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Imrahoil · 8 June 2004 · Chapter 15: 15

I am not amused, but sorry for the inconvenience. Thank you for trying. Well, well, I hope someone (Bardor/Arwen) gets Frecern before he gets someone (Arwen/Bardor).

Jay of Lasgalen · 7 June 2004 · Chapter 15: 15

Ai, poor Throndar! That was so sad. What a sacrifice he made. I find I'm liking Minuial more and more - I couldn't stand her at first! The humans are growing on her, as well. Now if one of them could save her neck, it could change her opinion of them. But where is Arwen - and her brothers, and Legolas? Jay

lwarren · 7 June 2004 · Chapter 15: 15

SQUAWK!!! RS!!!!! That's right - draw it out as long as possible!!:-) Poor Throndar...I kinda had a bad feeling about his idea to act as a spy the last chapter, but at least he got a very good lick in before he fell. Brave, brave soldier...Aragorn and Arwen will miss him! Now the blacksmith - I like him in this story, now that you've straightened his thought processes out! ;-) I would dearly love to see Gleowyn knock Frecern silly and then her father gut him (*V bloodthirsty-I-hope-that-rat-gets-his-just-desserts Grin*). And ah, yes, dear Aragorn in a rage is a sight to see (ummm, read!...). He's definitely giving his poor guard a fit, trying to keep up with him! Great action chapter -I just have one complaint....where is you-know-who????????*wails loudly* linda

Bodkin · 6 June 2004 · Chapter 15: 15

Poor Throndor - at least he didn't have to worry about the tooth for long! I suspect he felt he owed his life for allowing Arwen to be captured and was willing to spend it to recover her. I knew they were looking in the wrong place - (she's in the nursery, Minuial!) - but at least they have rescued the Rohan royals. I hope Minuial doesn't get killed - but I would like to see her get saved by one of those great clumsy smelly humans.

daw the minstrel · 6 June 2004 · Chapter 15: 15

Oh yes yes! Lots of excitement here. But poor Throndor. I felt bad about that. He was brave. Where could Arwen be? I hadn't realized that this was the wrong place and I thought she was getting out. I love pissed off Aragorn.

Imrahoil · 4 June 2004 · Chapter 14: 14

Are you planning a loophole for Frecern? I hope not, he really has it coming AND it should better be painful. Like the story very much, liked the prequel as well, just love your dwarves (never read a funnier comment on elves than "Your elves are disturbing the peace again ... Bah, Elves, ... They are worse than mice in the pantry. If you see one you’ve got twenty and the only way you know is by their noise in the quick of the night."). A mild complaint: Could you do something about the formatting of chapter 10 and 12 or does it involve lots of hard work?

lwarren · 4 June 2004 · Chapter 14: 14

Ok, my mistake (reread the conversation between Aragorn and Thranduil again). I actually think they were more angry at the circumstances than at each other. Aragorn's anger is easily understood - he's been lied to and tricked and they have taken his very "heart" hostage. Thranduil is angry that the irrational stupidity of men has forced him to enter into something (a war) he wanted no part of (aside from the fact that Arwen was in his care and she was taken). So, on a closer look, I retract some of my previous statements...they were bristling but more at the circumstances that had force them into the position they found themselves in. (I still had to grin at some of the undercurrents I felt during their little conversation - sorry to review twice, RS...will teach me to rush through a story....but is sooooo goood!) linda

lwarren · 4 June 2004 · Chapter 14: 14

Ah, the truth will out! Thou art trying to kill me! But I am not so easily slain by your foul cliffies!!! So, Thranduil and Aragorn finally meet up, and they are both acting most kingly and - male! "There will be an accounting." :) All right guys, let's get Arwen and Gleowyn and the babe out of there first...then ya'll can tend to all those "guy things". Honestly, where is Legolas...they need his tact to act as a bridge between men and the Elvenking! I had to laugh, RS, they were bristling at each other like two cats! I loved the idea of an underground group plotting in Edoras - tho' Minuial could have been a tad more grateful! And that beginning scene with Gleowyn and Arwen and the little guy was so sweet and sad (I loved the part where Gleowyn thought that Arwen could make even changing diapers look queenly). Gleowyn thinks her husband is dead obviously...I think Frecern better watch out for her. A little vengence from her would not be amiss in the future. So you leave everyone hanging - Arwen and Gleowyn listening for "heavy footsteps" as the assault begins - Aragorn and Thranduil looking somewhat ticked at each other - Throndar sacrificing his dear self for the hostages - Minuial being snooty again - and where in the heck are Gloin and Greenleaf? No precioussssss, not very niccccce a'tall! *heheheheh* Great chapter - most timely. *g* linda

The Karenator · 3 June 2004 · Chapter 14: 14

I started reading this some time back, got lost in the woods and have found my way back out again. What a delightful tale! It flows just beautifully...along with your wonderful descriptions of places and people. You have also infused it with a terrific blend of humor and tension. A wonderful combination. I love your original characters! They're lively and fully rounded. As you can see, I have been most impressed! Now that the rag-tag resistance is moving and the combined forces are amassed, I can hardly wait to see what happens next. Just a terrific read, Rose. Karen

daw the minstrel · 3 June 2004 · Chapter 14: 14

You must have nursed a baby. You describe it so well. But poor Gleowyn. How miserable she is. She needs to be rescued soon! Aragorn is scary when he's out for vengeance. Not that I blame him of course. And Thranduil is certainly someone I would want on my side! I also liked your picture of the "resistance," sort of like in Paris during the Second World War.

mer · 2 June 2004 · Chapter 13: 13

Another person here who is enjoying this story. I noticed one of your characters ("Camthalion") has the same name as another elf in a story by someone called Runedancer. Is Camthalion a canon name or is it just by coincidence? I am very much looking forward to the next chapter. I loved reading all your other stories as well!

lwarren · 2 June 2004 · Chapter 13: 13

RS, yea!! An update...was really getting worried! *vbg* Of course, then I read it and am now hanging in the limbo of "in between battle and rescue", and it's not a comfortable place to be! :0 I thought Minuial sneaking into Edoras with her friends very tense...and poor Aragorn! That was also an interesting development about what will happen to the rule of Rohan should Elfwine not regain control of Edoras. And Gimli and Legolas...sigh!...entertaining as usual, those two! Poor Gliver...but I liked that line about how he copes...*g*. So, those stupid hillmen held a knife to the baby to ensure cooperation....sounds like they need to be dealt with slowly and painfully...and SOON! *snicker...did ya get the hint, huh????* Can't wait for the next update...bring on a PO'd Thranduil AND Aragorn AND Gimli AND Legolas...AND...ah, you understand! Great chapter...would enjoy more if not holding breath! ;) linda

tintalle1 · 31 May 2004 · Chapter 13: 13

Good to have you back, rose. keep them coming, I am getting pretty worried that Gleowyn will get herself killed if Arwen doesn't keep her from attacking Frecern.

Jay of Lasgalen · 30 May 2004 · Chapter 13: 13

Oh, poor Aragorn - mind you, I would not want to cross him just now, or be one of those who has taken Arwen. I hope the next chapter will see all our heroes in action to rescue wife/sister/friend. Jay

daw the minstrel · 29 May 2004 · Chapter 13: 13

"Think you Gliver could cope without you?” Gimli grinned openly now. “It is how he copes best..." I loved these lines! Somehow I missed the last update. This is very tense. All of those who can help are on their way or waiting, and I think that this kind of before-the-action moment is the worst.

lwarren · 17 May 2004 · Chapter 12: 12

RS, here I had resigned myself to waiting for an update, and what do I find this morning (besides 3rd grade dwarfs in my room)? Chapter 12!!!!! It made my day bearable, I can tell you that, especially when I read the part about Gimli and his little crossbow stunt! Honestly, the Dwarf is too much sometimes! It's a wonder Legolas didn't skewer him! ;) Anyway, I liked the mental games they were playing with the prisoner...."they wouldn't hurt the women, would they?"...idiot, you should have thought of that before you left them! You are seriously worrying me now about Minuial...I didn't like your tone in your reply to review of Ch. 11. However, I did like the way she and Throndar were actually working together to defend Edoras. So, she's to take a message to Thranduil, and he'd better help or he's out one Marchwarden, hmmm? Well, can't say as I blame her! But I'm sure he'll turn up...hopefully soon! And speaking of soon, here's hoping you finish those gowns for that special occasion without any problems...aren't daughters grand? linda

daw the minstrel · 15 May 2004 · Chapter 12: 12

Gimli was scary funny with that crossbow bolt. Actually, all the crossbow stuff is kind of scary. I liked Gleowyn's fierceness at the end. If anyone had threatened my son as a baby (and maybe even now), I'd have gone after then with anything I could reach. And if Minuial wants to comment about civil conflict, she might think about the Silmarils!

lwarren · 14 May 2004 · Chapter 11: 11

Oh no! You're caught up? And now we have to WAIT for new chapters? Say it isn't so!!! Ah well, waiting is good for the soul, they say (who are "they"?---Off with their heads!) Now, on to the chapter --- I do love it when the forests greet the elves - and Thranduil meeting the biggest tree as "one monarch to another." *big smile* Minuial - finally, girl, you understand...you do whatever it takes to keep the elf happy! ;) Seriously, I'm glad she's going to look closer at the mortals who have captured her beloved's heart and esteem...tho' the coming confrontation with the rebels probably won't endear the race any further to her...but how convenient that she's with Arwen and I hope you're not planning any nasty surprises for her....ummm, us...I'm just beginning to really like her.... Aragorn - finally fed up with the hill people's little tricks...Take that nest of vipers, burn them out if necessary...I'd say he had reached the end of his considerably long and patient rope. Legolas seems at the end of his also, and it's payback time! Thranduil - can he kick some rebel butt now...huh? pleasepleaseplease???? I think he needs to really pay attention to that little "niggle" of worry he was feeling...the celebration can wait 'til later! :) Great chapter - things are heating up nicely (and not just in the story, either!) You will hurry, won't you? *tries the patient, pleasant approach* Please? linda

daw the minstrel · 14 May 2004 · Chapter 11: 11

Poor Aragorn. I can see how this would just kill him and yet he has to do it. I assume the men are all at Edoras? And I assume Thranduil is going to kick butt? I fervently hope so. That's what I want to see!

lwarren · 13 May 2004 · Chapter 10: 10

I hate goodbyes *sniff*...but Gimli and Legolas handled theirs quite well, despite the fact they are worried sick about who's going to watch the other's back now. That was a very touching scene...now, to war!!!!!! Minuial is so funny - she knows Thranduil quite well! And I liked the Elvenking a lot in this chapter! He was quite lordly and royal, even when Arwen and Minuial were giving him fits :)! Would stay to review longer, but am surrounded by some really bad weather (tornadoes, to go with the third graders in my class...a classic combination!) Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter....looking forward to the battle royal, on both fronts! (0H, Gleowyn has a babe? Cool! Can't wait for that meeting, what with Arwen "cooing" and all :).) Update soon...must have my daily fix! ;) linda

daw the minstrel · 13 May 2004 · Chapter 10: 10

So everyone is preparing for battle but we get nice, personal glimpses of them. I am especially fond of Thranduil, I have to admit. He's kingly, even when the women are running circles around him.

lwarren · 12 May 2004 · Chapter 9: 9

Please pardon me whilst I wallow in a few well-written snippets from this chapter... :) Minuial - "...and let the tree gossip to her of the other elf who had graced its boughs this growing time. The tree sang of strength and endurance, sun and wind, of birds and the healing touch of the quick one the grove had begun to love." *sigh*...lovely, I love it when the trees and the wood elves converse with each other. Minuial (girl's kinda growing on me) - "So many immortal lives lost to middle-earth; the pain and suffering resonated still. Her eyes filled, remembering Haldir, the golden, invincible warrior..." *sniff* *wail* (That is STILL one of the hardest scenes from TTT for me to watch...I know when it's coming and still moan and get teary.) "...his clear voice alone and lovely and, to her ears, aching with isolation...From the gloom in the front of the wall other elven voices joined in...The sound filled the evening until it seemed the very granite of the citadel would harmonise." (Music so governs everything for them, doesn't it?) Gliver's wife - mice in the pantry? disturbing the peace again? If you see one you've got 20? (I'm looking for mice tonight!) *snicker* Thranduil - "He was not the fading kind." "Their thoughts have grown inflexible...it was time for a storm to clear the dead wood." uh-oh. And so on and so on....What can I say? Wonderful addition, RS. The brief scene with Arwen was nice, Aragorn would still call her back to him no matter what. Thranduil alternated between funny, and terribly superior, and sad. I couldn't decide whether to slap him or hug him and pat him on the back! :) Am still wondering if he's going to be able to leave his son to fight this threat alone...it would be one way to bridge that "gulf deeper than the chasm under the bridge of Khazad-Dum" between them. Hmmmmmmmmm. As always, this story just contines to get better. linda (And you need reassurance about your writing? Are you crazy, girl? ;) Just keep on is all I can say! signed, mother l.)

daw the minstrel · 12 May 2004 · Chapter 9: 9

The Elven singing to lament their dead was haunting. I really liked the way Elves picked up the song from all over the stronghold, joining their voices together even when they were scattered. I also liked the tiny glimpse of Arwen's life, looking out the window but having Aragorn's voice within calling her back. Poor Thranduil! He just doesn't understand, CAN'T understand why his son is the way he is. He's going to lose Legolas to the sea longing and had already lost him to the mortals who will replace Elves on Arda. The stubborn king just can't accept it.

lwarren · 10 May 2004 · Chapter 8: 8

Ah, from the action and heroics of ch. 7 to the poetry of ch.8. And the humor still weaves its way through the tapestry of the story like shining silver threads (see? you've got even me waxing poetic here; well, sort of *snerk*). Lovely, lovely images tho'....just have to mention a few of my favorites -- "...the song drifting like dream from lay to lay, with no more complication than a bud unravelling itself in the spring." *sigh* Minuial - "...like an unstrung Galadhrim bow, ..." Arwen compared to Minuial - "The power of water on stone, sun on leaf, light over dark, even as her life's grace faded in tandem with her lover's..." *sniff* Celeborn - "...has a mouth like a discreet clam." ;-) "....and all the ethereal company strung out behind like pearls on a necklace." You paint such pictures!!! I enjoyed the whole interlude at Imladris, especially the unusual combination of Arwen and Minuial ("Who could fathom women?" Obviously being an elf does not give the males any extra insight into the girls!!) And poor confused Minuial - it must be l-o-v-e! She seemed most insightful into the real character of Legolas, tho' - fierce in combat, will "follow but refuses most stubbornly to be pushed", as self sufficient and powerful as the river (nothing more powerful or inexorable than the force of water!), and does not easily forgive slights given his friends. I wouldn't have thought she would be, given the way she seems to invite those fights they have. Again, a nice touch with Arwen feeling Aragorn's trouble and distress. Finally, I giggled at Gimli's feisty dwarfs and flighty archers remarks. :) I thoroughly agree with Legolas - I think the bandits' and traitors' time is limited now that the elven calvary has arrived, since I don't think Thranduil is going to be too happy with seeing first hand what they did to his son. And Aragorn considering that "door"...the Numenorean gift of being able to choose the minute and hour of their death - that, to me, is a scary thought. Oh, and I'm with Earnulf -- "Elves. Lots and lots of elves." alllllllriiight! Wonderful - cannot wait for more! :0) linda

lwarren · 10 May 2004 · Chapter 7: 7

"...life lurched into banality again, the old enemy driven off for yet another eve." Almost expired, right along with friend Gimli while reading this little jewel of a chapter. Once more, another wonderful addition. Legolas' acrobatics on the rope and with his bow and arrow were (as my son would say, "Tight!"), and again his use of his elven abilities to bring Gimli back was touching. Good tension throughout, with little touches of humor. I may be refering to the elf as "Mother" Legolas from now on! :-)