The Touch of Sight by LAXgirl

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Marianel · 25 January 2015 · Chapter 17: In the End

What an intrigueing story you have created, its amazing and unique in fanfiction. Among the best I have read.You have an eye for detail and indeed this is a really scary thriller with Legolas fascinating story. When I read this I can relate to a murderous young man near to where I live , thank god hes behind bars. That man was like your man a person who nobody thought of could do these kinds of crimes.Many women includibg myself stayed inside more than usual during that period indeed. Many low bows to your writing.Marianel/ Sweden

Anonymous · 22 July 2011 · Chapter 3: Chronicle of Years

This is a really interesting story so far, but I've detected one HUGE plot problem in it: Legolas was only in a coma for four years, but you said five. From 1421 to 1425 is four years...

ElfAddict · 31 December 2007 · Chapter 17: In the End

I enjoyed this story very much. Have a Happy New Year!

Mirime93 · 10 February 2007 · Chapter 17: In the End

ARGH!!! How could you finish it like that, you evil person!!! But on the other hand, I LOVE your story. I actually read this story quite a while ago but finally joined the site =P Above would be venting out the 'rage' from that time. But, sequel? ...please?

vampfan30 · 21 July 2006 · Chapter 17: In the End

sorry it has taken so long to review-- i read this story at the beginning of the year, when i first got my internet up & running. This was the very first fanfic I had ever read & it was the reason I have become a helpless addict to fanfiction... This was an amazing story....

anne · 8 October 2005 · Chapter 6: Fear and Doubt

i like it!

Ariadne · 7 August 2005 · Chapter 17: In the End

Laxgirl Touch of Sight was one of the best stories I have ever read. Please keep up your fan writing...you are very talented. Ariadne

Hilde Stohl · 28 November 2004 · Chapter 17: In the End

Hey, just wanted to say that was a great story and I loved the ending. Most endings are so predictable and I was pretty sure that that knock on the head reversed everything! Glad for the twist. Love ya.

Amanda · 28 November 2004 · Chapter 17: In the End

Amanda · 28 November 2004 · Chapter 17: In the End

Galimeril · 27 October 2004 · Chapter 17: In the End

OHHHHH! EVIL, EVIL, EVIL!!!!! How could you!? What did he see? Tell me, tell me, tell me!!! You can't stop here! This is a great story! I can't wait to review your other 2! I read this in 5 1/2 hrs. and I loved every second of it! Ya gotta write more on this site, Please!!! Galimeril ;D

Elrawein · 18 October 2004 · Chapter 5: A Simple Touch

This Story Rocks! Thanks Bri

Galimeril · 8 September 2004 · Chapter 17: In the End

EVIL!!! Just Plain old evil genius. This had better not be the end or I might just have to add an evil ending to my own story! If I ever get it past the first chapter and post it. More updates soon!!! If its not the end, but I already told you it's not! Galimeril ;D

tinania · 8 August 2004 · Chapter 17: In the End

omg(oh my god) this story is absoloutly fantastic i dont actually think ive ever said anything bad about anyones stories and i admire people that have the gift of writing because it gives the people with the gift to read enjoy themselves also. please continue to write. this story was incredible and all of the loose ends tied up and you had an explanation for everything and you have created something in that time period that you thought couldnt exsist then and only now (if that makes sense)but it could and in your story it did. The emotions run freely in this sorty and vary one minute legolas doesnt want to admit weakness and you really want him to (do you know what i mean?)and the next minute he has no choice but to admit weakness which is the key feeling.You make legolas' character strong.

alysha · 29 July 2004 · Chapter 3: Chronicle of Years

Hey, you probably aren't even looking at reviews for this story anymore, but for your future stories: I wish you hadn't told me that he was gonna wake up. When you do that, it packs less of a punch when you read the part where he actually does wake up. But it's definitely one of the better stories out there, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

karry · 27 July 2004 · Chapter 17: In the End

I found your story on this site too. And I will say it again, you have to write another chapter and tell me what Legolas saw. Please? *looks really sad and beggs LAXgirl to write more* I love this story, it is the best fanfic I ever read. Karry

longlivetheking · 25 July 2004 · Chapter 17: In the End

Wait a minute.....you *are* going to do a sequel, right? *RIGHT?!* Oooo, you are evil, just plain evil to leave us hanging like this and say that it's the end! Well it's not! It can't be! I'm not giving you any peace till you consider adding a sequel. NO PEACE, YOU HEAR ME?! Moving on...I looooooved it! Awesome writing!..............But you MUST add a sequel, or I'll reveiw this thing a million times to get you to at least tell me you're considering it. That's all I ask, Tormenter. That's all...

Creashuns · 23 July 2004 · Chapter 17: In the End

Thank you for this wonderful story!! I loved it!!

lwarren · 22 July 2004 · Chapter 17: In the End

I was so glad to see this update...you have no idea! Been lookin' out for it every chance I got! :-) I'm just sorry this is the last chapter, and now you have resorted to ending with a cliffie!!! That is soooo bad...but I will forgive you only because you did not kill Legolas in that fire! ;-) And he has recovered his strength, too! It was a good ending...I love your Gimli...such a grump, but so lovable in his crankiness. Everything seems to be winding up nicely for Legolas...the final scene with the new baby and Theomir was so touching. I'll just hope his new "sight" is brought on by intense feelings of love and contentment....(you really are so mean *g*!!!) Great story...I'll miss looking for and reading it, but plan to try and find some of the others you mentioned. linda

Author's reply

Aww... thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It as kind of sad for me to finally end it, but you know what they say: "All good things must ome to an end..." I'm just kind of glad about finally being able to get back to my two other ones. I've been starting to get death threats about me hurrying with updates for those... So... Yeah. Im sad ToS is done, but I'm glad I can get back to them. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I've always looked forward to your reviews. Hope to maybe see you soon at one of my other stories! Signing out -LAXgirl

sofia · 22 July 2004 · Chapter 17: In the End

Awesome story. Really awesome. I can't believe you stopped it there! what did he see!?!? You must tell. Please? I'm gonna be thinking about what he might of seen for days now... I must say good story. -sofia

Author's reply

Thanks for the review. I really can't say what Legolas saw since I wanted to leave some what of an open end to the story. You know, something to leave the readers still wanting more... I guess I did good seeing as how almost everyone is asking about follow up chapters, sequals, or epilogues... Eh... I can't honestly tell you what Legolas might have seen because I honestly didn't really think of anything in particular. I guess I have left that up for the reader's own imagination. Anyway, thank you for all your reviews for past chapters. You've been one of the few readers I could count on to review every chapter. Thanks so much. I hoped you liked the whole thing. If your interested, I have two other LOTR fics on fanfiction.net under my same pen name here, LAXgirl. Maybe you'll go check them out too since you liked ToS. (Shameless plug, I know, but sometimes just can't help myself... :P) Thanks again! signing out -LAXgirl

Ashaselle · 14 July 2004 · Chapter 16: All Fall Down

Well, I got through the whole story in one sitting (last night). Great Story! Please write more. It's been alsmost a month since you updated! Surely you can not leave poor Legolas in the burning building with yet another crack to his poor head! Update soon. Thank you. Asha

longlivetheking · 9 July 2004 · Chapter 16: All Fall Down

Woah...........I have so many rheitorical questions (I think that's how you spell it), like "Is he dead?" and "Is 'The Bad Guy' gonna survive? And if so, how?" Oh, and my most pressing one:"Does she enjoy leaving us hanging?" But seriously, that is one peice of work right there. Post soon, please! You're killing us! [No pun intended, so refrain from the evil looks please. :P]

lwarren · 27 June 2004 · Chapter 16: All Fall Down

LAXgirl!!!!!! There you are!!!!! I was so glad to see this addition.....and you had to go and make it another evil you-know-what!!! AAAGGGHHH! Just when you thought is was safe to etc.,etc.,etc. Well, it is a nice LOOOONG chapter, and that stupid guard-murderer (can't remember his name - CRC strikes again!) finally got his due!! You really do write a good fight, tho'...the one in the alley with Gimli was very well done, and the final battle in what's his name's house with Legolas had me ducking and cringing and yelling! :-) (Haven't you ever read a story with Legolas about to get the snot beat out of him and yelled at him to move or duck or something? Your's did that *deep calming breath*!) And of course, you just had to add the FIRE! Legolas's almost escape was very convincing, too! Now, our poor elf has another head wound, and is about to be roasted to a fine turn.....HOW COULD YOU LEAVE HIM LIKE THAT!!! ummmm, sorry.....Seriously, great chapter as usual, and I was struck by the absolute tenacity you had Legolas pursue the murderer with. He was not about to give up and have that monster kill again! The elf was going to catch him or die trying *sob* and he just might! *sobsobsob* Update soon, I fear for the elf and my sanity! *g* linda

Author's reply

Wahahaha! *evil laughter!* Evil cliff hangers are my specialty. Haven't you realized that yet? ^_^ Anyway, thank you for the review. I'm glad to hear I had yo ducking and cringing. Oh, and you know i had to add that little fire in there just to add a little spice to the story. You didn't actually think I was going to let Legolas get out of there that easily, did you? I can't give you any hints about how or even if Legolas is going to get out of this, but hopefully I'll have an update out sometime soon (hopefully sometime before you lose your sanity! ^_^) Thanks again for the review. Till next update! Signing out -LAXgirl

Miriel · 25 June 2004 · Chapter 16: All Fall Down

You had me skimming through the chapter just to make sure that Legolas was ok! (Then I went back and read it again.) I really enjoyed how you created such a vivid word picture during the fire and the fight. Well done. I'm guessing our story is (sadly) almost at the end?

Author's reply

Ha ha! That was funny how you cheated and went ahead to make sure Legolas was ok (kind of... ^_^). Yes, the story is slowly winding down. There's only about one more chapter and possibly (I'm not really sure if I'm going to just put it with the next chaqpter or make it it's own) an epilogue. But like I said, I'm not sure if the actual epilgoue is going to be added with the nexdt chapter. Thanks for the review.Glad to hear I had you on the edge of your seat. Till next update (which opefully won't be two months from now! :P). Signing out -LAXgirl

sofia · 25 June 2004 · Chapter 16: All Fall Down

Oh My God. That was very very very awesome chapter. Will someone find him before he gets burned to death? I was wondering if you forgot about this story, but you didnt, and you sure know how to make up for a long wait. Dont keep us waiting for too long, again. -sofia

Author's reply

Aw no! I couldn't forget ToS!! Thought that was something of a long hiatus before I managed to update again. And like you said, I tried to make up for such a long time with a nice long chapter. Thanks for the review. There's no hints about what's going to happen next. But I will promise I'm going to try and get an update out within the next two months. :P j/k j/k! Thanks again. Glad you liked the last chapter. Signing out -LAXgirl