LKK
· 14 September 2003
· Chapter 1: Part the First: In Which a Ranger is Caught Off His Guard
Where to begin in describing the delights of Chapter 1? How about with the second sentence. Of course, there were no clocks in Rivendell, but that was beside the point. That sentence introduces the chapter's tone perfectly. We're in for a delightfully arch time. Whoo-hoo! Very fun. And I love the Twins. My favorite line comes from one of them: Elrohir's I am simply not understanding this conversation. I think I might adopt that one as my own. (If you don't mind, of course.)
Ithilien
· 18 August 2003
· Chapter 6: Part the Sixth: The Return of the Prince
Ah, I just had to leave a review for you here. Turnabout is fair, and since I was coasting through the site and came across this fine fic once again, I just thought I would pipe in my two bits on what a marvelous story this indeed is. You know I adore it, and I'm looking forward to the conclusion. This chapter, too, is one of the finest in this small tale's collection. The double meanings and implied subterfuge are just ... *gasp*... breathtaking. I love stories with complexity, and this one meets all the marks, plus it's a comedy to boot. And beyond that, I find Legolas, in this tale, incredibly attractive. Is it the bad boy mask he is wearing that is doing it for me? Don't know, but it gives me evil ideas. Hugs, and more soon please.
Ariel
· 17 August 2003
· Chapter 1: Part the First: In Which a Ranger is Caught Off His Guard
Again, you have me reading stories I might not have otherwise! Thank you, JastaElf, for a very engaging read.
Ariel