Reviews (168)

Ginger Rich · 31 July 2006 · Chapter 11: Over the Mountains VIII

A wonderful fight scene. Who is this Celebrimbor? Forgive me for my lack of Tolkien knowledge, but the name doesn't ring a bell. Is he the one who makes the rings or wants them made? Anyways, he's a dirty weasel. I didn't think Thranduil was going to fight back in the end; thought he'd freak out from the memory. But of course I was wrong and he fought back like a wild animal. If I ever met a man like him, I'd be running scared.

valjean · 30 July 2006 · Chapter 11: Over the Mountains VIII

Sorry, I just went back a re-read what I wrote, and I want to apologize for the spelling. *Wince* I'm usually more careful...but I forget how to even spell my name when I get excited, so I guess you could consider the terrible spelling a compliment. I was too wound-up to think about something so mundane as spelling...

valjean · 30 July 2006 · Chapter 11: Over the Mountains VIII

Oh dear! It would appear that Annatar's field day is having more repercussions than just signaling that a storm is building. How in the world is Thranduil going to explain all of this to Oropher *without* telling about his little field trip, and the resulting disasters? Somehow I think that the revelation that his son was attacked in Eregion would go over like a lead ballon.... P.S. If Galadriel and Gil-galad detest Annatar that much how did they end up with Nenya and Vilya?

k_lara7 · 27 July 2006 · Chapter 10: Over the Mountains VII

It will be quite interesting to see where this goes from here... Do they condemn Thranduil, or believe him? He sure knows how to pick his fights!

Redheredh · 26 July 2006 · Chapter 10: Over the Mountains VII

Holy Mole! Just as was feared! Gwaelas was lead astray and set upon! Oh, you are so lucky he is going to survive... *huff!* But, poor wrung-out Thranduil too! Ooo, that Honey-tongued, glamorous-lying, balrog-in-waiting... I really am enjoying this adventure... hopefully you can tell that. :) I have to say I *really* enjoyed you little vignette on the mystic of royalty. Very interesting description of a almost indescribable instinct, in elves or humans. ... a shard of the magnificent era they had never known. As I an unashamed support of the Lindarin princes - yay! good on ya for letting Gwaelas prize his feelings. However, ... never quite understand what had caused that idyllic world to collapse... ? I cannot see the Silvan ever having forgotten Melkor or not feeling the repercussions of his return as Morgoth. Like I said before - Can't wait!

jwdisney · 26 July 2006 · Chapter 10: Over the Mountains VII

Goodness, gracious. I love the story, and can't wait to find out what happens next! Thanks for writing such an exciting saga of pre-LOTR Thranduil! He's one of the most dynamic and least documented characters in Tolkien's universe, and I appreciate your approach to his character and motivations. Thanks again for donating your summer to keeping us all entertained! :)

valjean · 26 July 2006 · Chapter 10: Over the Mountains VII

Gah!! The dread cliff-hanger *again*?? Could you at some point conclude a chapter in a manner that doesn't leave me a nervous mess of jelly on the floor? It's bad for the sleep cycle. But seriously, that was a great chapter. You only seem to get better as you go along!

Lady Saruman · 25 July 2006 · Chapter 10: Over the Mountains VII

OH NO! Miss Coriel, you are simply evil. I bet the so called 'Amroth' who had approached Gwaelas when Thranduil was sleeping was Annatar. Then he set his dogs on him and injured the young elf. Good thing someone found him, or it would have been too late. Bringing him to Celeborn and Galadriel was probably the best thing to do. Well, obviously, Thranduil was able to figure out for himself that the extreme tiredness he had felt in the library was the result of Annatar's control of his brain or something. Now, I //think// (the slashes represent an italicized word) Annatar has started to shape-shift into other people as well, to fool and corrupt innocent victims. Gwaelas, who was already sick from the stone walls of Ost-in-Edhil (I forgot if that is where Thranduil and Gwaelas were currently staying), has already become worse when Annatar took control of his mind. And poor Thranduil. I //know// he already has enough to worry about after the meeting with the evil lord, but now he has Gwaelas to worry about too. And, finally, at the end, Thranduil retching and coughing up blood? That doesn’t happen of his own accord. Annatar must have taken control over him again, just like he had in the library. OH NO OH NO first it was Gwaelas, now Thranduil. There's going to be a LOT more trouble coming up. Oh yeah, I'm so pleased you've finished Chapter 10 so quickly. Well, I think you'd better hurry, because summer is almost over. As for me, school starts on August 30, so I don't have much time left. But I'm still going to review! -Lady Saruman

Ginger Rich · 25 July 2006 · Chapter 10: Over the Mountains VII

Bah!! What an ending! Actually I should say, what an un-ending! Goodness, such a wicked cliff-hanger. I know Thranduil and Gwaelas don't die, but I am still incredibly worried. The visuals were amazing! You are a truly terrific writer, and sometimes I hate that you're so good because it makes me so anxious for the characters. It feels so real. lol. Keep up the great work. And tell me what happens!

lwarren · 24 July 2006 · Chapter 10: Over the Mountains VII

I have been holding my breath ever since Thranduil awoke last chapter and Gwaelas was missing. I just knew that Annatar had gotten hold of him again, and the injuries suffered by Thranduil are somehow tied to Shadow, too. In just a few paragraphs you showed Annatar's abilities to present himself as something or someone else entirely, thus concealing his true self from everyone involved. Layer upon layer of deceit - the inhabitants of the city don't see past the pretty, helpful face he's presented...and Gwaelas, bless him, who only knows there is something terrible and dark to be feared, has been tricked by the Lord of Tricks into leaving with him! AGGGHHHHH! I know Thranduil doesn't wish anyone to know about his little field trip into the halls of the elven-smiths, but Coriel, he's not looking too good...I sincerely hope that this is the eye-opener for Celeborn and Galadriel, once they realize who is to blame. I hope.......Wonderful, tense, cliff-clenching chapter, Coriel, you evil author you! Linda

elliska · 14 July 2006 · Chapter 9: Over the Mountains VI

Catching up on reading...this is a great chapter! The way you describe how Thranduil is affected by the shadow of Sauron is incredibly powerful. The conversation with Glorfindel was wonderful--I really liked seeing those two powerful elves together. And Thranduil's dream was horrible. But the end! I fear to see what is going to happen to poor Gwaelas. Hurry with the update!

Redheredh · 13 July 2006 · Chapter 9: Over the Mountains VI

Well, I gather from the previous reviews that Gwaelas is going to make it through. I am relieved. Believe me, you had me more worried about him than Thranduil. That was one awful nightmare visited upon him. Portents a plenty if there is no resistance to Annatar! But, nicely written and played out, I must say. Later on - when Gwaelas is safe! - he should to make an effort to find who delivered the wine and backtrack on that. Never know where proof may be found. And he has *got* to find some real friends to help him! I got the impression that Celeborn is not blind to what is going on. Can he not go to him now? He is going to have to go to a healer anyway...maybe even Galadriel, if it is more than a simple poisoned wound... Hmm, Glorfindel is not going to be of much help, though it seems. But then, maybe this is why he leaves without moving against Annatar himself. When the Maia was locked out of Lindon earlier, I am supposing G was someplace else and Gil-galad did not discuss the matter with that many people. Unless you are still planning to reveal G as shining everyone on including Sauron. Can't wait!

silent planet · 12 July 2006 · Chapter 9: Over the Mountains VI

Super lovely, and I'm always so grateful to see you've updated! You've gone and made me ill with worry over Gwaelas (sp?) so put our hearts to reast soon!

k_lara7 · 11 July 2006 · Chapter 9: Over the Mountains VI

Oh Thranduil is so much like his son, mischief can find him anywhere, even in a quiet safe Library. Hopefully Gwaelas is okay. He needs to get to safe territory soon and have his wound looked at.

valjean · 10 July 2006 · Chapter 9: Over the Mountains VI

Curses!! I HATE cliff-hangers! Now I'm going to be on pins and needles until you update! Ahm....in other words: That was very well done. Very well done indeed...

Jay of Lasgalen · 10 July 2006 · Chapter 9: Over the Mountains VI

Annatar is so supremely, slimily evil! It's very worrying how Thranduil is the only one to recognise his threat - even Glorfindel is oblivious. It seemed somehow very chilling that even an elf like him cannot see the truth. The Lord of Gifts has hoodwinked everybody ... And who drugged Thranduil? Was it Gwaelas? In any case, what's happened to him? I'm catching up on a great story - sorry I have't reviewed before! Jay

Ginger Rich · 10 July 2006 · Chapter 9: Over the Mountains VI

Wow. Amazing work, Coriel. I was on the edge of my seat, thinking that Annatar better get what's coming to him. This chapter was a thrill. Is Thranduil's wound poisoned? Where did Annatar take his friend? Why are the elves so ignorant of Annatar? I have so many questions! Oh my word!

valjean · 25 June 2006 · Chapter 8: Over the Mountains V

Hold the phone! You can't kill off Gwaelas! He's in your story "I Return"!

Redheredh · 20 June 2006 · Chapter 8: Over the Mountains V

Ya know I was really worried for Gwaelas when he was tucked into Thranduil's bed. I had terrible visions of an assassin creeping in and doing him in. 'Cause assassination was what I thought Annatar was pushing *him* to do earlier. Thanks so much for keeping him strong. Poor fella... I can't help but feel he will be sacrificed before the end of this... And then you said something about ... murdering him in bed. Aha! So, I was not being over-dramatic. Wonderful descriptions and writing, btw. What a harrowing spy mission Thranduil undertook! Rash, rash, rash! But, Annatar has overplayed his hand now. Although individually less powerful, the dark lord's growing enemies are canny and numerous. And now forewarned, the good guys may not win the next round, but they will not be defeated either. Waiting on pins and needles for what will happen next!

k_lara7 · 18 June 2006 · Chapter 8: Over the Mountains V

Well, Legolas comes by his bad luck honestly. It would seem that being Prince of Greenwood is dangerous no matter who you are. It must come with the title. As Prince you are destined to get into all matters of trouble, and must make choices in life that define your character for life. Poor Thranduil, hope he gets well soon and safely makes it home. Gwaelas is a true example of the meek overtaking the world. Thranduil is blessed (and cursed) to lead such a people.

Ginger Rich · 18 June 2006 · Chapter 8: Over the Mountains V

I haven't reviewed in a horribly long time. Sorry. Well, I have nothing to say except that Thranduil should get to kick Annatar's butt. He pisses me off. Anyways, great work so far. I'm quite excited that the new chapters are coming more quickly. Sweetness!

jwdisney · 17 June 2006 · Chapter 8: Over the Mountains V

My goodness - what a wonderful story! I'm waiting in the worst suspense to find out what happens next. You truly have a gift for imagination and creating new worlds within Tolkien's. Thanks so much for taking the time to continue writing this history! :) I've enjoyed it since the first story started. I also love the use of Scripture references. Very good work!

k_lara7 · 17 June 2006 · Chapter 7: Over the Mountains IV

So, Thranduil isn't part of the 'IN' crowd? He must be SO disappointed. I love the way the story is unfolding. This explains why Thranduil doesn't have a ring, and yet he is the last true Elvenking of Middle Earth.

Redheredh · 16 June 2006 · Chapter 7: Over the Mountains IV

My, this chapter was full of very *nice* exchanges! :D But, I did like the last with Celeborn for its foreboding a revolt - which Thranduil may be around to witness! Yay! Loved your descriptions of the dreadful pall Annatar can exert. That some suspect the worse and dare not speak it, else it be made true too soon... ominous.

elliska · 12 June 2006 · Chapter 7: Over the Mountains IV

“We know how to defend our own.” Bloody well right! And we know Thranduil proves that too! I'd say Sauron ought to be glad he was talking to Thranduil because Oropher would have intitiated the Second War of Wrath right there. Thranduil is lucky he's an elf because a man of similar temperment would have poped a blood vessel. Poor Celeborn. I'm almost afraid to know what you plan to have Thrandui do!