Drabbles by Lindelea

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Itarille · 15 September 2026 · Chapter 56: Keeping the Home Fires Burning

Lovely. And bittersweet. Frodo gifting Sam a cooking gear (of course!). Sam watching Frodo laugh and remembering the long-ago golden days. The long-ago golden days. Somehow that makes me sad (in a good way).

Author's reply

The thought came to me in my most recent re-reading of LOTR, when I got to the part where Sam threw all his gear down a crevice to lighten the load, as he and Frodo prepared to make their final push to the finish line. Your mention of the long-ago golden days, and being sad in a good way, reminded me of the way a certain Simon and Garfunkel song makes me feel. You can find recordings of "Bookends" online if you're not familiar with the song. I've loved the song since the first time I heard it as a child, decades ago, though it means much more to me nowadays. The tune is plaintive, even haunting, the tone nostalgic, and the guitar work is exquisite. "Bookends", by Paul Simon Time it was, and what a time it was, it was A time of innocence, A time of confidences Long ago, it must be, I have a photograph Preserve your memories; they're all that's left you. p.s. Thank you for stopping by to read, and for pausing to share your thoughts. I really appreciate it.

Itarille · 15 September 2026 · Chapter 53: Remembering Day (three drabbles)

This is my first time reading about this Shire custom. I think it is a lovely way to remember the dead. It is even lovelier to find three drabbles threaded around this theme. Also, I always smile when I encounter a mention of Faramir :) How comforting it is to find that you are still writing Hobbits stories. It's been a long time since I last read or wrote LOtR stories.

Author's reply

It's so good to hear from you! Life happens – for my part, I was pulled away from fanfic for more than a decade before I retired and thus gained writing and reading time again. Even now, when I have set the goal of finishing all my WIPs, life continues to throw stumbling blocks in my path. I fall over each one and then get up and brush myself off and keep on going. I'm rather the stubborn type. Or maybe I should say I'm contrary. Or something like that. (Not to mention, the Shire is a refuge of sorts.) I remember enjoying your stories greatly, and if your interest in writing and posting LOtR stories should return, I will happily read them! Of course, no matter what the future holds, I wish you well.

shirebound · 17 July 2026 · Chapter 56: Keeping the Home Fires Burning

How perfect a gift! Sam will get a lifetime of joy out of these items... as much as joy as knowing his dear Frodo was able to laugh again.

Author's reply

It was such fun to work out this idea after writing Bill's dream-impressions of Mordor! While re-reading that part of the original, I went on to read of Sam and Frodo's escape from the Tower and their nightmare journey. When I reached the part where Sam tossed his precious pans down a fissure, something clicked. (I kept reading until the Ring went into the Fire. Dear Sam. Poor Frodo. But then, to see his peace when he was finally set free...)

Mirkwoodmaiden · 29 October 2025 · Chapter 52: Welcoming a Traveller Home

Lin!! I only am reading this now!! Months late! I am a slug!! Thank you so much. I love it! I love this idea. (((Hugs))) MM

Author's reply

MM! I'm so glad you liked it! (((hugs))) Lin

Fimbrethil · 6 September 2025 · Chapter 5: The Silent Street

Ouch!!! Poor man! Though not really so poor because he dd it all for the love of his lord. I wonder if Faramir really knows and understands the risks and loss Beregond underwent.

Author's reply

I wonder if Faramir really knows and understands the risks and loss Beregond underwent. That's an intriguing question! Beregond was my "gateway drug" when it comes to LOTR fanfic. Thanks for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts!

Erulissé · 5 September 2025 · Chapter 54: Tea for Two, and Two for Tea: a set of four drabbles (companion to Family Matters)

My heart sings!!! 💗

Author's reply

Thank you for the smile this brought!

Anonymous · 2 June 2025 · Chapter 53: Remembering Day (three drabbles)

Where did Elladan learn of this tradition? Can you do one where they either witness or hear of it from someone and then witness it? It would be interesting to see how the viewer would react to see hundreds of candle boats floating down the river. Or any candle-boats at all. And can you add Wood Elves and Glorfindel? Maybe even Thranduil. Elladan seems to have a lot of contact with hobbits. In Shire: Beginnings it's him who the premonition is sent to so he could bring the Fallohides to Rivendell. And then he seems to know of the Remembering Day tradition. Why's he making the boat before Bilbo's passing? The tradition is that the boat is made after one passes, right? So why'd he make it years before Bilbo actually passed? I'm sorry for rambling on. I seem to have gotten rather carried away with them. Oh! I also just remembered. In Shire: Beginnings, you mentioned a possibility of another story following it in the same time period. Will there be one, or is it done? I like the way you wrote the history. Will there also be one about the hobbit archers who marched to Fornost to fight against the Witch King of Angmar and never returned? I can't remember if the book said they didn't return or no one knew what became of them. Sorry! I'm rambling on again.

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I imagine Bilbo told his Elvish and half-Elven friends about the practice at some point after he retired to Rivendell. He might have fretted at having no one to carve a boat for him since he'd outlived all his contemporaries, for one thing; for another, he had left the Shire behind and had no contact with Shire-folk until Frodo, Sam, Merry and Pippin arrived. Elladan might have misunderstood the tradition in gleaning the details from Bilbo's descriptions (and therefore carved the boat while Bilbo was still very much alive), or he might have carved the boat deliberately ahead of time to reassure the old hobbit that he would not be forgotten. In one of my older stories, I have a body of Elessar's Guardsmen learn about the tradition and join the Shire-folk in observing the day. In addition, other Outlanders arrive at the Brandywine Bridge as the candle-boats are floating down the River. Here is a link to that chapter, if you might be interested: http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=309&cid=1503 Right now, I'm feeling too drained to write something related to Remembering Day. It's a melancholy topic. Chalk it up to a combination of factors, including our current heat wave and the need to minimize stress at the moment. Oddly enough, angst offers a decent distraction, so I'm still able to write angsty scenes, but sorrow and loss are distressingly stressful somehow. No need to apologize for rambling, at least to me... I seem to do it a lot myself. The hobbit archers who marched to Fornost appear in one of the WIPs I'm currently updating: Thain. The first group (the ones who never return), led by the brother of Bucca of the Marish (an OC; not one of JRRT's characters), are described in the battle when Fornost falls. In my story, Bucca leads a second group of archers to look for his brother and support the Army of the West that marches to throw the Witch King out of the Northlands. In fact, that battle is described in the next few chapters waiting to be posted, which are currently undergoing beta-reading. The Shire: Beginnings series was intended to be a trilogy. The second story is set about 150 years after the Fallohides reach Cardolan (if I'm correctly remembering the name of the place they settled, off the top of my head?). In that story, which is outlined and partly written in draft form, the Fallohides and Harfoots pull up roots and relocate in the region of Breeland. I haven't looked at that story in a long time; one possibility was that the Stoors came to warn them and all three tribes travelled together, but I don't remember if that's the one I ended up choosing. (A glance at the "Tale of Years" makes me think I abandoned that thread and revised the story to fit JRRT's timeline better.) The third story, also consisting of an outline with about half the chapters written out in draft form, is about the brothers Marcho and Blanco gaining the land grant from the King and leading a body of hobbits to establish the Shire. I couldn't figure out a satisfying ending, so I put it away until something good comes to mind. (I won't post a story if I don't know the ending ahead of time because I learned my lesson with Runaway. JoDancingTree liked the story enough that she offered to help me rewrite it and arrive at a good ending. What a wonderful job she did! And she helped me to get past the wall I'd hit and to keep on writing. However, that was the last time I posted chapters of a story as I was writing it and without having a definite conclusion in mind.) On my timeline, Marcho dies in the Great Plague 36 years after the founding of the Shire, and Blanco follows him a day later. Knowing that threw up a roadblock of sorts. I may have to ignore that knowledge and set the ending after T.A. 1600 but before T.A. 1636, and then maybe I'll be able to bring myself to finish writing that story. There I go, rambling again... Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to share so much good food for thought. I appreciate hearing from you. Author Reply: p.s. Maybe the hobbits settled in Arthedain rather than Cardolan? I'm too tired today to go back and refresh myself on the details.

Larner · 7 April 2025 · Chapter 53: Remembering Day (three drabbles)

Lovely! In my-verse Bilbo remains but a few years on Tol Eressea, but it's wonderful to think he might have lingered to see Sam come to be reunited with Frodo.

Author's reply

Someone told me in a long-ago discussion of Frodo's sailing to the West that in the land where the Ring-bearers lived for a time before going on, they were given the grace of laying down their lives at will. Sort of like Elessar's ability to choose his time? I think they were quoting from a letter Tolkien wrote, but it is just a dim memory to me now. (And so I took the liberty of Frodo being able to interact with his cousins in dreams during times of great distress, perhaps with a little Istari or FirstBorn help... I tried not to do it too often, of course. It had to be a very special occasion, like helping Merry solve the famine problem when the leaders of the Shire were all at a loss, or guiding Faramir back to his body when he'd "wandered too soon".) Sort of like the idea that tweens are always eating, and they eat so much, they put a strain on their family's larder, and so families encourage their tweens to walk about the Shire and visit relatives. But I haven't been able to find that information anywhere since returning to fanfic. I was sure it came from Tolkien himself, maybe one of his letters (because I haven't been able to find any mention of it in LOTR), but then, again, I could be remembering wrong and it was actually something I read in a fanfic. Thanks! Looking forward to seeing you! Author Reply: Anyhow, in that discussion of when Bilbo died, I think part of the discussion was whether Bilbo would choose to hang around until Sam sailed so that Frodo wouldn't be the only hobbit there. In Small and Passing Thing, I think I envisioned Bilbo having left only a short time before Sam arrived. (Since I don't think he appears in the final chapter of that story, that's probably what I was thinking.) Sadly, I've lost many of the notes I had from writing those early stories – everything before 2010, sadly, although I managed to recover some notes, including beta-readers' comments, from WIPs like Thain and Jewels. But at least the Muse is still speaking to me these days and deigning to keep track of plot threads. For the most part. She's grown very rambling with the passing of the years. Rather like me, actually. I seem to ramble a little more every day. I can think of worse things, though.

Anonymous · 20 March 2025 · Chapter 53: Remembering Day (three drabbles)

Thank you

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You're welcome! Thank you for the suggestion!

Periantari · 19 March 2025 · Chapter 13: March 25 SR 1419 (Rosie Cotton)

I love your description in here- indeed Rosie is glad her love has returned.

Author's reply

Thank you! It amazed me when I realized that Rosie knew Sam was coming home months before he actually arrived! She told him she'd been expecting him since the spring! (I chose to believe that somehow she was aware of the destruction of the Ring, even so many leagues away.)

Periantari · 19 March 2025 · Chapter 12: Tales of Old Wives (three drabbles)

These are so sweet. I especially love how Rosie thought of Sam. :*)

Author's reply

Thank you! The Professor showed us such a tiny glimpse of Rosie, and yet she was such a strong character, she almost jumped off the page and into my heart.

Periantari · 19 March 2025 · Chapter 7: Dernhelm's Ride

Poor Eowyn.

Author's reply

She was so hopeless at this point. I am so glad that the Professor didn't give her the glorious death in battle she craved but something much better – Faramir and his love!

Periantari · 19 March 2025 · Chapter 6: Fireside Chats

When i first read that in the books, it was such a climatic moment. Love your take on it.

Author's reply

Thank you! It's a little muddled, but then so was Frodo's head when the Ring finally compelled him to claim It for his own.

Periantari · 19 March 2025 · Chapter 5: The Silent Street

Such a terrible moment for Beregond- but it was for the loyalty for Faramir!

Author's reply

Exactly! He knew when he left his post, that he'd traded his life for Faramir's. (As my hobbits like to say, "Anything worth doing is worth doing thoroughly.") But it's not just that. Beregond is the character who dragged me into fanfic-writing in the first place. I wish the Professor had written more about him! (Not only his fierce, desperate loyalty to Faramir here, but his warm welcome and animated conversation with Pippin also won my heart.)

Periantari · 19 March 2025 · Chapter 4: The Moon Sees Somebody I'd Like to See

wow nice contrast to the last drabble where now Merry holds vigil for Pippin. Nicely done.

Author's reply

Thank you! This drabble and the one before were actually a matched set (the titles are taken from a lullaby my mom used to sing), but I hadn't figured out about publishing sets of drabbles at the point these were posted.

Periantari · 19 March 2025 · Chapter 3: I See the Moon and the Moon Sees Me

aww that last line really hit my heart. <3 How terrible it was for Pippin to see Merry suffer from the Black Breath.

Author's reply

My heart is in my throat whenever I read scenes where one cousin is watching over the other, like here, in the Houses of Healing. How awful it must have been for Pippin before Aragorn entered the City.

Periantari · 19 March 2025 · Chapter 2: Questions

Dear young hobbits- love Merry and Pippin interactions.

Author's reply

Oh, I do too! I love to stumble across fanfics that show the Travellers as children..

Periantari · 19 March 2025 · Chapter 1: "And get my pipe out of my pack, if it isn't broken."

I love how it weaves between present and past with such melancholic hints in it. Nicely done.

Author's reply

Thank you! I was fascinated by drabbles in my early years of fanfic reading and writing. They were a challenge to write and a wonder to read, to see how an author could condense a scene to a minimum of words, cutting all extraneous language until every word left in the drabble served a carefully-designed purpose! I think the exercise of drabble writing helped me to be less wordy in my regular writing, though I still suffer from wordiness. It's hard to break old habits.

shirebound · 19 March 2025 · Chapter 53: Remembering Day (three drabbles)

Ohhhh, this is a very loving -- and moving -- series. *sniff*

Author's reply

Thank you, dear friend. I hope this reply finds you well. (((hugs)))

Anonymous · 27 February 2025 · Chapter 52: Welcoming a Traveller Home

Can you do three drabbles of Remembering Day? One in Rivendell, one during the Quest, and one after the war, but before the Travellers start out for home from Gondor. I want to see the others reactions to this hobbit tradition. Also, will you finish the story of Bucca of the Mariah? I like the stories on the Shire's history.

Author's reply

It's an interesting thought (a series of Remembering Day drabbles). I'll offer the Muse some dark chocolate and see if her nose twitches. Bucca's story is actually one of the WIPs that is currently progressing rapidly from draft to final form and is actually close to being finished (perhaps ten chapters remaining to deal with). I plan to start posting it again after I publish the final chapter of one of the current WIPs, hopefully in April, around Larner's birthday, as a mathom for her. I'm updating three or four works simultaneously on SoA but don't want to do more than that. I don't want to clutter SoA's home page by posting too many stories at once. I'm glad to hear you like the "Shire history" stories. One of these days I hope to get around to finishing Marcho and Blanco's (unpublished) story, but I haven't been able to figure out the ending yet, so I can't start publishing it until I do. Thanks for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts!

Itarille · 20 December 2024 · Chapter 52: Welcoming a Traveller Home

It's fitting for Eowyn to welcome a (captured) horse home! I must admit, before I read your notes, I had not understood the significance of the black horse.

Author's reply

(Sometimes I feel as if I'm cheating regarding the 100-word limit by adding notes, but I always appreciate understanding the context when I'm reading other authors' stories, so I risk it.) Thanks for reading and pausing to share your thoughts!

shirebound · 20 December 2024 · Chapter 52: Welcoming a Traveller Home

He cautiously whuffled her fingers. ‘No matter.’ She stroked his nose. ‘You’re home. That's lovely. Eowyn's life of healing and compassion will be a long one.

Author's reply

Eowyn's life of healing and compassion will be a long one. That's such an encouraging thought! (((hugs))) and thanks for sharing your thoughts.

shirebound · 20 December 2024 · Chapter 51: As Long as Hope Remains (Remembering the Departed, Part 2)

'Has it not struck you that the heir to Buckland, the heir to Tookland, and the heir to the richest hobbit in the Shire all disappeared on the same day? That would defniitely be a natural subject of gossip and concern!

Author's reply

I know it struck me the first time I read it! I figured the Shire-folk would put two and two together (and who knows what they came up with?!)

shirebound · 3 November 2024 · Chapter 50: Remembering the Departed

Oh my! That's heartbreaking... and very well done. I didn't see that coming.

Author's reply

Thank you for reading and responding. I wasn't sure I could make it work with only 100 words to work with. Whew.

Larner · 3 August 2015 · Chapter 48: Love Lessons

Oh, dear! I hope that he doesn't find himself married to someone with whom he shares nothing! Funny!

Author's reply

No, happily this was the beginning of a beautiful friendship... Though she laughed him off, with the rest, later she discovered that he was not just the clown in the marketplace, but a well-respected guardsman, part of the King's elite bodyguard, and selfless enough to sacrifice himself defending the visiting hobbits. (now if he'd been just a clown in the marketplace, it might have been a different story altogether) Thanks! Author Reply: Oops, I just re-read your comment and realised you were talking about it the other way round! Ah, yes. He chose wisely. Who can say, he might have been surreptitiously watching her for some days or weeks, but couldn't figure out how to introduce himself...