Reviews (109)

Miss · 30 November 2006 · Chapter 6: Realisations

Wow!!! So much distrust and yet they both WANT to believe.......... You did a good job on this chapter. The mistrust between Arandur and Cohtion, between Rinhure and Legolas. Arandur and Rinhure have the same dillima really, but Arandur has come to a choice.... Thx for this wonderfull update!!!!Now up to chap 7!! (I thought I'v read this chapter, that's why I leaved a review on the seventh chapter)

Miss · 30 November 2006 · Chapter 7: Ebb and Flow - Part I

O my god!! You reviewed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finaly!!!!!!!!! Damn, that was a long time ago!!!!!!!! I'll be back with a proper review!!

Prego · 29 November 2006 · Chapter 8: Ebb and Flow - Part II

What a treat! Those chapters were worth the long wait...But I despair to see Legolas and Rhinure's marriage finally work. They stubbornly refuse to understand each other and nobody's helping help. Nice, understanding Thranduil et an almost motherly Ehtewen...Their old age must have made them wiser! Hope we get to see Herenion in the near future! Prego

daw the minstrel · 29 November 2006 · Chapter 8: Ebb and Flow - Part II

Hi, Fan. Long time, no see. One of the things you do so well is take your time to show us the emotional reaction all these characters have to events and to one another. The tension is nearly unbearable sometimes, and I just want to slap a few of them around. I admit that Legolas would have annoyed me no end in his possessiveness and manipulation. Thranduil is, as always, a wily ruler and good father.

vampfan30 · 29 November 2006 · Chapter 8: Ebb and Flow - Part II

hey !!! glad to finally see a few new chapters!!! they are fantastic, as usual, & made my day. can't wait for more............

vampfan30 · 22 May 2006 · Chapter 6: Realisations

read this story a few months back & enjoyed every minute of it. when will we see more??? I gotta know what's gonna happen!!!!!!!

Anonymous · 27 April 2006 · Chapter 6: Realisations

I just read this story, and I was wondering whether you'll update it anytime soon. Please?

miss · 18 February 2006 · Chapter 6: Realisations

Update update update update..........when WILL you update?!!!

Strange Blaze · 4 February 2006 · Chapter 6: Realisations

Here I am finally caught up on this wonderful story. I cannot praise it enough! The political intrigue is amazing, just edge-of-your seat. The dialogue is crisp, and it just FLOWS. The whole thing is just romantic, and tremendously, fantastically sexy. Your language and descriptions are gorgeous overall, and your characterizations superb. Thranduil is great, Legolas is perfect, and Rhinure is one of the most unique and well-developed OCs I have ever seen. I can't wait for more of this story.

Chelsea · 7 January 2006 · Chapter 6: Realisations

Again another fantastic chapter, I really am fond of this story and all of the characters in it. I can not wait to see how the next chapter plays out.

LORE · 23 November 2005 · Chapter 6: Realisations

Mmmm... I sense a shift comming on (grin). I've been waiting exitedly to see what exactly will come of the relationship between Rhinure and Cothian, especially in Legolas' view. It seems to me that Rhinure and Cothian are so close because he has played so many psychological roles in her life; Father, as her mentor, Brother as a fellow Avari, Son because she is the in an abstract way the mother of her people and he is her hier. I'm curious to see if some of Cothian's distaste for Legolas' behavior does not come from his own want to fulfill the role curretly held by Legolas in her life... sorry! Just finished some studying for my Psych. exam, I'm going a little nuts and overly anylitical! (hahaha). Great Chapter, keep it up!

Amanda · 20 November 2005 · Chapter 6: Realisations

You updated, woot!! Another great chapter. the conversations were amazing and added soo much to the chapter. the last scene when rhinure doubled over and she sees all those memory flashes with legolas - very touching i really feel for her. You portray the complications very well, with the secrets and everyone following everyone- I loved it. there were some errors like words or letters left out, fix it cause your wriitng is just too beautiful to have errors like that. Update , waiting for the next chappie.

Idhreniel · 16 November 2005 · Chapter 6: Realisations

One of your best chapters, especially the dialogues. There is a serious thing, though: you left us longing for more. I am still thrilled with Thranduil. He is the best in this chapter. And life for Rhinure is not fair indeed. I wonder how she will deal with Legolas now.

LOTRFaith · 15 November 2005 · Chapter 6: Realisations

You are killing me!!!!!!!! I just finished a book with an ending like this... I won't learn what happens in the book until next year... I'm praying it won't be the same with this... ;-) Secrets... A lot of secrets. Thranduil's secrets. Legolas' secrets. Rhinure's secrets... Rhinure is hurting Legolas far deeper than she can imagine I think. Her very lifestyle is being torn apart by her love of Legolas, but her duty to the Avari has stronger threads. Thus she is being pulled in two directions and Legolas doesn't seem to quite understand it all. Which I can totally understand because no one is letting him understand anything. The Avari want something, they need something and Thranduil and Legolas seem to be the only way to their goal. It literally hurt to read "And it was a sound that tore at his bruised heart." Legolas is in agony and I think perhaps only two could truly understand his pain. Thranduil and Herenion, the two who actually know him. This is a very complicated chapter I must say :-) So many emotions and thoughts tossed around :-) I truly do hope you update soon... I am going mad with all the new little pieces I have been given to the large puzzle :-)

Miss · 15 November 2005 · Chapter 6: Realisations

Hee yes! I am the first with a review. Very interesting dialogs you put there!Your riting is great. This story is great! I have said this over en over, but update soooooooooon. Thanks for the update. I was so pleased when I saw the new chapter!

anne · 4 October 2005 · Chapter 5: Pillow Talk and Other Conversation

I Love this story soooo much, your Legolas is wonderful and I think the relationship between him and Thranduil is amazing, please, please, please update soon xxxxxxx

nedieth · 9 August 2005 · Chapter 5: Pillow Talk and Other Conversation

hey, this is Nedieth, the post-reviewer. I am a post-reviewer because i don't review till i've read EVERYTHING. and now i have. I am enjoying your story alot. It's a unique legomance, not the typical girl, not the typical situation, not the typical elves even! There's so much drama and emotional problems, it makes me want to step into the story, set up an office, and give everyone advice. especially the Avari, they seriously have some emotional roadblocks. Now about this chapter. Both Cothion and Arandur are beating each other up emotionally, and its making everything worse! infact, there's so much getting worse, i don't see how you can even finish this tale in 2 parts! Legolas and Rhinure have this weird almost love/hate relationship, i have a feeling that it will eventually turn out right, but the only way can see that happening is if they listen to legolas's wise body guard whose name i forget right now, but is awesome. Attempt to update soon! Nedieth

LORE · 8 July 2005 · Chapter 5: Pillow Talk and Other Conversation

OMG! Finally! I was so giddy I was nearly pissing myself. I love the political conflicts you are setting into the plot, they are most intriquing. My only suggestion would be that there needs to be something beyond sex for Legolas and Rhinure in the near future. Possibly Legolas listening in on her converstation with someone else with regard to him, revealing the things about her feelings for him she does not want him to know. Love the series like vodka shots! LORE.

Amanda · 6 July 2005 · Chapter 5: Pillow Talk and Other Conversation

That was a good chapter. The conflicts with the brothers is very interesting and makes awesome drama. Again. I really like the way you write about Legolas and Rhinure's relationship with all the turmoil , conflicts and feelings - I really feel for them. I like how you dedicated a lot of this chapter to them and got them talking - perfect title for this chapter. Keep wriitng, waiting for next chapter.

Anonymous · 3 July 2005 · Chapter 5: Pillow Talk and Other Conversation

fantastic!!! please update soon.....

sofia · 3 July 2005 · Chapter 5: Pillow Talk and Other Conversation

a lovely chapter, as usual. The two brothers get interesting and interersting, yet I like Arandur. Legolas and Rhinure... its so fun reading about them. I wonderr if they'll get closer. Update soon! -sofia

Brazgirl · 1 July 2005 · Chapter 5: Pillow Talk and Other Conversation

Well, well, Legolas and Rhinure are lustful. There is something there... I guess Legolas can be persuasive sometimes. Thankfully. I guess in this chapter the point was that Avari conversation. The brothers... great dialogues. One suspicious of the other... and being watched! I am curious to know both king and mistress's reactions over the matter...

lor · 30 June 2005 · Chapter 5: Pillow Talk and Other Conversation

Perfect!!!! tHANK YOU SO MUCH!

souad · 18 May 2005 · Chapter 4: Power and Promises

So when will you update? PLEASE PLEASE update this story SOOOOOON. I hope you have still the inspiration to write.... Bye!

Kristy · 26 April 2005 · Chapter 4: Power and Promises

::time out while Kristy does the happy dance in celebration of a new chaoter!!:: OK. I am so glad I found this chapter today! I have made myself stop checking regulary for updates. I hope the next one comes soon though. I cna't wait to see legolas and Rhinure in the midst of the Fellowship et al. I can't believe Rhinure used the phrase "I feel..." and more than once too. She coming along. WooYoo, I'm so excited to have a new chapter, but you've just made me hungry for more now. You know that right? Seriously, great work. I'm glad to find you haven't disapeared.