fic fan · 9 April 2017 · Chapter 6: Many Changes
good job - look forward to the rest. Love your version of Glorfindel.
Author's reply
Thank you, that's always high praise to my ears. :)
Fields of Gold by Levade
Reviews (39)
rick · 20 May 2011 · Chapter 6: Many Changes
I really like the way this is developing - and the understated way Glorfindel uses his talents to help people. Not to mention his entertaining way of aggravating his friends. Please do finish - this hanging thing is too suspenseful.
missystar101 · 27 April 2008 · Chapter 6: Many Changes
please finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Beruthiels Cat · 10 September 2007 · Chapter 6: Many Changes
I come back and re-read this from time to time, and enjoy it just as much with each visit...I do surely wish you'd consider writing more! BC
Author's reply
First, thank you for that lovely message. It was a surprise to see anyone reading this old thing. :) I'm digging out the notes the oh-so-kind Nilmandra sent me on suggestions, dusting it off and going to see if I can finish this. Thank you for the encouragement...no promises but unfinished stories are just a little bit sad.
Bodkin · 3 May 2006 · Chapter 6: Many Changes
Discontinued!!? Why? It's cruel to stir my interest so and then refuse to gratify it! Rethink - I'm sure you want to finish it really.
perelleth · 5 March 2006 · Chapter 6: Many Changes
First, apologies for the delay. Not that I gave up, but life's been intruding in quite a nasty way... and now I'm quite behind... I like this Glorfindel, self assured to the point of being a bit reckless despite his supossed knowledge. He is great fun, and most probably a great headache fo Círdan. Attacked by a band of jellyfish indeed! That was great. I bet they were attracted by his floating mane, and thought he was their lost mummy or something! :-) I like the way he finally opened up to his feelings and decided that he and Bronwe deserved a chance for hapiness, even if there was still work to do in M-earth. Sounded very reasonable to me, and I liked to see him so happy. That was a nice twist. Go on as you can. I am very interested in the wrongness in the waters and in the forest. Now I have surmised that we are not very far from the time when Celerìan sailed, so Shadow is spreading, and the thought that it is spreading across the havens, too, is very interesting.
pipinheart · 2 March 2006 · Chapter 6: Many Changes
Lovely... I like that Glorifindel has someone special, it nice she is a healer...not a very good patient is Glorifindel...Very nice story...I feel for Elrond and the twins, they have a rough road to go. Please continue, and update soon
Nilmandra · 23 February 2006 · Chapter 6: Many Changes
I was thinking about your comment on simplicity when I read this chapter. I like that about Bronwe - she is a complex person, yet her love is straightforward and real. I am glad for that for her and for Glorfindel. I am thrilled he finally came to his senses. Good chapter, nice to see the banter of the Silvans, I love yor old barnacle, and felt awful for Elrond.
Author's reply
I can't promise a happier Elrond in the future chapters, though I'd love to! Lots of good, so now...bad must happen! Bwahaha*coughcough* ;D Thanks for all your help, Nilmandra
Bodkin · 23 February 2006 · Chapter 6: Many Changes
I loved the way Glorfindel quietly strengthened the web the Silvan elves created. He would be very useful that way! And I'm glad he finally acknowledged what Bronwe meant to him. Even if it did take being at the point of a second death. The sight of Erestor watching Elrond grieve for his lost wife was heart-rending. Elrond has withstood so much in his life - I am so glad I know he was reunited with Celebrian. He deserved happiness. I like the Silvan elves on the journey to Imladris. The drunk who thought that Failon made a pretty girl! And the difficulty of finding the hidden valley - and its pleasant greenness - rang very true. Good chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's reply
Hi Bodkin, Glorfindel does have his uses. Chasing off Witch Kings, helping wounded hobbits... ;) He's a good friend to Elrond and to me that's a very endearing thing about him. Elrond certainly had more than enough events in his life that were awful and deserved to have at least someone who would never leave him through a great deal of that time. Thanks again, Bodkin :)
Ellie · 22 February 2006 · Chapter 6: Many Changes
Sigh...Love this rewrite of the story even more. What a wonderfully sexy GLorfindel you have created! Loved the scenes with him and Bron and with him and Cirdan. Feel very sorry for Elrond. More please!
Author's reply
Elrond is an amazing character when you consider all that he went through in his long life. I have always liked the idea that Glorfindel was sent to help him and be by his side and make life...well, easier, or at least make Elrond laugh a bit. :) If anyone needed an unwaiveringly loyal friend it is Elrond and I like to think Glofindel was that. I'll try to write more soon, but I'm so happy you like it so far!
Ellie · 13 February 2006 · Chapter 5: The Pull of Two Worlds
Poor Glorfy! OUCH! I think it is amusing that Glorfindel is comfy being quite the exhibitionist. He's very stubborn, too. That healer will have her hands full with him! Thanks for another fine chapter!
Author's reply
Hi Ellie, Ouch, yep! He kind of gets himself into those situations, doesn't he? Stubborn old elf. ;) Hopefully Bronwe has thought this over in all the years she's had and has some strategies. Thanks, Ellie!
Bodkin · 12 February 2006 · Chapter 5: The Pull of Two Worlds
It's just as well Glorfindel isn't body conscious.... It's to be hoped that nobody in sight of him is body conscious either - although, come to think of it, some are probably conscious of his body in Quite A Different Way! I love gruff nautical Cirdan. And Bronwe, of course, was on hand at a very useful moment there. Mind you, I hope there was an interlude between the luxurious hot bath and the dip in the nasty cold sea. Or Cirdan needn't have bothered carrying all that water! The damage to the plants and the plethora of jellyfish sound ominous signs of ... something. Something is afoot! Quick. Bronwe needs to be treating those jellyfish stings. Before Glorfindel decides to heed Namo's call.
Author's reply
Ah, if only Glorfindel could have appreciated the appreciation! Then again, his hair was full of salt water and his skin was marred, so maybe not. ;) I think we'll see this show get on the road next chapter, if the muses cooperate and we don't have any costume malfunctions. Thanks for reading and commenting, Bodkin!
Nilmandra · 11 February 2006 · Chapter 5: The Pull of Two Worlds
You know, Daw has a good point with the Naked!Glorfindel thing. He may not have noticed that he wore nary a stitch of clothing, but we noticed and were suitably impressed. Impressed that he didn't care, really. I love how you worked in the jellyfish stuff and his glimpse of home and the way it conflicted with duty. Nicely done.
Author's reply
Here we are again with the breach of breeches. *g* One might think it was the highlight of the chapter! Glorfindel, as you know, is a shameless creature, and I blame him for inducing the author to mix water with Naked!Glorfindel (not that it's tough). Thank you for reading and beta'ing -- I believe we saw your Glorfindel sans clothing once in HLII as well, didn't we?? ;D For all your time and advise, mille grazie!
Jay of Lasgalen · 11 February 2006 · Chapter 5: The Pull of Two Worlds
Ouch - poor Glorfindel! Like you, I tend not to think of jellyfish as that dangerous (though to be swimming, surounded by them, would be horrible) but I know that some (the Australian box jellyfish, for example) are very bad news :( I like the way you introduce more and more signs that there is some great upheaval in the natural world. Great work! Jay
Author's reply
Hi Jay, I've never tangled with a jelly, but my brother stepped on one once and hopped around, screaming like a banshee for a good long while. His foot swelled and he had some lovely burn mark type things for a while but he survived. *g* Thanks for reading and commenting! :)
daw the minstrel · 11 February 2006 · Chapter 5: The Pull of Two Worlds
I couldn't help but notice that Glorfindel is naked for most of this chapter. I just thought I'd point that out. So something is wrong in Mithlond. Hm. The corruption of the natural world can't be a good thing. What's going on? And Gildor is coming soon. He's an interesting figure. He seems to be nomadic. It's a life that's hard for me to imagine.
Author's reply
Glorfindel naked. Really? Good thing it's words and not art then, isn't it? What is wrong will be clearer by the next chapter, I hope. Gildor is one of those people you invite to a party because they say the most unexpected things. It's never dull with him around. Thanks for reading and commenting, Daw! The Board for the Care and Clothing of Elves will be looking into this breach of breeches, though I really think Glorfindel was perfectly happy.
Bodkin · 8 February 2006 · Chapter 4: Mithlond
The fishing boat crisis - there's such a contrast between the dangers of 'those in peril on the sea' and the immortality of elven lives. The poor mother. Yet even there, there is the irrepressibility of life going on. The new baby - and the little boy. I loved the small boy clutched in his sister arms. "Glows, sissy!" That must be a disconcerting thing to see for the first time. It must be so distressing for a healer like Bronwe to be up against mortality all the time. Especially abrupt mortality. I love the way Glorfindel just opens his arms for her. Such good time contrasts between the elves and men. Great practical Cirdan.
Author's reply
I've questioned myself having an elven healer helping mortals as well, but since I set this up as some of the Men of Numenor had remained after sailing to aid Gil-galad, I decided it was plausible if not really canon. It would be hard though. At the same time, I see it could be rewarding in seeing the renewal of life through each generation. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Bodkin! :)
Ellie · 6 February 2006 · Chapter 4: Mithlond
You do a really nice job of showing the emotion of the folk at the seaside town and protraying the mortals in such a way that they feel very different from the elves. Enjoyed the reunion of Bron and Glor.
Author's reply
Thanks, Ellie. :) I'd love to say something really intelligent or witty now, but the brain is blank. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
meckinock · 5 February 2006 · Chapter 4: Mithlond
I'm afraid I'm not up to a coherent review, but I really enjoyed all of this, Cirdan especially. It's not often that we see a portrayal of him.
Author's reply
Cirdan is a great character, I agree. I always find it interesting that he gave up his ring to Gandalf. To me he was a wise, gruff old elf, far happier building ships and holding his haven safe for all who would sail. Thanks for reading, Meckinock!
daw the minstrel · 5 February 2006 · Chapter 4: Mithlond
It's interesting to see men and elves living so close together. That kind of loss would be awful in a small community. Was it all men, do you think? Do elves work as fisherfolk?
Author's reply
I don't know if, in canon, this would have flown. Considering Men once came to the rescue of Lindon and Mithlond in Gil-galad's day, I didn't think it was too far-fetched that maybe some of the Men of Numenor had stayed. I think when I first wrote this I had all of the ships lost as just men and not elves. Elves did fish, but not like Men did. I see the Teleri fishing more from the shores rather than going to sea in boats, then bringing hauls back in for market. Elves to me would take only what they needed for that time. Same for men, but I always kind of thought they would have a market and sell the fresh catches where the elves were more self-sufficient (or lazy and went and bought at the market!). Thanks for reading, Daw!
Bodkin · 22 January 2006 · Chapter 3: Where to Go From Here
I love watching Elladan and Elrohir being sensible and protective - it so goes against their usual portrayal! Beautiful description of Imladris - it builds a lovely picture in my mind of the open, airiness of it. And of the way it is part of its environment. And I love the reflections on the qualities of the different races of elves. Poor Erestor! Left sorrowing for the lack of the local trouble-makers. He will have nothing to complain about and he and Elrond will be able to live in peace and harmony over the winter. Maybe silence and companionable study is what Elrond needs right now. I don't know - he seems very alone to me, but then that is not an unfamiliar experience to him. Erestor will be a good support for him, but he seems to lack the warmth that Elrond is missing. I'm left with a lovely clear picture of the pair of them warming their toes in the serenity of Imladris.
Author's reply
Thanks, Bodkin! It's always lovely to know what readers do like, and what needs improving. Elrond had a really rotten lot in life in many ways, but he was such a pivotal person and I always like to think there were companions placed around him who could support him through all the awful times as well as celebrate the happy ones. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing -- I appreciate it!
Nilmandra · 21 January 2006 · Chapter 3: Where to Go From Here
I admit I just laughed at Glorfindel suddenly having to face a few friends if he showed up again. What Glorfindel, a dragon? Another balrog or three? Sauron himself? And Glorfindel having to answer, 'an orc, I rode alone'. Yep, embarrassment works. Go twins! I like your Erestor. I like his doubts but his trust in Elrond. And that he cares enough to make sure Elrond is well.
Author's reply
Namo would not be amused, I think. *g* But Ecthelion, Tuor and Eglamoth might laugh themselves sick. ;) "How many elves have died twice, Glorfindel..." Kind of mean, but guy humour? I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for reviewing!
perelleth · 21 January 2006 · Chapter 3: Where to Go From Here
Now, this is a good one! The twins imparting lessons in caution! It was great fun, really. No wonder Glorfindel wavered between amusement and outrage... but in the end, he taught them well it seems...
Author's reply
Heh...it is ironic, isn't it? Elrond might want to hear that for himself to believe it! Thank you for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Ellie · 20 January 2006 · Chapter 3: Where to Go From Here
Another fine chapter. I wish the chapters were longer, but at least they seem somewhat frequent in the updates. Keep up the good work.
Author's reply
Good point about the length of chapters -- I'll try to post longer ones from now on. Sorry for the delay on this, I was gone last week. Thank you so much for your review and for reading. I appreciate it!
daw the minstrel · 20 January 2006 · Chapter 3: Where to Go From Here
I liked Erestor's doubts about the architecture of Imladris. I'd have been horrified it I'd been him. But as he says, you shouldn't underestimate Elrond. I also like the idea of the twins lecturing Glorfindel on caution.
Author's reply
When I first saw the movie Imladris I remember thinking...but the bugs and cold air and snow! Beautiful, yes, but practical, no. I suppose if you're Elves and have Vilya you can do more than we can (I sure hope so!), but still I was surprised to see Frodo in an open-air room. Underestimate Elrond? Nevah! *g* And yes, it is ironic to have the twins lecturing Glorfindel, or anyone, on caution. Elrond might find it amusing or just plain shocking. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Daw!
Larner · 17 January 2006 · Chapter 2: Wonder as I Wander
I find myself wondering if rabies or similar conditions run among sea mammals as well as land ones. Sounds indeed as if the Enemy is being quite vindictive.
Author's reply
Mmmm...it's not rabies. That would be easier in the long run, and yes the enemy is hitting as hard as he can. Thank you for reading!