Lady Love an Outlaw - Part 2 of 4 by Chathol-linn
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Nihar
· 8 December 2003
· Chapter 2: The Onion Man
Hee, even better that the first! *snicker* "When I was riding to see the king, I met a young lady with thighs like -". Oh that is funny! Very good! On to the next!
Nihar
Author's reply
Hello. I had an attack of re-write fever during March 2004 and - well, I changed that song for something a little more decorous. I found that Eomer's original bawdy song didin't really fit his character. My revision also added more story and detail on dreams, fighting, and horses. But the major story elements remain the same. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! Regards - Chathol-linn
Chigger
· 2 November 2003
· Chapter 2: The Onion Man
Poor, poor Eomer. I must say, you aren't being very nice to him thus far, but it makes a GREAT story! :) Keep up the good work!
daw the minstrel
· 26 October 2003
· Chapter 2: The Onion Man
This chapter was hilarious! I am now waiting for Lothiriel to come upon a drunk Eomer who reeks of onions. What a foundation for romance.
Nilmandra
· 26 October 2003
· Chapter 2: The Onion Man
Oh, my, Chathol-linn- I just laughed myself rather silly at the end! The onion man is wonderful! I am justamazed at how you can develop a character in only a few paragraphs, and his care of Eomer - fermented onion juice? - ROFLOL! Poor Eomer! Fortunate Eomer!
And Lothiriel - she is great. All spunk, and twists Daddy around her finger.