTR fics and I am very proud of that accomplishment! Again, thank you and I'll add that missing word as soon as I find it!