Linda Hoyland
· 9 May 2008
· Chapter 22: The King's Time
Just wonderful! So sad and very moving,yet hopeful.
Author's reply
Thank you so, Linda. I'm so glad you found it both moving and hopeful. Aragorn by this time must have begun feeling a bit eager to get off and see those from whom he'd been separated for so long, or so I'd think.
Dreamflower
· 8 May 2008
· Chapter 22: The King's Time
Oh, yes, I can see this happening in just this way. He would be one to leave all in order.
Beautifully done--I liked the recurring theme of time, the Dwarf clock, the waterclock, the Shire calendar, the White Tree itself--all of them marking time...
Author's reply
Nath had asked for a story dealing with time, and this presented itself. And he would indeed leave things set in order. He was, after all, a most responsible King.
Thanks so for the feedback, Dreamflower!
Linda Hoyland
· 3 May 2008
· Chapter 20: His Birthday Wish
I think in exploring Aragorn's thoughts you captured the bittersweet feeling we older people all experience on our birthdays.I know how the King craves to help Frodo.
Author's reply
Every year I see folk my age or younger develop serious conditions. When he was my age my husband was already in his final decline from several competing conditions. I know precisely what you mean, Linda. Like Aragorn, we wish we could share our own good fortune with those we care about and love deeply.
Thanks so for the feedback.
Linda Hoyland
· 3 May 2008
· Chapter 21: New Daughter
This was just beatiful and perfectly shows Aragorn's nobility.How fortunate the girl is that Arwen found her!
Author's reply
I'm so glad you like it, Linda. It was fun to visit one of the incidents from "Lesser Rings" again, no matter how briefly. Thank you so!
Antane
· 2 May 2008
· Chapter 20: His Birthday Wish
Yes, please, darling, do accept it...
Author's reply
At least Frodo DID accept it in the end.
Thanks for the feedback.
Szepilona10
· 30 April 2008
· Chapter 21: New Daughter
I liked it! You should write more about this "New Daughter"!
God bless!
~Szepilona10~
Author's reply
Thanks, Szepilona. Hasturnerini appears first in my story "Lesser Rings," in which Aragorn makes two trips to Harad. Arwen found the girl in the slave market, where she was being sold to satisfy her late father's debts. Arwen bought her and a black slave with a star carved into his chest, and brought them back to the Farozi's palace. To satisfy both Haradri and Gondorian law, Arwen apprenticed the girl to herself so as to bring her safely out of Harad and back to Gondor. The story was nominated for a MEFA a couple years ago, and is available both here and on FFN.
I've considered writing more about Hasturnerini and Benai of Camaloa, but keep getting assaulted by other plotbunnies and nuzguls....
Kitty
· 29 April 2008
· Chapter 21: New Daughter
Completely agree with Aragorn. It was such a luck that Arwen found the girl! And I love it that Aragorn thinks of her as a daughter. She will have a wonderful time with her new 'parents', no doubt. And I hope to read more about her in future fics - I came to love her in 'Lesser Rings'.
Author's reply
I'm glad you remember Hasturnerini from Lesser Ring. It was fun to do a story bringing her more out front, instead of being seen as merely one of Arwen's maidens. It's going to be culture shock to an extent, but children are eminently adaptable, I've found, given the right circumstances.
harrowcat
· 29 April 2008
· Chapter 20: His Birthday Wish
This is lovely Larner and very clever. I thought at the beginning that it was set in the time of Aragorn as King but then I wondered if it might have been during Thorongil's time in Gondor. The ending is beautiful and I am sure that Frodo would have felt some easing of spirit, even if just a little.
Author's reply
The challenge was to write a short story of Aragorn's birthday either when he turned forty or the Dunedain equivalent of that age, and his thoughts on that occasion.
Originally Aragorn lived to 190, which in later editions was changed to 210, or three times "three score and ten"--the average expected lifespan given in the Bible. I figured eighty would be an adequate equivalent to a normal person's forty years. That would put it during Frodo's last March in the Shire.
To remember all the birthdays up to now, the anticipated celebrations as a child, the rarely celebrated ones in between, and now to think of wishing to celebrate THIS birthday in a Hobbit fashion, giving a gift that cannot be accomplished to the one individual to whom he owes everything at the moment, just seemed right.
Am so glad SOMEONE felt compelled to respond to this at last, Harrowcat! I now it's not particularly long and was done to meet a birthday challenge, but I've been writing a longer story in response to a challenge I hope to start posting in the next few weeks....
harrowcat
· 29 April 2008
· Chapter 21: New Daughter
A lovely glimpse at a young lady that I hope we get to hear more about someday.
Author's reply
I hope you remember Hasturnerini from "Lesser Ring." I may indeed write a sequel to that someday, but haven't done so as yet. I did have her appear in "Adolescence," and I think in "Treating with the Enemy." She perhaps needs her own story, though....
This was also written for a birthday challenge to write a story in which we deal with an adoption, preferably of a child from a different culture or race. And as I thought of "Lesser Ring," suddenly Hasturnerini prodded me, indicating she at least meets the criteria!
grumpy
· 13 April 2008
· Chapter 19: Symbols of Love
I am so glad that Aragorn still using his bedroll, and that the guards know not to question bedrolss that have pink in them. Loved it that the ranger is still there in the king.
Author's reply
So glad you like it so, Grumpy. Yes, Aragorn knows when he's got a good deal, and the other Rangers have learned to let him have his pink squares to his quilt. It probably gives them a fond snicker from time to time, and makes them proud he's not afraid to show he loves those he loves.
And I doubt anyone could take the Ranger out of THIS king! Thanks so much!
Antane
· 13 April 2008
· Chapter 16: The Ring that Sauron Forged
Neat poem - the way you wove everything together over and over with a new layer of the story on top. Gives life to what Sam said about being in the same story as all else that went on before them. Love the last stanza the most. Wish it could end with their reunion blessed and free, but maybe you've already covered that elsewhere. I am still trying to catch up here.
Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
I'm not certain just why "The House that Jack Built" was working on me, but it obviously did. And this is what came of imposing its structure on Middle Earth! Heh!
Now, to do my own version of "I'll Sing you One-O." You've tried your hand at it, after all; now it's my turn.
Antane
· 13 April 2008
· Chapter 17: Thoughts on the Heir of Isildur
Those are my favorite lines from Boromir - my brother, my captain, my king... He came very far in his understanding of Isildur's heir - both sons embraced what and who their father had no desire to whatsoever.
Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
That line from the movie is indeed one of the most moving and heart-warming in spite of the context. And the sons in their way outstripped the troubled father indeed.
Thanks so, Antane.
Andrea
· 8 April 2008
· Chapter 19: Symbols of Love
Wherever I go, I am surrounded by the symbols of the love of those I myself have loved--Hobbits, Elves, Dwarves, Men. I cannot feel alone any more, not with this.
That was a lovely story, Larner! What a wonderful idea!
I also enjoyed the episode with the boar and how Aragorn successfully reached Henneth Annun blindfolded. He's a master ranger!
Thank you!
Author's reply
Yes, a master ranger indeed!
For the two boys, they need to feel they are indeed having an adventure, and a young boar just walked into the tale to offer just that.
And it was time for the King's quilt to make its presence known once more, I felt. Heh!
Linda Hoyland
· 8 April 2008
· Chapter 19: Symbols of Love
I just loved this delightful story.It was full of good things, the young boys eager to please their fathers,Aragorn and Faramir's wager, Aragorn's good humour and patience were amongst the many highlights.Thank you for such a lovely surprise to read about my favourite characters.
Author's reply
So glad it pleases you so, Linda! Yes, our favorite King and his favorite Steward and their sons--a time to be men among men--and in spite of quilts with pink squares. Heh!
harrowcat
· 7 April 2008
· Chapter 19: Symbols of Love
Lovely Larner. Sorry about all the hassle here! Got back from my parents to 43 messages, mostly about SOA!
Good news on my Dad. He had a lung abcess that seems to have drained and healed by itself. Miracles DO happen.
Author's reply
Oh, I can imagine that the echoes of that attack were as heavy in your email box as they were elsewhere! It was such an unnecessary exercise by some bored unknown guy out to make a name for himself by being most annoying!
Am glad you liked this one. It was fun to bring up the King's quilt again, and to add in my own experience and that of many others learning how to travel with a long cane.
Oh, how frightening--and yet how grateful we all are that this healed itself in your father. I rejoice with you! And, yes, miracles DO happen.
Kitty
· 7 April 2008
· Chapter 19: Symbols of Love
Lovely piece, Larner! To see these two boys as friends and to know that their fathers spend time with them in this way was so nice. And I love Eldarion calling sam 'Uncle'.
Loved the challenge to find Henneth Annun blindfolded! And of course Aragorn succeed - in a very impressing way, I have to admit! He has not forgotten his Ranger skills since he's become King.
Ah, the (in)famous quilt again! Of course Elboron had to burst with curiosity - I'm sure he was not the only one over the years. I still love the idea behind the quilt so much - it was one of Pippin's best ideas.
Thank you, Larner, that was wonderful!
Author's reply
Frodo, for all they can see the love others have for him, is yet but a name and the visage of a statue to these, a name to reverence but not yet to know. However, they've seen Sam, I suspect, and have known his generous nature and wise sayings and wholesome cooking, and have seen their fathers deferring to him as well. How can he be any other than "Uncle Sam" to them?
As one who taught myself to follow paths by feeling them with my feet when I was a child, then who trained in Orientation and Mobility under blindfold, I can imagine Elladan and Elrohir doing the equivalent of a "drop-off lesson" with Aragorn, taking him blindfolded into a somewhat familiar area and expecting him to find his way home without removing the blindfold. And of course he'll have remembered such lessons!
And I still love that quilt. And I suspect you are right that Elboron is but one of many who've wondered about the quilt in the King's bedroll. Yes, Pippin had a way of seeing love expressed in a manner that would cause others to rejoice as they laughed with and at themselves.
So glad you enjoyed this!
Pearl Took
· 7 April 2008
· Chapter 19: Symbols of Love
Beautiful, Larner! I'm all teary-eyed. A truly wonderful way warm and comfort a King. :-)
Author's reply
I'm so glad you like it, Pearl. Thank you! And I love to see the King comforted.
Antane
· 7 April 2008
· Chapter 19: Symbols of Love
What a wonderful gift that quilt is, symbols of love indeed! Wouldn't it be wonderful, if you could write a sequel, and have Frodo have one of these too, to comfort him in the West. *nudges bunny your way*
Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Frodo does have the mantle made of memories that Ruvemir gave him, and it serves the same purpose. He's given it at the end of "The King's Commission," and takes it with him when he leaves the Bounds of Arda. It's mentioned in "Reunion" and "The Choice of Healing."
shirebound
· 7 April 2008
· Chapter 19: Symbols of Love
What a marvelous expedition and learning experience for these young men. It's wonderful that they get to see the Ranger-King use his woodland skills, and also see that quilt and realize all that went into it.
Author's reply
Indeed, Aragorn is indeed the Ranger King! A marvelous and so apt description! Thanks, Shirebound.
Halrohir
· 6 April 2008
· Chapter 19: Symbols of Love
Oh, Larner, how wonderful! A tale of our heroes and friends grown and in happier times - Eldarion, Elboron, and Bergil!
And the quilt - such stories abound for real quilts, in every family who remembers such things. You must have heard one or two, to recognize it.
Thank you, once again!
HALROHIR
Author's reply
Yes, boys do grow up, and as they grow they learn how important it is to know they are loved.
The most fantastic quilt I ever saw was a crazy quilt constructed of family fabrics similar to this one, the pieces hand stitched together with a variety of fancy stitches such as the feather stitch and others equally beautiful. Somewhere the maker had come across threads with metallic strands through them and used them to accent her needlework. I was told a few of the stories attached to the quilt--wedding dress, bathrobe worn as the mother recovered from the birth of her first child.... We had it for a time in our antique store, back in the days my husband and I had one.
This quilt was first mentioned in "The Ties of Family," and was touched on again in "Lesser Rings." I thought it might be fun to see how Faramir's son might react to such a thing.
And as times passed I could see Arwen applying other fabrics over those squares made from Hobbit handkerchiefs, marking the increase of those who loved the King of Arnor and Gondor.
Thank you!
Dreamflower
· 6 April 2008
· Chapter 19: Symbols of Love
I'm really enjoying these brief but telling glimpses of the future king and steward. About how old are they in this story? They seem, perhaps, to be in their early adolescence? Twelve or thirteen?
Aragorn's tricks for finding his way blindfolded were impressive. He proves here JRRTs claim for him as the "greatest tracker" of his day!
And it was great fun to encounter the quilt again. I always love the enumeration of its various elements. One of these days we need to see the story of the quilting bee when it was completed! Did Diamond preside over the quilting frame, I wonder? Or was it Rose?
Author's reply
In my version of events Elboron is about two years older than Eldarion, so if Eldarion is thirteen Elboron is about fifteen.
I based Aragorn's feat partly on how I learned to find my way to the neighbor's house in the dark when I was a kid. I lived in an old farmhouse set in the middle of five acres, and we had to go up the driveway beyond the old drainage ditch to find the actual path. What with scotchbroom, trees, and other brush, seeing where you were walking at night was next to impossible unless there was a full moon overhead. I prefer to wear soft-soled mocassins, and would feel my way through them. And, of course, when I took my orientation and mobility lessons to qualify me to teach cane travel to those who are visually impaired I learned well how to use a long cane.
If Aragorn was a good tracker I suspect he had an excellent sense of the land through which he traveled, which would help him in finding his way even blindfolded.
And I wanted to revisit the quilt once more. As for how it was put together.... Heh! We MAY see that quilting bee one day!
SurgicalSteel
· 14 March 2008
· Chapter 18: Epiphany
What a shock it must have been for them to realize that he really isn't the little brother or even the scruffy chieftain of Rangers anymore - and they'll have even more shocks to deal with soon, seeing their sister marry him.
Author's reply
No matter how much you think you're ready for such a thing, to feel the actual break in her fea that brings her in line with her beloved and away from them would be a wrench, for certain.
Linda Hoyland
· 13 March 2008
· Chapter 18: Epiphany
You depicted this special moment perfectly.Very enjoyable!
Author's reply
So glad you approve! Thank you, Linda!
Queen Galadriel
· 12 March 2008
· Chapter 18: Epiphany
:) Ah, yes, the question all older siblings ask when suddenly they turn around twice and there's the youngest, no longer "the little one." "When did he grow up?!" I find myself saying the same thing now, as my baby brother just turned nine(!), and my little sister will be eleven in May--and thinks she's a teenager already. *grimaces*
I love the image at the end of this. :) Perfect for these two witnesses, I think.
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
They've seen so many Men grow old and die; to know this one is definitely a grownup ready to fulfil his responsibilities must make their scalp tighten!
And my daughter is a mother, and my older grandson could easily find a love and seek to marry at any time. As for the one who'll be eighteen in a few weeks--I was in the birthing room when he was born! If you don't thin THAT feels odd!
Kitty
· 12 March 2008
· Chapter 18: Epiphany
Considering their huge age difference, it is probably understandable that they still felt Aragorn to be the 'little' brother. They'd feel so even after millennia if he were immortal, I suppose.
But if there was any particular moment to realise he's all grown up now and has matured into the man he is, then it had th be then. (You could argue he proved that at the Paths of the Dead already, but back then they were way too busy to notice).
Author's reply
This is the point at which there is no question he IS mortal, and venerable and competent as a fully mature mortal at that. Here their paths diverge, unless one chooses to follow the mortal path....
Am so glad you had this reaction to this drabble. Thanks so much.