Land of Light and Shadows by Thundera Tiger
Lera · 13 October 2004 · Chapter 37: From the Ashes
Ok, it's 11 and as a new college student with a very busy life I am tired. Apparently too tired to finish a sentance. Basically I think I meant it's weird to see our unchallengeable Elessar and Eomer so confused and not perfect all the time. Sorry. Insert that into my last review.
Lera · 13 October 2004 · Chapter 37: From the Ashes
From the ashes...a fire shall spring. Oh, my gosh I cannot tell you how glad I am to get an update on this story. It has been and remains my favorite story since I began it a year ago. Even though by the time this update came I had to do some serious reviewing. But I'll always come back. I am thankful you have finally lifted the cloud from Aragorn and Eomer's mind. It was interesting for so long to have our seemingly unchallengable Elessar. But it was starting to get frustrating that no one knew what was going on. I am happy to see them once again as the shrewd strategic warrior we know him to be. I'm appreciating Eomer more and more. For a while a was a bit annoyed with him, even though he was partly under the affect of the shadow. The whole concept of the shadow was so interesting. I'm thinking maybe it not only affects people by making them act contrary to their nature, but actually exploits their weaknesses. Scary thought. Things you thought you'd kept mastered and hidden suddenly brought to the surface and shown to all. I'm ready to get back to Legolas and Gimli. Since they weren't mentioned at all in this chapter I'm guessing we'll get to them(and that roach Dashnir) in the next chapter. Thanks for the update.
Rochwen · 9 October 2004 · Chapter 37: From the Ashes
Miss Tiger, As always, quite brillant. This chapter seemed a little slow though. I'm guessing it's a set up for a couple huge chapters to follow? God, I hope so. As always, Your humble servant, Rochwen P.S. "From the ashes" is from Bilbo's poem about Aragorn, right? From the ashes a fire shall be woken, A light from the shadows shall spring. Renewed shall be blade that was broken, The crownless again shall be king. Bonus points for me.
Author's reply
*happily awards bonus points to Rochwen* Yes, I will readily admit that this is a slow chapter. Hopefully it's the last slow one until the end. All the information is out, the plans are set, and now it's a matter of following them through and improvising when some of them don't work. Which means we can head straight for the final action, which should be fun. I'm looking forward to the next few chapters.
French Pony · 8 October 2004 · Chapter 37: From the Ashes
I have to say that, were I in the Haradric position, I don't know that I would want to trust Aragorn too much. He's being extremely cagey, to the point of taking people along to look for buried landmines without telling them what they're looking for. It strikes me that time is of the essence here, and that Aragorn is wasting quite a bit of it by dancing around and euphemizing and hedging. If he trusts these people as much as he needs to get them to do this, he should trust them enough to come out and tell them what he plans to do. These Haradrim seem to be the sort who would appreciate directness in an equal leader, and if Aragorn had shared his plans earlier, they might have used their time for kicking the plans around and improving them. I'm sure there are some flaws in this plan that other heads could have detected had they known the plan earlier.
Author's reply
In Aragorn's defense, he didn't take Arabano along of his own free will. That was Budari's idea. And he didn't say anything about it because he wasn't sure he was right and he didn't want to spend more effort than necessary on what could be a wild goose chase. I've been thinking about your suggestions, and I'm going to have to both agree and disagree. Yes, it would make sense for Aragorn to be more forthcoming about the whole thing. Yes, different perspectives would be able to spot flaws in this plan if they had seen its earlier incarnation. But I'm going to disagree about the trust issue. Given that Aragorn is from the north, none of them are going to be inclined to trust him very much anyway. Aragorn knows this and so he's going for something a lot easier to earn: respect. The Haradrim respect someone who can play word games and win. I doubt I've portrayed it as much as I intended to, but I had hoped to give the impression that politics in Harad is very much about how, when, and why something is said. The Haradrim respect intelligence and they respect the ability to manipulate conversations, so Aragorn is playing to that. He's also making it absolutely clear that he is to be the leader in these matters by providing them with their only real working plan and holding it back just long enough that there isn't time to come up with anything else. It means he's going to call the shots in the end, and that's something he considers important. It's also something the Haradrim will respect. The Haradrim might appreciate directness in an equal leader, as you put it, but they don't respect it. They're very cagey themselves, and anyone who can outmaneuver them is someone they consider worthy of leadership. At least, that's my take on it. But I will take into account your suggestions.
Estel_Mi_Olor · 8 October 2004 · Chapter 37: From the Ashes
I would like to award Aragorn, and through him Thundera Tiger for THE PLAN. This PLAN is not only brilliant under the difficult circumstances, but so crazy it may actually work. Furthermore this plan makes the most all possible alliances and resources, ensuring a unified attack on Khurintu. Finally, the maker of this plan was not only wounded but suffering from mental trauma due to the absence of his good friends. The Committee feels that Aragorn rightfully deserves this award. Congratulations. But seriously though-many cheers on that plan. How did you do it? I felt like Eomer throughout this chapter, wondering what on earth you were thinking. Good job. All characters are wonderfully portrayed with believable disbelief on their parts etc. I think the phrase "from the ashes" comes from the Aragorn poem-"Not all that glitters is gold...fromt the ashes will rise..." I hope I'm right... Thanks again for this great chapter! Cheers and keep writing!
Author's reply
The crazy plans are always the best kind. Aragorn gratefully accepts the award for THE PLAN but requests that you keep the medal/statue/paper signifying this award in your custody until the return to Minas Tirith. He's afraid of having it pilfered. I like the phrase believable disbelief. I'm going to have to use that some time. As for feeling like Eomer throughout the chapter, that's partially why I used him for a POV. I felt the same way for much of it. What in the world is Aragorn thinking? Still, I believe there's a chance to make this work, though there will be moments that require improvisation. No plan ever works exactly as it's designed to. You got the reference correct. "From the Ashes" is indeed from the Aragorn poem. Congratulations. Aragorn would like to offer you an award in return, but he's a little busy at the moment. You might have to take a rain check.
Galimeril · 8 October 2004 · Chapter 37: From the Ashes
Hey, It's been a while! Nice to hear from you again. Great Ch! By the way... "All that is gold does not glitter, not all those who wander are lost; the old that is strong does not wither, deep roots are not reached by the frost. FROM THE ASHES A FIRE SHALL BE WOKEN, a light from the shadows shall spring; renenwed shall be blade that was broken, the crownless again shall be king." LOL Update soon! Galimeril ;D
Author's reply
Yes, that is indeed where the line comes from. Perhaps a trifle too obvious, but that's okay, I suppose. I love those lines anyway, obvious or not, and I think they fit the chapter and upcoming events well.
fadagaski · 8 October 2004 · Chapter 37: From the Ashes
Just a quick review. Fantastic chapter, as always, and for once I didn't have to skim the last two chapters to understand what was going on! Wheee! Was, of course, disappointed not to see Legolas and Gimli, or even Imrahil, but now that the action is really kicking up in Haradhur I can understand why they weren't in this chapter. Am still loving all the little details put in about desert life. Utterly fascinating, and in the exact style of JRRT going in to so much depth. (Am loving Aragorn and Eomer all the more. It's really not healthy how much they make me laugh, especially the latter). Chapter title: Bilbo's song for Elessar?
Author's reply
Next chapter SHOULD include Legolas, Gimli, and Imrahil (though not all together, of course) so hopefully that will help you out. The title was of course from Bilbo's song for Elessar. Kind of obvious, but oh well. I figured that if nobody knew it already, this would be a good time for them to get acquainted with the books. Incidentally, Eomer wishes me to pass on the message that he is not comic relief. He is merely the sanest one there at the moment, and in contrast to madness, this can appear humorous. His words. Not mine.
Jay of Lasgalen · 8 October 2004 · Chapter 37: From the Ashes
Ah yes - the verse Bilbo wrote for Aragorn. I'm glad he has 'a cunning plan', I just hope it works! Meanwhile, what's happening with Legolas and Gimli? And when are you going to update 'Fear No Darkness'? I want to find out about Elrohir!
Author's reply
"Fear No Darkness" will be updated once I get through two other WIPs, so that might be a while. Sorry about the delay, but if you really want, I'll let you take Elrohir home in the meantime. ;) He's becoming a bit bored by the wait.
elf-girl · 12 September 2004 · Chapter 36: Changing of the Guard
It was a really good chapter and I liked specially the part of Legolas and Gimli, it was really charming. I don't know why but when I see the movies of the lord of the rings, I just want that some characters like Legolas die... I like Legolas and all but, Legolas dying, I really want to see something like that, so please, update soon.I am wondering what is about to happen. Bye. Elf-girl
Author's reply
Thank you very much for the review! Unfortunately, I can tell you that Legolas is not going to die in this story as I'm not going to swerve AU. At least, not THAT AU. So Legolas, Gimli, Aragorn, Eomer, and Imrahil will all survive. I can't promise anything about the other charcters, but those five will definitely live to see the end of the tale.
Lindelea · 7 July 2004 · Chapter 36: Changing of the Guard
How did I manage to miss this story? (Well, have gone a long time without reading, but have a bit of reading time today...) Intricately woven, multilayered, and as excellent as I remember your writing to be. You have such a deft way with Legolas and Gimli, but that is not all there is to the story, by any means. Somehow you have woven all these threads together and managed not to confuse the reader. Very nice job.
Author's reply
It relieves me to no end to hear you say that I've kept confusion to a minimum. Wow. That...well, it made my day when I got back from vacation and read your review. Thank you. Thank you very much! It's what I struggle with most in this fic, actually. I try to make it somewhat clear, but the point of the beginning is that Khurintu has pulled the wool over everyone's eyes, so it's supposed to be confusing. Ah well. I tried. Anyway, thank you so much for your comments, and I'm glad you like the interaction between Legolas and Gimli. They're quite obviously my favorite duo, and it makes me very happy to hear that other people enjoy them, too.
Rochwen · 16 June 2004 · Chapter 2: Near to the Sea
Miss Tiger, These shorter chapters at the beginnning of the story are introductory I suppose. I deeply enjoy each and every one of these. I like to have a background and setup for anything I read. Somehow, it means it's easier for me to predict what may happen and become more involved with the characters. Though short, there was one specific quote I would like to point out: "It bothers you, doesn't it? It is a thing you cannot understand and are powerless to alter. And someday it may take him from us. And when that day comes, there is nothing that can be done to stop the forces at work within his heart." Aragorn spoke this to Gimli, but I think it can also apply to another character. What happens when Gimli ages and grows weak? Legolas will never truly understand it. And whether he does or doesn't, he still can't halt the slow march of time. Someday Aragorn may have to tell Legolas the exact same thing. And another quick insight. Legolas wants to sail into the West. He must wait for Aragorn and Gimli to pass first. Does that mean that he may look forward to that day? Will their deaths be seen as a mixed blessing? We, foolish mortals that we are, will never know. Your servant, Rochwen
Author's reply
Hello again! Ah yes, the first few chapters... What you have to keep in mind while reading this fic is that it was my second attempt at LotR fanfiction. The story is still going because it's such a long fic, but the first seven or so chapters were very tentative for me. After that I became more confident and the chapters became longer as I finally figured out some of the characters. I love your comments on Aragorn's insight, because it certainly applies to how Legolas sees Gimli. Or any of his mortal friends, for that matter. In fact, you've given me a plotbunny for a fic involving Legolas and Faramir. We'll see if it develops into something more. That mixed blessing comment really got me thinking. TT
Rochwen · 15 June 2004 · Chapter 1: The Invitation
Miss Tiger, I'm very sorry to have to send you another one of these. This isn't really a review; I just forgot to ask you a rather important question. Do you really want to receive these, or are they just annoying to you and a waste of time for me? If you do enjoy reviews, what do you want people to write about? Do you want them to respond to how the characters affect them? Do you want comments on the entire work, meaning focusing on the story rather than the characters within it? Just tell me what you have come to expect from other reviewers. I wish to reciprocate, at least somewhat, for the great entertainment you have provided me and countless others. Your humble servant, Rochwen
Author's reply
Dear Rochwen, Do I enjoy reviews? Most emphatically yes! Do I ask for them? Well, no, but that's because I'm so bad at giving out reviews of my own that I feel guilty asking for someone else to give me a review. But yes, I really do enjoy reviews. I write these stories for myself but also for others. However, the only way for me to know if my fics are affecting readers the way I'd like them to is through reviews. As a result, I read and cherish every review I get. I really don't want to tell you *what* to review. It feels somewhat dictatorial of me. But if you're really interested, my best reviewers do a number of things: constructive criticism, comment on new insights on the characters, cite passages that really impressed them, cite passages that really *didn't* impress them, etc. I have reviewers focused on the story as a whole as well as reviewers focused on the characters, and I love feedback from both groups. I guess I'm really looking for what stands out most for you, whether it's a flaw or a gem. Because whatever stands out, that's what I need to focus on. I either need to improve it or figure out what made it tick so that I can do it again. To conclude this ramble, I basically need three things out of reviewers: 1)Stop me if the story or the characters start to move too far from acceptable canon interpretation. 2)Let me know what I'm doing right so I can keep doing it. 3)Let me know what you as readers would like to see further explored or developed. And with that, I'll let you go because I've rambled on long enough. Thank you so much for the question, though. It made me stop to think, and I love questions that give me the chance for introspection, expecially if it's about writing. Thanks again! Humbly once more, TT
Rochwen · 15 June 2004 · Chapter 1: The Invitation
Miss Tiger, I must say that I am most impressed by your work. Your's were the first fictions that I have ever read, and it is because of you that I have continued to read. Your stories are, above all else, true to Tolkien. That is something I admire, for most authors tend to remove their characters from cannon simply for convenience. This first chapter of "Land of Light and Shadows" promises to prove itself an admirable companion to all of your other works. I deeply enjoy the quick, dry humor present throughout your stories. However, what keeps me enthralled is the drama. The way you can show deep respect, horror, fear, pain, trust, friendship, and hope is the reason that you excell. Another thing that makes me already adore this tale is the mention of Faensul. I hope that this intelligent creature appears often in later chapters. He appears to be full of energy, arrogant, stubborn, brilliant, and proud. Rather reminds me of his rider. Please continue to include horses in your works. For those of us who actually know something about them, it's a blessing to find an author who can converse easily about them without makeing us blanch. Your humble servant, Rochwen
Author's reply
Dear Rochwen, I'm going to answer your two reviews separately, so if for some reason the email system stalls out, don't fear. I've got answers to your second review coming in a bit. Anyway... Thank you very much for your comments about staying true to Tolkien. I will readily admit to the fact that I tweak canon from time to time and embellish in places if I feel it suits the story better, but I do try to stay as true to the source as I can. I breathe a sigh of relief whenever anyone confirms this for me, because I become so involved in my own stories that sometimes I wonder if I've taken things a bit too far. Also, I thank you for your comments on emotions in the story. I try to keep a balance between various emotional highs and lows, but as with canon, sometimes I become too involved and I'm never sure if I've overdone it or underdone it. As for Faensul, he will play a rather significant part in this story's end, and he'll make an appearance in future stories. I once ran all of my original characters through a Mary Sue litmus test, and Faensul came out as the one closest to a Mary Sue. It figures. But I'm too attached to him, and I figure that if I've already got a Mary Sue in place, I might as well make use of him. Even if he is a horse. Thank you once again, and now I'm off to answer your second review. Yours most humbly, TT
Estel_Mi_Olor · 14 June 2004 · Chapter 36: Changing of the Guard
*Stares at computer screen in wide eyed wonder.* "Wow." Thundera, you know your stuff. I mean, your fic has a seemingly complicated plan, which actually works. Another wow. And perhaps Aragorn doesn't have a plan, but you certainly do. My congratulations. Ever considered writing professionally? Not necassarily fiction, but say, the re-telling of some great war? Alright, I'll stop making sugesstions on how you should live your life, and get to my comments. The scene between Gimli and Legolas was very touching. I was wondering what had happened to them. Gimli is a wreck, of course, but Legolas sleeping with his eyes closed? For some odd reason, that is probably more disturbing, and to Gimli as well. Their friendship is so beautiful! Especially Legolas's singing of the song of the sea, risking himself like that. Good thing it worked. It is sad that they are going to seperate, but I have come to realize, like the both of them, that that is their only chance of survival. Good luck Legolas, and Gimli, for as I recall Khurintu was coming after them in the last chapter... Ah, the unraveling. I love that. And what a story! Amazing how the pieces fit together so smoothly. And isn't blackmail fun? Aragorn's manipulation of Fastahn was very well done. Poor guy, he is in a tough spot, isn't he? I am literally hanging on the edge of my seat waiting to hear what Aragorn's plan will be. At least the specifics, and what he has in mind for Soltari. I can see that they is going to be a big payday for Khurintu. And all Harad will witness their defeat, how nice! I can't wait! Keep writing! Thanks!
Author's reply
*blushes shamelessly* Pardon me while I glue together some ladders in an effort to snag my floating ego. Thank you so much for your comments! The idea of writing professionally has always intrigued me, but I'm afraid I'm short on connections and know-how. Maybe later in life. I'm young. I've got time. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the scene between Legolas and Gimli. I tried so hard to keep from descending into something sappy and icky, and that became extremely difficult when we got to the part about the song. I considered leaving it out altogether, but then that would have made all the sea stuff at the beginning rather pointless for this fic (though it's still important for another fic I've got planned). Anyway, glad you liked it. I was worried about it. And yes, blackmail is extremely fun, and I took great pleasure in giving Aragorn some latitude in this chapter. As someone already said, he shifted into Eomer-mode, and he had great fun doing it.
French Pony · 12 June 2004 · Chapter 36: Changing of the Guard
Well, it looks like Aragorn's hearing has returned, so it wasn't that serious a case of tinnitus after all. The Good Guys have met to compare notes about who was double-crossed by whom, most of the cards are on the table, Éomer is still providing comic relief, the requisite element of human stupidity in any endeavor has been introduced thanks to Fastahn, and Aragorn has a plan. It's all over but the shouting, and it looks like the shouting's about to begin. Meanwhile, Legolas and Gimli seem like two very unhappy campers. Gimli looks like he'll do okay. He's tough, and he seems to have come out of the worst of things physically, and he's being well taken care of. Legolas is probably toasted an interesting shade of red right now. And a sunburnt Elf is not a well Elf. He sounds like he's pretty much at the end of his emotional rope, though. He really ought to sleep more before he decides on anything to do. It does sound as if separation might be the best option, but they'd best think it through carefully before Legolas goes anywhere. He should have some very clear goal in mind before he sets out, or else the hot open desert and the strain of leaving Gimli behind will reduce him to a crying mess before he can be of much use.
Author's reply
Well, Aragorn's hearing might be coming back, but the effects of losing that hearing are going to influence one or two decisions coming up. And Gimli will be fine as long as he can get some peace and quiet, which really isn't going to happen, I'm sorry to say. Legolas would be fine if he could get some rest, too, and I completely agree with you on his needing more sleep. He'd rather sit and brood, though. Stubborn elf. Ah well. Makes for an interesting desert journey.
fadagaski · 12 June 2004 · Chapter 36: Changing of the Guard
*applauds* Another brilliant chapter! Between the re-emerging banter of Gimli and Legolas, and Aragorn's final transition into desert politics, I could barely keep up with the pace of things! But I managed, somehow. *grin* My personal favourite phrase of the entire chapter was "caught between a Balrog and a charging Glorfindel". Hehehe. It's like an insider's joke. Perfectly geeky, but I love it. It's amazing how you describe Gimli's dizzy spells. You really put across how confusing and surreal it is for him, without actually losing track of what's going on. And poor Legolas! It was a great step to make him sing of the sea to ensnare everyone. And he's suffering so much. *beams* I love angst. Aragorn's abrupt shift into what I affectionately call Eomer-mode is very good, not least because it's actually still in character for him. At least for the reasons you give. His injuries, I think, are the final straw. And I don't blame him for being not a little harsh to his companions (and enemies, one hopes). That little line that they were "looking admiringly" at him (or something) - very sly, but it really sets the mood. You can tell that he's back in his element, though he can't hear worth a damn, and that things are finally looking up for the northerners and their friends. Hooray for new chapters!
Author's reply
I've been eagerly waiting to give Aragorn a chance to cut loose, and he's been asking me about it for a while, too. He's still holding back a bit, but once things really get underway, he is more than willing to take his frustrations out on a certain tribal leader that will soon be coming back to Haradhur. I like your description of "Eomer-mode." It's not something I would have thought of, but it does give an interesting perspective to the situation. Yeah, watch for more Eomer-mode Aragorn in the future. And watch for Eomer to go beyond Eomer-mode. He's getting a little antsy. As for Gimli, I'm immensely relieved that the dizzy spells came off well. I basically wrote them in the same style that I used when Legolas and Gimli escaped, because that was also told from Gimli's perspective. It makes for a more harried, surreal vision of what's happening, and I wanted that in there to mesh better with Aragorn and Eomer's section. Glad it turned out!
Bodkin · 11 June 2004 · Chapter 36: Changing of the Guard
Thank you for getting back to this - I really want to know how they all get out of it - and poor Legolas and Gimli have been suffering in the cave for a long time! Look forward to the next instalment.
Author's reply
You're very welcome, and I'd like to know how they all get out of it, too. ;) Actually, I don't, because I already know how, but I've love to see it written out in final form, if you know what I mean. I'll work on getting the next part out soon!
Nikara · 10 June 2004 · Chapter 36: Changing of the Guard
"of man caught between an angry Balrog and a charging Glorfindel" That is a great quote. It brings a very definite picture to mind. Great chapter. Things are starting to come together now. I can't wait for more.
Author's reply
The funny thing about that quote is that it came to me after all the edits and rewrites were done. I was about to post the story and was reading through it one last time when I got to that part and decided that I should insert something from Aragorn's past. I first came up with a Balrog, and then I thought that something from the Rivendell part of Aragorn's past should be in there, which led me to visions of an angry Glorfindel or an angry Elrond. Then I thought, "Let's include them both!" And that's what happened. Kind of funny, actually. And the really funny thing is that it seems to be the most quoted part of the story. Strange how things work out...
Hisie Lome · 19 May 2004 · Chapter 1: The Invitation
Well, I was going to read the Seas of Fate....I looked at the reviews and thought that this was serendipitous ....What a strange site that this must be....often times it seems we all read in a circle. "Imrahoil stated: do you know that an addle brained Eomer is a threat to Gondor? Rohan needs a dependable king. Gimli doesn't even get a glimpse of Moria and on top of it he's dying. And Legolas, poor Legolas, is rotting in a cave AND in the desert simultanously, nowhere a tree in sight, and it's a wood elf we're talking about. Do you really think that's nice?! So, DO something about it. Middle earth needs you! " (Imrahoil, please forgive me for stealing your lines....I am trying to 'sweet talk' Thundera Tiger into becoming a)inspired, b)getting a really fast muse ,c) posting really, really soon , and/or d)knowing that some fans are just pests who are quite selfish and don't believe that writers have real lives not in front of their keyboards...) LOL! So now you have at least 2 people bugging you. DITTO, to everything Imrahoil had to say...I could not have said it better! I hope you can see the humor in this- Minna Sedh, Hisie Lome
Author's reply
*snort* Two people? Actually, you should take a look at my inbox sometimes. Really fascinating what kind of threats I get from time to time about completing stories, particularly this one. Anyway, *please* rest assured that I have not abandoned this story. I got sidetracked, violently ill, incredibly busy, and then muses from other stories descended. But I am still working on it, though I'm working on Fear No Darkness a bit more right now. But LoLaS is also getting a lot of attention, because it's next in the rotation after FND. Hang on a few more weeks. I know it seems like a long time, but I really hope it will be worth it. I'm rather fond of the Legolas and Gimli section that will be coming out. And thank you so much for taking the time to "sweet talk" me. It really does mean a lot. Thanks again!
Hisie Lome · 19 May 2004 · Chapter 1: The Invitation
Hey, it has been some time and at some other site....I look forward to the next update(36, I think). I understand computer problems. I looked at the translation from chapter one ....E gara um caul a u-broniaa aglaredh, Faensul—He has an affliction and cannot endure your glory, Faensulate , and had to laugh! Hope all is well....Minna Sedh, Hisie Lome
Author's reply
Well, all is more or less well. Soemtimes less, sometimes more. Difficult to say. Computer problems in addition to health problems have made writing a little lower on the priority scale than I like, but...well, I'm trying to come back. I hope to get a new chapter up for you within a few weeks! That's something, isn't it?
Ilana · 19 May 2004 · Chapter 20: Test and Trials
I absolutely adore your story so far! It is well done and interesting. I have a question. Wouldn't Legolas' position as "underling" suggest a ranking in which Gondor could be assumed more powerful than Lasgalen? What would Thranduil think of *that*? I guess this just shows my ignorence in the face of politics encompassing monarchies.
Author's reply
First of all, thank you for your review. I absolutely love it when people chime in and review mid-piece, because it shows they're actually thinking about what they're reading, and that makes me very happy. So thank you for that. As for your question, here is how I see the political structure working: Technically, Aragorn is king of the reunified kingdom of Arnor and Gondor, which includes Eriador, Erebor, Dale, Gondor, Rohan, Ithilien, Belfalas, Lebennin, etc. Within that area, certain sections have been set aside as independent states that owe some form of allegience to Gondor. Examples of this would be Erebor, Dale, Rohan, and the Shire. Other areas have set aside as vassal states, which means they have some autonomy but are not nearly as independent as the independent states. Their leaders answer directly to Aragorn, and if the king wished to, he could reassume control over the vassal. An example of this would be Belfalas and Imrahil. Dol Amroth is the seat of power for Belfalas, and Imrahil rules it, but he does so in Aragorn's name and he is answerable for any actions he takes, unlike Eomer, who can operate with more or less complete autonomy. I invision Ithilien as being similar to Belfalas. The human population is ruled by Faramir, who answers directly to Aragorn. Legolas rules the elves, and because of the differences in race and custom, he has a bit more autonomy than Faramir, but in the end, his colony is also a vassal state of Gondor. He is living on borrowed land, after all, and it being so close to Gondor's seat of power, I doubt that Aragorn would have consented to make Ithilien completely independent. So Legolas is technically beneath Aragorn in power. The only tie that Legolas has to Lasgalen is the fact that his father rules there. Legolas could probably return and take up his duties as a prince, but when he left to go to Ithilien, he did not leave to make a colony of Lasgalen but rather a colony of his own, and he did so with Aragorn's permission. Legolas's group of elves are a realm of their own as far as other elves are concerned, just like Lothlorien and Rivendell. So they're not answerable to Lasgalen but they are answerable to the power upon whose land they live, and that would be Gondor. Hope I didn't muddle that too much for you. Anyway, that's how I see the politics.
Littlefish · 29 February 2004 · Chapter 35: Fractals
Ahhhh. *Littlefish lets out a contented sigh* This was so nice. I have been so busy lately that the chance to sit down and read this amazing story was simply wonderful. Awesome job in every aspect. You keep weaving me tighter and tighter into the story. I thought your characters seemed especially alive and real in this chapter, and the continuing development of your plot has my mind spinning. This story is like an intricate puzzle, with each of the characters having their own pieces. Until they all unite and put it all together, things will still remain somewhat of a mystery. Masterful writing. This chapter was perfect for bringing some of the last little threads together before the unveiling of the final product. We see the tribes finally uniting to stand again Khurintu. Will it be enough, however? Will Imrahil arrive just in time to save the day? What part do Gimli and Legolas have to play in the final scheme of things? These are just a few of the burning questions I have regarding this fic. It is fun to speculate on what you are going to do next. One thing is for sure, none of the 'good' characters seem to be in very good condition at the moment, while the 'bad' ones arene't doing to bad. This does not bode well for the future. I am really excited about where you are going with this fic, and I really do love this story a whole lot. Update as soon as you can, and until then, take care!
Author's reply
I'm so glad that it seems as though the story is tying together. Part of the problem in writing a story like this with so many varied threads is that it's hard to display the tapestry at the end. As the author, I know what's going on and how it's *supposed* to look, but because of this, I'm sometimes handicapped by my knowledge and don't reveal what should be revealed or what needs to be revealed. But if it seems to be wrapping up, then good. I'm doing my job. Thanks so much for the encouragement, and may an update be not too far away on your end!
Alisha B · 16 February 2004 · Chapter 35: Fractals
I have no idea why, but I was able to keep everyone straight in this chapter! I think it was mostly because everyone was exchanging information... But, actually, I completely understand why you don't want to put comments into the actual story. From the looks of things, everyone is more or less getting off the sidelines, so I don't think it'll be a problem anymore. Unless, of course, you do something crazy and twisted. (which wouldn't surprise me) *G* I noticed you added notes at the top that said where/how certain people were killed. That helped too. A sequel?! Maybe I'm getting worried for nothing but... are you planning on leaving an awful clifhanger here and then going to the Umbar's story!? I can see it now! I'm sure you'll leave it with some evil person with a blade to Aragorn's throat, Eomer unconscious in the background, Legolas and Gimli dying in the desert, and then a nice little TBC at the bottom. THEN, you'll put a little note in that says something like "Well, I've decided to stop this story here and switch over to what's happening in Umbar. You'll be able to find out what's happening to our heros in about a year and a half!" AIE! *adopts a Gollum voice* That would kill us.... kkkiiillll uuussss...! hehehe. sorry. *G* I guess, it's your decision, but I may just run head first into a wall if you leave it at a bad spot! Just a little word of warning... *G* Well, I loved this chapter. Everyone is FINALLY figuring things out, and therefore explaining it to ME! I can be kind of slow sometimes. It was very interesting to learn that Fastahn was the one behind the Orthanc Fire... Did we know that before? So, are we supposed to know why he did it? Was it because he wanted others to think the Khurintu did it? To show the other tribes they could be targets too? That's what I got out of it anyway, I think. Hopefully your computer problems are fixed, and you'll be able to update faster! Keep up the good work!
Author's reply
Yea! *stages small celebration* If you're starting to keep people straight, it means I'm on the right track. A few others have said that to me, and I'm now filled with confidence. Hopefully connections will start to appear left and right and everything will begin coming together. Yea! As for crazy and twisted, nah. There will be a few more twists, but nothing TOO major. We're pretty much down to crunch time for our heroes. Ah, the sequel. No, I intend to wrap this story up THOROUGHLY before moving on to a sequel. The one thread that will be hanging is Umbar's involvement. We'll know generally what was intended but not the specifics, and the specifics are what will come to bear in the sequel. But I'll get everyone out of the desert and patched up before I end. I love cliff hangers, but I believe very firmly in tying a story together in the end. As for Fastahn and the Orthanc Fire...he wasn't behind it. Not specifically. It was triggered because of what he said to Dashnir. And he did intend for Khurintu to act against his tribe, but he hadn't anticipated what they did. Not that he could, really. After all, whoever heard of Orthanc Fire in the desert? That's been touched on before, but it's been primarily through allusions. A few reviewers picked up on it almost immediately after it happened, but those are few and far between, so don't feel bad. In any case, almost everything is going to break wide open next chapter. This chapter was more of a teaser of things to come. Thanks so much for the comments, and all those comments you've left in the past!
Lera · 16 February 2004 · Chapter 35: Fractals
Question: How in the world do you keep all the stories you're in the process of writing straight in your head? It was cool to get a reply from you. I had just figured maybe you didn't do that, which is ok as long as you keep churning out magnificent stories:-D Something that I think separates you from other authors is that you never take the easy way out. If you did that, nobody would be looking for Legolas and Gimli, the horse wouldn't have died and nobody would have died from the Orthanc fire. Come to think of it, the easy way out would have had Aragorn and Eomer several steps ahead of the enemy all the time, making for a boring story. Thank goodness you don't do that! As much as I enjoyed Return of the King, I'm really sad it's over. But I was thinking, how about sending your stories to New Line or whoever you'd send it to, and having them make movies out of them? :-D Please? Only you'd have to insist they put more than one a year out. lol. One more qestion: have you ever gotten a negative reveiw? I bet you haven't. Ok, God bless and ciao.
Author's reply
Nope, I do replies. Sometimes it takes me a while to get around to them, but I'm doing pretty well this week so replies are coming quickly. How do I keep these stories straight? A lot of notes. Seriously. At one point, LoLaS had an outline and possible scene scenario document that was 50 pages long. It's been significantly reduced to 24 pages as I eliminate parts when they're integrated into the story (when the next chapter comes out it will be down to 19), but for a while it was really impressive. FND has about 25 pages in its story outline (down from about 30 several chapters back.) And of course, this isn't including all the supplementary documents that I've created as I go along, not to mention the stories that are sitting on my computer that no one's seen yet. Obsessive much? Yup. That's me. It's also why I refuse to take the easy way out. If I have to go to work, so do the characters. ;) As for the negative review, I suppose it would depend on what you definine as a negative review. If by that you mean a flame, I got one once for "While the Ring went south..." but I haven't had any since then. Now, if you're talking about criticism and suggestions, I get that all the time. And I'm thankful, too, as I am far from perfect. I had several glaring flaws for Chapter 35 pointed out to me over the past few days. Anyway, thanks so much for your comments! I love talking about this kind of stuff (the mechanics behind writing and so forth) so thank you so much for your interest. It makes me feel appreciated!
Estel_Mi_Olor · 15 February 2004 · Chapter 35: Fractals
The tribes of Portu, Soltari, and Warra! Yes!!! This is amazing! I again beg you to grace your readers with some hint of the reason as to your superior writing. Rarely have we been graced with such superb storytelling. I love it when everybody joins together against the commone enemy. Imrahil will figure it out, he's an intelligent person. Legolas and Gimli? What about them? Perhaps in a month we will get the next chapter....I'm just kidding. I understand computer problems *glares at computer* and how difficult it is to write something so fantastic. Now that I have attempted writing myself, I can fully appreciate the work of others. Again, what work it is! Cheers for Arabano! And for Fastahn. They deserve awards. Big medals. Eomer deserves the Red Cross Award for helping other, and Aragorn deserves the Most Crazy Plan that will Succeed award. Once more, thank you for this story!!! And for updating!!!! Yay!! You cannot imagine my shouts of joy when I saw that you had updated. I received strange looks from my father. Thank you for this jewel of a story! Keep writing!
Author's reply
Reasons for superior writing? **blushes profusely** You are FAR too kind. Convoluted writing, though, is something I can explain easily enough. I was trained as a political scientist and my mind has never gotten over the need to see multiple levels and hidden agendas in every relationship. This could also be the reason I'm still single, but let's not get into that. Anyway, I love your ideas about an awards ceremony! You are dead on with Aragorn's award, by the way. His plan is going to be slightly altered in upcoming chapters, but not much. And I'll see what I can do about handing out medals. Or at the very least, water. They might appreciate that more. Thanks so much for the review!