Reviews (181)

Linda Hoyland · 28 September 2006 · Chapter 999: Partings

Just a note to say I've sent 2 e mails and hope you received them safely.I'm worried some mail is getting lost in cyberpace.If you didn't get them please let me know. I hope one day you will return to Aragorn even if just for a one chapter story.I hope your version of him.

viggomaniac · 22 September 2006 · Chapter 28: A Valuable Tool

I guess it would be pretty hard for Daevan to try and reason with the dwarves but he proves himself quite apt in this regard too. Greedy dwarves, though they do have their uses. And what, perchance, made this young man imagine he could bypass the orcs unseen? Oh. It was you that did that. I'd almost forgotten since I got so wrapped up in the storytelling. Good thing the rope held. Your statement that 'he tried to forget that he would be stuck forever in this cleft if the rope tore apart' was chilling. Brrrrr! Honestly, Strider never lets up. What a (fantasy) guy! So admirable! So...now wait a minute. I'm starting to sound like a fangirl again. Ah, why not. BTW, planning on watching Alatriste? (You know, the new Viggo movie)...I think I could put up with subtitles in this case. Back to your story. (I feel like a reporter for some TV newscast). The Hammer of Aule! Wow! Silly dwarves. Can't decide about them. They bicker constantly. But Strider's right. They NEED to get out of there. Will Daevan abandon him? Of course not. At least, I don't imagine it happening. Sorry for the incredibly long time it took me to review. But as always, it's a treat to read your stories. Hope you are doing well.

Larner · 17 August 2006 · Chapter 999: Partings

Your last fan-fic for LOTR for a time? I grieve this is so, but rejoice that I had the chance to read it. And I look forward to the time you return and we read more. Thank you for so much.

Larner · 17 August 2006 · Chapter 31: Affray

A most proper thanks for services rendered, and proper respect shown for prowess and dedication. Lovely.

Larner · 14 August 2006 · Chapter 30: The Dimrill Gate

Hurrah! Hurrah! And the fight was well described--very well described.

Larner · 14 August 2006 · Chapter 29: Gollum

Yes, I am back and am trying to catch up again. Lovely to catch Gollum relatively easily in the end. And good to see our Strider is working to keep going in spite of his injuries. Now, to get out of there alive!

RS · 6 July 2006 · Chapter 999: Partings

What a great ending! "Though I must say that your mouth is still faster than you sword." My heart leaped when Aragorn finally told Daeven who he truly is. Such a proud moment (I feel like a mom just bursting with pride during a graduation ceremony trying to hold back the tears!) Daevan have come a long way. I'm glad he's decided to stay with Aragorn. Congratulations on your semi-final with "Castle"--love that story! Good luck with your other stories! I have no doubt you will aquire more fans! I do believe you have more ideas in that brilliant head of yours regarding my favorite Ranger. You did leave it with "Would I do you a favor if I recommend you to my old friend Halbarad to make a Ranger out of you?"

Laerien · 4 July 2006 · Chapter 999: Partings

I was so very surprised and sad that this story came to such an abrupt end. I didn't expect it at all... :o( But I am glad that I overcame my instinctive dislike of AU stories, and gave yours a chance. I truly enjoyed it, and was always happy to see it updated. Though at times, I felt you leave all of the work for Daevan, and do not give our other hero enough credit, but then the whole story was more about Daevan, so I coul forgive that. :o) I hope we shall see more stories about him... As a Ranger! :oD

Linda Hoyland · 3 July 2006 · Chapter 999: Partings

I just loved the ending to this story which caught me entirely by surprise as I feared it would be a "Goodbye,maybe we'll meet again one day" I like to imagine Daervan as one of Aragorn's Grey Company in LOTR. Good luck with your current projects!I hope one day you will write another LOTR story for you portray these characters,especially Aragorn,so beautifully.

grumpy · 3 July 2006 · Chapter 999: Partings

Ah, the dwarves have their treasure and on their way home. Grima really is a slimeball. Good idea of Aragorn's to make Daevan a ranger, he will make a good one. Besides now that Strider, has let on who his is, better to keep an eye on him. The UPS man, heard all the rucus and made it out of Moria, he slipped past everyone. A passing troll told him that Strider could be found in the north. Actually the troll said " oh look lunch, I wonder if it is tasty". But trolls do mumble so! Since the package does contain a safety helmet, which Strider will need later on in the Two Towers, when he falls off a cliff, it is a good thing that the Ups man and his St Bernard, are still on the job. OK, on to other things, I loved this story, as I have loved your others, and do hope to see more from you again. Please!!!!!

Gandalfs apprentice · 2 July 2006 · Chapter 999: Partings

Hi, Timmy! Great ending. I'm sorry to lose you to fanfiction; I've enjoyed all of your tales. Are you getting your other works published? Drop a hint to all of us, so we can look for your novels in the bookstores! Best of luck. G.A.

grumpy · 25 June 2006 · Chapter 31: Affray

Yeah they made it out of Moria, with the hammer and Gollum. Plus new friendships between the dwarves and the men. If they look arround them, they might find a package of bandages. The man that was bringing it to them (not the ups man), was rescued by Lassie (seems his name is Timmmy). Anyways on his way down the stairs, he left it by a rock, that is shaped like a duck.

Linda Hoyland · 25 June 2006 · Chapter 31: Affray

I could feel their relief to be in the fresh air again !Another lovely moment for Aragorn and young Daevan.I loved the way you developed this friendship.

RS · 23 June 2006 · Chapter 31: Affray

A big sigh of relief! AAAHHH! Sun and fresh air finally! Their finally out! I can finally sit down and relax a while. Is it over or is there more to come? A couple of your reviews were saying goodbye to you as if you are going to retire from writing. Are you done? Are you really retiring? If so, I am very sad about this. I really hate to see you go as I have enjoyed this fic and your other two as well (Castle 1 & 2 and Twilight of the Gods). If it is, I just want to say a big Thank You for entertaining me.

Elflingimp · 23 June 2006 · Chapter 31: Affray

Ha! they are out! and they won! but even more important they won the trust of the dwarves , which is not a thing that easy to do I might add. I really admire Daevan and how hes grown on this journey ,if not for him I think Aragorn might have been a goner long ago.(and Im glad the bad guys got what was coming to them)

viggomaniac · 19 June 2006 · Chapter 30: The Dimrill Gate

Wait...hold on...say, stop already...Whoa I say! Wow! My heart is still pounding after reading this chapter. You really know how to create excitement. I was totally enthralled the whole way through and there were a number of scenes where I could actually picture this happening like the scenes from FOTR. Incredible writing. Daevan has grown up in a hurry, Strider is as valiant as ever, and the orcs...well, what can I say? Their sheer lack of 'organizational skills' coupled with consummate badness just make them the villains we love to hate! Hmmmm. Nasty promise Gurim makes here -- Strider and Daeven better be careful or they'll end up as orc stew! Ew...that just sounded wrong. Oh well...BTW, I've been watching the original Sharpe series. Bean does look quite yummy I must say and the show (other than some incredibly cheesy music on occasion) is very well done. Sorry for the horribly long delay in reviewing. RL, you know...I have a feeling your story will be drawing to a close soon, but if that's so, it must give you a good feeling to be leaving on such a high note. Excellent writing 'Timmy'. It's been a joy to share the fandom with you. See you at the next chapter.

grumpy · 17 June 2006 · Chapter 30: The Dimrill Gate

Alright, they reached the gate, I do hope they get way past it. Glad to see that Strider is still on his feet, Poor Daevan is in need of some bandages, as are the rest of the party. Remember Daevan you must not use the axe. Ups man has caught sight of a large group of orcs, is heading after them, still hoping to get his clipboard signed. Has a few choice words to say to his boss.

Ainu Laire · 16 June 2006 · Chapter 30: The Dimrill Gate

Wow! What a chapter! What a story! You truly are a brilliant writer! I shall certainly miss you in the fandom. Oh, dang, excellent, excellent story. My heart was pounding the whole time! Really quite brilliant.

Linda Hoyland · 15 June 2006 · Chapter 30: The Dimrill Gate

Aragorn has amazing strength and courage.THe battle sounded hard fought and won.

Larner · 15 June 2006 · Chapter 28: A Valuable Tool

Was able to borrow a bit of computer time tonight. Love the use of Aule's hammer against the orcs, and truly doubt the Vala of the Earth will begrudge it. Aule himself probably helped Daevan wield it. And to see the different reactions is wonderful as well. Hope to catch up in a few days' time.

RS · 15 June 2006 · Chapter 30: The Dimrill Gate

Oh my gosh! This has got to be one of the best chase scenes I have read! I am completely exhausted! They have to make it! One thing for sure, they have to thank their lucky stars for the Orcs' wonderful organizational skills!

Elflingimp · 15 June 2006 · Chapter 30: The Dimrill Gate

Oh!Oh!Oh! They are going thru the gate! But I feel like Im right there with them and we havent gotten to the other side yet! Well I guess I have to wait, gosh it was a great fight ,maybe its time to get out of the amusement park before all the rides break :)

RS · 6 June 2006 · Chapter 29: Gollum

So close and yet so far! It would have been a pleasure taking turns with the club on Gollum! The piece of cloth to gag him was a nice touch. Oh please hurry, I just want them out of that forsaken place!

Linda Hoyland · 5 June 2006 · Chapter 29: Gollum

It is good to learn the story of the sword and see Strider a little better.Gripping as always.

grumpy · 4 June 2006 · Chapter 29: Gollum

I am glad that Aragorn was able to tell Daevan a little about the sword that his grandfather gave to him. Daevan is becoming quite good with it. I love that part about making sure not to fall over a cliff, with the axe. Hey they have Gollum, better with them, then with the orcs. Ups man is currently in the 21st hall. He has become quite frantic, and keeps trying to get the orcs to sign his clipboard. The orcs, just run from him in terror. I think it has to do with his headlamp, makes him look like he has a glowing third eye.