Jay's Drabblets by Jay of Lasgalen

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Kitty · 27 September 2007 · Chapter 91: Brotherly Love: Always Outnumbered

*lol* As I said before - older brothers ... Poor Estel. You should allow him the long overdue revenge on them, after all he had to put up with!

Author's reply

Hmmm - I think it's more fun to watch him try, and fail!

ellie · 27 September 2007 · Chapter 91: Brotherly Love: Always Outnumbered

they are scum. will aragorn ever get the upper hand with them?

Author's reply

Scum?? I think I may have to take exception to you calling my favoutite twins 'scum'. And no, I'm not going to let Aragorn get the upper hand!! :>)

Larner · 27 September 2007 · Chapter 91: Brotherly Love: Always Outnumbered

They compounded the insult? The CREEPS! Oh, Aragorn, GET THEM BACK, and SOON! Hehehehehehehehe!

Author's reply

I don't know - I rather want the twins to always beat poor Aragorn. That won't stop him trying, though ...

eliza61 · 27 September 2007 · Chapter 91: Brotherly Love: Always Outnumbered

Run Estel, Run! psst, great story Jay

Author's reply

He'll never escape his brothers :>)

Radbooks · 27 September 2007 · Chapter 91: Brotherly Love: Always Outnumbered

Perfect follow-up to the other drabble. Made me chuckle... poor Estel doesn't get any breaks with his brothers, does he? :)

Author's reply

I couldn't resist the idea. Poor Aragorn - he's up against the dynamic duo, who have nearly three thousand years of cunning behind them ...

Nessa · 27 September 2007 · Chapter 91: Brotherly Love: Always Outnumbered

Giggle, just couldn't leave it at the first drabble, eh? Poor Aragorn. Now I would like to see something equally entertaining where Aragorn finally puts one over on the twins.....hummm? Nessa

Author's reply

I don't think he'll ever win this battle - but maybe something where they show how much they care for him really ...

grumpy · 27 September 2007 · Chapter 90: Brotherly Love: Charity Begins At Home

Brothers are they great, and a pain. Hey if Estel collected enough money, he could buy himself a snazzle new cloak, but then he would not be our scuffy ranger we all love.

Author's reply

*Grin* You've just given me an idea for a sequel ... Author Reply: The sequel's now posted. Not a new cloak, but what if he collected the money? This one's all your fault!

Nessa · 26 September 2007 · Chapter 90: Brotherly Love: Charity Begins At Home

Chuckle, seems our scruffy Ranger has been the brunt of funnin' again. Great fic. Nessa

Author's reply

Thanks! Poor Aragorn - the twins always tease him, and he's always outnumbered!

Kitty · 26 September 2007 · Chapter 90: Brotherly Love: Charity Begins At Home

Older brothers are a real pain sometimes, aren’t they? *grin* That was fun, Jay!

Author's reply

They can be a pain - but I'd love to have brothers like these! :>)

Larner · 26 September 2007 · Chapter 90: Brotherly Love: Charity Begins At Home

It does appear that they do ask for difficulties, his brothers. Such insults are likely one day to be redressed, after all. Very funny.

Author's reply

Heh heh. One day, I'll have to write Aragorn's revenge ...

ellie · 26 September 2007 · Chapter 90: Brotherly Love: Charity Begins At Home

cute and funny! Poor Estel always gets picked on, doesn't he?

Author's reply

Poor Estel - but he doesn't really mind the twins' teasing!

Radbooks · 26 September 2007 · Chapter 90: Brotherly Love: Charity Begins At Home

Very nice, Jay! I love the images this creates in my mind - I can certainly see Aragorn lazing in the yard as the people of Bree keep a distrustful eye on the 'beggar'. :) Thanks for sharing.

Author's reply

Poor Aragorn - all he was doing was sitting in the sun as he waited for his brothers to arrive :>) I'm glad you enjoyed this - thanks for reviewing!

Roheryn3019 · 26 September 2007 · Chapter 90: Brotherly Love: Charity Begins At Home

This gave me the pick-me up I needed. I love the way you portray the brothers, and the little bit of teasing gives the reader a great sense of their relationship. Well done.

Author's reply

I'm glad this helped to cheer you up. I love to write the twins with Aragorn - I think they'd be ideal big brothers, despite the teasing!

grumpy · 29 July 2007 · Chapter 89: Pride Goeth ...

Ah, Elrohir has it bad, fetching flowers from dangerous places, nothing like love.

Author's reply

Yes, Elrohir has a bad case of Love. And it will get worse - this is serious :)

Ellie · 27 July 2007 · Chapter 89: Pride Goeth ...

How funny! What a hopelessly hopeful romantic!

Author's reply

*Grin* Poor Elrohir - he's always had a weakness for Taniquel!

mistry89 · 26 July 2007 · Chapter 89: Pride Goeth ...

I don't think I've said before how very much I have been enjoying these, so please accept this as a (belated) "Thank you!" I will try to do better in the fb arena (it was a NY Resolution, and there are 5 clear months left!). Cheers :)

Author's reply

I've got very behind with my writing - there are THREE stories still unfinished - but the drabbles are such fun to write! Thanks for reviewing.

Bodkin · 26 July 2007 · Chapter 89: Pride Goeth ...

Boys!! Perhaps Taniquel should have a Firm Word with Elrohir.

Author's reply

He needs it. He's young and impulsive here, and still has a bit of a crush on Taniquel :>)

Bodkin · 26 July 2007 · Chapter 88: The Outsider

Poor lonely Estel. It's a wonder he coped with the isolation, really. And that he then managed to make the shift to king ... although that's a pretty lonely role, too. Only better dressed.

Agape4Gondor · 25 July 2007 · Chapter 87: The Darkness Behind

This is very nice - I hadn't remembered the order of who ws where during that difficult journey...

Author's reply

When I saw the prompt, and remembered that Elldan was at the back with one of the torches, it seemed obvious. I had to check the details, though.

Agape4Gondor · 25 July 2007 · Chapter 86: Beware Of The Sea

Very, very nice indeed!

Agape4Gondor · 25 July 2007 · Chapter 83: Breaking

OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS!!!!!!!!!! I got chills reading this! Hideous, horrid moment - Foresight is not a gift to be envied, is it?

Agape4Gondor · 25 July 2007 · Chapter 78: Parental Ambitions

Phooey! This was well written - but hard to read - knowing what Fate befalls all three within such a short time - so much grief. Hopefully, Arathorn looked down from somewhere after Aragorn became King... and smiled...

Agape4Gondor · 25 July 2007 · Chapter 76: Grammar Lessons

ROTFL - my goodness - this one was fun... especially, of course, the last line! Did they do that on purpose, the wily twins???? Mispeak to even further confuse their Ada.... WOW

Agape4Gondor · 25 July 2007 · Chapter 69: Twice Blessed

OH my - very nice - but that last 'pang' of remembrance! Oh my! It's hard to remember, sometimes, that Elrond was a twin himself. Very nicely done!

Agape4Gondor · 25 July 2007 · Chapter 67: Summer Solstice

Oh! Very nice indeed - We may be some time *giggles*