Tales from Tol Eressëa by shirebound
Celeritas · 16 December 2008 · Chapter 6: The Man in the Moon
*grin* Elven telescopes! *wants* I caught onto the nice parallels in Elrond's story of Tilion--rather fitting to tell it to Frodo. One other brief nitpick--wasn't Feanor Finwe's son, not grandson?
Author's reply
Goodness, thank you for that nitpick! I don't know how I made a mistake like that. I'm glad you enjoyed this. It was a fun scene to imagine and write. :)
Andrea · 14 December 2008 · Chapter 6: The Man in the Moon
Beautifully written, shirebound! And once again I see that there are still many stories in the Silmarillion which I haven't read yet. Thank you :)
Author's reply
Thank you, Andrea. There are so many layers and depths to the Professor's grand tale, I doubt we can ever absorb it all!
Antane · 13 December 2008 · Chapter 6: The Man in the Moon
And so Frodo continues to make his mark on the world and those in and around it. What a joy for him to use that telescope - indeed a rare invention - you know Feanor and Leonardo from our age would have loved to spoken together - both far ahead of their times in inventiveness - and what a joy for Elrond too to use it and the delight that 'the Man in the Moon' has to hear that song. I love it! What wonders Sam will come home to. Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Thank you so much. Yes, I feel that wherever Frodo goes, he would "make his mark" and be someone whose quality would be recognized.
Baggins Babe · 12 December 2008 · Chapter 6: The Man in the Moon
What a lovely look at Frodo in the West. I ove his friendship with Elrond and those words about Gandalf always being Gandalf to his hobbits. How marvellous that they can see the Tilion - and that Elrond can see his father. I'm all warm and happy now!
Author's reply
Yay, that makes *me* warm and happy. Thank you. I just can't imagine Frodo in the West unless he's surrounded by friends.
Rhyselle · 12 December 2008 · Chapter 6: The Man in the Moon
Squee! :) This was just WONDERFUL! :) Two marvelous fics posted today so far that have been just sooooo uplifting to the spirits. Fiondil's and this very lovely and wonderful story. My favorite part was when Frodo handed the viewing crystal to Elrond, so that the Peredhel could see his father Earendil. Perfect! I so love this series, but this episode tops all the others by a mile!
Author's reply
Thank you so much! It's always joyous to get a 'squee'! I really appreciate your enthusiasm. :)
Larner · 12 December 2008 · Chapter 6: The Man in the Moon
Ah, indeed, something new and young--and perhaps as scarred as the moon itself; but no less blessed! So sweet a tale of a Hobbit and spyglass! Thank you for the image of Elrond seeking out the face of his father!
Author's reply
An interesting analogy between Frodo and the Moon... I never thought of that before. Thank you! I really enjoyed imagining this scene between Frodo and Elrond.
FantasyFan · 12 December 2008 · Chapter 6: The Man in the Moon
Frodo has stopped the moon in it's course with his song! Bilbo will be quite pleased with himself, I think. Your idea that the moon has been scarred in battle is a great explanation for the craters Frodo would have seen.
Author's reply
Ahh, the power of hobbits! :) The idea that Tilion was attacked is something I remember from The Silmarillion, and from that I inferred that the moon would have been scarred. It's a fun concept to play with.
Larner · 25 September 2008 · Chapter 5: Once Upon a Time
What a sweet, loving, delightful tradition! And a way of remembering those who remained behind! Lovely, Shirebound!
Author's reply
Thank you so much. This little scene is close to my heart.
Antane · 25 September 2008 · Chapter 5: Once Upon a Time
What a lovely, sweet story! I love the "Once upon a time..." and the retelling of the Quest and all the hobbity love here - what a wonderful celebration. Bilbo did indeed get the ending for the story that he wanted! Thank you so much for this, dear shirebound. *hugs* Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Thank you, Antane! Yes, they both lived happily ever after to the end of their days. There's not a doubt in my mind. :) *hugs you back*
cookiefleck · 24 September 2008 · Chapter 5: Once Upon a Time
This is beautiful, and happy/sad, too. I love the last line in particular.
Author's reply
Thank you very much. I have to admit that the last line is my favorite, too. :)
Andrea · 24 September 2008 · Chapter 5: Once Upon a Time
It was an adventure with many dark parts in it, with heroes who weren't perfect but still went on to save their world. And it had many endings, some of them joyous, but the last one very sad (for all that had to remain in ME - and for me). But it is wonderful to see that Frodo and Bilbo are fully healed now, and that Tol Eressea turned a perilous adventure into a fairy tale, which had of course a happy ending. Thank you very much, shirebound :)
Author's reply
Thank you, Andrea. The tale of our two hobbits goes ever on and on, but if they can look back in peace and with bright memories, that makes me happy.
Mum's the Word · 24 September 2008 · Chapter 5: Once Upon a Time
This is such a lovely, gentle description of The Birthday, Shirebound! The telling of the tale, and Bilbo's and Frodo's joyful contentment, brought tears to my eyes. Simply wonderful!
Author's reply
Thank you, Mum. This is truly how I envision things for our beloved hobbits.
Gentle Hobbit · 26 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
This is delightful. I've read both parts, and I love the gentle, but exciting feeling for Frodo as he realizes bit by bit what the West is offering him -- whether it be realization of how healing is occuring, or glimpses of the lofty mountains of his dream long ago... This is vintage Shirebound. :)
Author's reply
Thank you, my friend. This is truly what I wish for Frodo -- new vistas, old friends, and time to heal.
White Gull · 11 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
Very nice, shirebound! It's comforting, to see Frodo's contentment in Valinor. Thank you for a lovely story. WG
Author's reply
Thank you very much! :D
Andrea · 8 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
“Never underestimate my Uncle Bilbo,” Frodo said firmly. “He’s the most remarkable hobbit who ever lived.” “One of them,” Elrond nodded. “One of them, to be sure.” Dear old Frodo! He's the humblest person I've ever known, and it's one reason why I like him so much. But I'm quite sure that he knows what Elrond meant by "them" ;-) That was a beautiful trip around the island with a glimpse of Aman and new insights into two remarkable hobbits. Baggins Babe is right, your stories always make me smile - and hers, too!
Author's reply
Awwww, thank you. :) Bilbo lived in Rivendell for so long, I'm certain that Elrond -- and his entire household -- developed a deep respect and fondness for hobbits. How could they not? I'm very glad you enjoyed this little voyage. Aren't we lucky to be able to play in the Professor's sandbox, and have folks to share this with? Hobbits make me so happy.
Larner · 8 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
Yes, ONE of the most remarkable of Hobbits born Bilbo is--and Frodo still fails to think of himself in that mode. Yes, he needs this time--and timelessness--both to find his own healing. Such a blessed gift for the two of them--and to know that Irmo has long blessed the two of them--and particularly Frodo.
Author's reply
May Frodo be gifted with all the time he needs... as we know he will be. :)
Baggins Babe · 8 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
Oh Shirebound, I can always rely on you to write stories guaranteed to make me feel happy. Frodo whooping with delight, Gandalf happy to stay around for as long as there are hobbits on Tol Eressa, and Elves surprised by hobbits...... Perfect! How wonderful that Frodo was able to see those mountains, and that he could do so in the company of Bilbo. I am sure that one day he will take Sam to see them too.
Author's reply
Thank you so much. That's how I feel about your stories, as well. :) Oh yes, Sam needs to see those mountains, and also explore the exotic blooms on the western side of the island. That's a lovely thing to imagine.
Linda Hoyland · 8 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
What a lovely cruise! I quite envy Frodo and Bilbo seeing such sites from the beautiful Elven ship.
Author's reply
I would very much like to join them on that cruise!
Antane · 7 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
Part of his healing, he was realizing, was simply the gift of time... time to think, to sort through feelings and memories, to regain a sense of who he was, and who he was not. I love this and that he has joy again. Yea! He lost so much on the Quest and now he is gaining it back. He would indeed need much time and this is Iluvatar's gift to him, among the many other graces that have filled that beloved child. I am concentrating this year and next on saving money so I can quit my job and do the same thing - have time to sort through things and discover more who I am and why I am here. I love the idea that he dreamed of the mountains. Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Oh Antane, I hope you attain your wonderful dream to gather up the time to discover 'yourself'. What a precious gift.
Rhyselle · 7 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
Just lovely. :) I thoroughly enjoyed this final chapter, and the mental images of Frodo, Bilbo, Elrond and Gandalf on board the ship were so vivid in my mind. Especially the view which they were seeing. And I love the fact that Olorin chooses to remain on Tol Eressea for as long as Bilbo, Frodo and Sam are alive. Truly it shows his deep love for the hobbits because he is so close to his own home, and is willing to delay his final return there for them. Well done!
Author's reply
Thank you, Rhyselle. I feel that Gandalf always had a deep love for 'his hobbits' and always will. I just can't imagine him not staying near, for as long as necessary. And hopefully it will be a very long time indeed! :)
Grey Wonderer · 7 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
I love that Elrond was surprised. I always love it when the Elves are surprised by mortals. LOL This was lovely and Bilbo was so funny with his, 'he gets it from his Baggins side.'
Author's reply
Good old Bilbo. :) If hobbits can surprise wizards, they can surprise even the long-lived elves. I love to imagine how they might have spiced up life on Tol Eressea.
Baranduin · 7 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
This is heavenly.
Author's reply
What a lovely thing to say. :)
harrowcat · 7 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
Glad to have been able to read this. Delightful as usual. Came back from my parents to 43 messages, mostly about that horrible hacker!
Author's reply
I'm glad you enjoyed this, Harrowcat. Instead of thinking about Bad Folk, we can relax and imagine happy hobbits sailing around lovely islands.... :)
aprilkat · 7 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
You can never write too much about Frodo healing in Tol Eressea. Your touch is light and yet speaks so much what the two Bagginses have been through. The fact that Bilbo and Frodo are given so much proximity to all this sacredness fills me with awe. Just beautiful.
Author's reply
Thank you very much. I love imagining that the hobbits' paths led them to this joyous, gently exciting, and rare experience... surrounded by friends who care about them.
Lindelea · 7 April 2008 · Chapter 4: There and Back Again, Part II
Oh, what a lovely chapter! I thought at first you were writing the departure from the Grey Havens, but it sounded much too peaceful. And then to realize that this was a part of the grand adventure in the far West, and a part of Frodo's and Bilbo's healing. There were so many little touches I loved, but I have no time, so I'll only mention one or two. they had to be reminded when it was time for meals They *must* have been overwhelmed, truly! “One of them,” Elrond nodded. “One of them, to be sure.” In full agreement. Fascinating--I'd never thought of Frodo's dream of strange mountains in this context before! Lovely bit of imagining. Hugs, Lin
Author's reply
Thank you, Lin. I never thought much about Frodo's dream, either... until now! Who's to say what it meant, or what he was seeing. I think he and Bilbo both deserved to see "real" mountains at last. :)