The Dragon of Rohan by French Pony
frodo16424 · 27 November 2003 · Chapter 3: The Mark of the Dragon
Just read your story and enjoyed it. You did an excellent job in having the storm be the villain. You did a remarkable job in describing the tornadic winds. I have been fortunate enough not to have been caught in one, (been a little close a few times) and have seen the immediate aftermath of one. I also liked Gimli's telling Faramir that a house needs love to be a home.
eokat · 27 November 2003 · Chapter 3: The Mark of the Dragon
lovely final chapter, I thought Eowyn would get her way and Faramir loved her enough to let her.
websterans · 27 November 2003 · Chapter 3: The Mark of the Dragon
Very interesting! I've always been fond of survival stories...
Antigone_Q · 27 November 2003 · Chapter 3: The Mark of the Dragon
I love Faramir stories, and this one was especially nice. I had never thought about tornadoes in Rohan, but looking at a map I can see how they would be likely there.
Elena Tiriel · 26 November 2003 · Chapter 3: The Mark of the Dragon
What a delightful story! I love your children, and the growing understanding of Faramir for Eowyn. And the homecoming was splendid!
daw the minstrel · 26 November 2003 · Chapter 3: The Mark of the Dragon
It was wonderful to see Faramir and Eowyn growing closer and really making a home, not just a house. Gimli was very wise to tell Faramir that it was the spirit with which they filled the house that mattered.
Eokat · 20 November 2003 · Chapter 2: 17 April, 3001
Good second chapter, and I enjoyed the first one also. I liked a young Eomer and Eowyn just behaving like ordinary children, and the image of a tornado resembling a dragon is very good. Faramir must let her have a cellar now!!
daw the minstrel · 19 November 2003 · Chapter 2: 17 April, 3001
Wow. That was very exciting. I come from a part of the country where tornados strike and it's a terrifying thing. The noise alone is appalling. I liked Eomer's story about Smaug too. It's funny to wonder how much part of ME knew about what was going on elsewhere.
Antigone_Q · 19 November 2003 · Chapter 2: 17 April, 3001
A-ha! Now we begin to see the importance of the cellar! I like your characterizations of little Eowyn and Eomer. Can't wait to see what you do next!
Camp6311 · 15 November 2003 · Chapter 1: The Necessary Cellar
I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. Since Faramir is one of my favorite characters, I always enjoy reading well written stories that include him. Please treat him well, especially after all he's been through!
daw the minstrel · 13 November 2003 · Chapter 1: The Necessary Cellar
I wanted to read this earlier but had to wait until lunch! What a dunderhead Faramir was. Of course he should ask Eowyn why she want a cellar. As a matter of fact, he should have included her in the discussions about the design of the house. He has a lot to learn about being married. But he is noble and handsome and good, so I'd be happy to teach him!
Antigone_Q · 13 November 2003 · Chapter 1: The Necessary Cellar
What a good idea! I always thought, too, that the marriage between Faramir and Eowyn was a little rushed. Faramir is lucky to have a friend like Aragorn. I loved this line: "Faramir sternly reminded himself that he was an adult now, and that it was bad form to squirm in front of a King." Your first chapter was very well written, and I am looking forward to a second.
UnDeadGoat · 12 November 2003 · Chapter 1: The Necessary Cellar
Very interesting. I can never do stuff like this -- I'm all humor and introspection.