Fiondil's Tapestry by Fiondil
Nieriel Raina · 8 July 2008 · Chapter 25: SMOKE: One Night at the Laughing Vala
ROTFLMAO!!!! Excellent. I never would have thought Namo a glutton. This had me in stitches!
Author's reply
Hi NiRi... bet you didn't expect *this* story for the prompt did you? *grin* Glad you enjoyed it.
vampfan30 · 8 July 2008 · Chapter 25: SMOKE: One Night at the Laughing Vala
that was the funniest thing I have read in such a long time... ow, my sides hurt.....
Author's reply
Glad you liked it vampfan... thanks for letting me know.
Agape4Gondor · 1 July 2008 · Chapter 7: WAR: A Promise Before Dying
Wow! You certainly put a lot into this one... I loved all of it - dear Gil-galad's a little unusual to 'see' as a child-like being... glad Namo finally let him out :-) And I loved the reunion - I'm glad he was able to let his anger go....
Author's reply
I thought it would be interesting to see Gil-galad after his death and the consequences thereof. I'm glad you liked the reunion. Thanks for reviewing.
Agape4Gondor · 1 July 2008 · Chapter 4: GOLD AND MITHRIL: Cloths of Heaven
Quite nice... and I recognized some familiar nams :-)
Author's reply
Glad you liked it. Thanks for letting me know.
Agape4Gondor · 1 July 2008 · Chapter 3: GOBLINS: The Herald's Summons
I had to read this twice, of course, because my familiarity with Quenya names is not good. Takes some of the fun out of reading, but I'm supposing that, if I continue to read your wonderful tales, I'll finally put names to folks I know! Loved Eonwe and his book... loved Galadriel... and Celborn... And loved Arafinwe - but I am becoming attached to him from your EI books...
Author's reply
I try to keep people's names as they would have used them rather than as we've come to know them through the Silmarillion and such. Keep reading and eventually you'll catch on. *lol* Glad you liked everyone in the tale, especially Arafinwë. He's one of my favorites, too. Thanks for reviewing.
ellie · 30 June 2008 · Chapter 24: MARCHES: Crossing the Ice
This was powerful. so full of the belakness and desolationa dn the poinelessess of things when the only thing you can focus on is survival from moment to moment. I was glad ot see the resolution at the end. It was amazing what they went through to finally reconcile things. I was saddened to hear what Glorfy endured in alqualonde and that his dad was a follower of feanor! Didn't see that one coming! A snowdrift deep, thoughtful tale. well done!
Author's reply
There has been next to nothing written about this pivotal point in the history or Arda and the Noldor and I felt it was time something of it were told. I'm glad you found a deep,thoughtful tale. I hope all my readers come away with something to think about with this one. Thanks for reviewing.
Nieriel Raina · 29 June 2008 · Chapter 24: MARCHES: Crossing the Ice
*squeals* A story about my idiotic elf! ahem, Thandir, too. Very interesting all around. Wow, I've wondered the back story to your Glorfindel's parents for some time and... *blinks* Yea, better he doesn't remember them yet, I'd say. How horrible! But I'm glad that in the end these two once adversaries came to be friends. Very well done! And you get extra credit for including caribou, polar bears and WOOLY MAMMOTHS! *more squees* Excellent, fabulous, brilliant! *applause*
Author's reply
Ah... the truth will out, won't it? lol Glad you liked the chapter even if Glorfindel's revelation about his parents was not something you wanted to hear... you should have seen me trying to come up with appropriate names in Quenya for the different arctic animals that might have lived then, especially the wooly mammoth. Thanks for reviewing.
Nieriel Raina · 29 June 2008 · Chapter 23: QUARREL: Confronting Námo
Ah, I'm so glad to see Lord Námo has good taste in food. *grin* What a treat to get into his head for once. *grin* You have to hand it to Thranduil. Stubborn, arrogant, but the Elvenking has balls the size of boulders. LOL! Few would be that gutsy. But in the end, Thranduil is just a father, after all. Poor Legolas. Very nice! I love these gapfillers. *grin*
Author's reply
Of course he has good taste in food... he's a Vala, after all. *grin* As Námo told Legolas, Thranduil is a force to be reckoned with... though I think the Lord of Mandos handled him rather nicely, myself. Glad you enjoyed this little fic. Thanks for reviewing.
Radbooks · 29 June 2008 · Chapter 24: MARCHES: Crossing the Ice
Oh, nicely done! I cannot imagine having to do something like that... cross the ice and live in the cold and just keep going day after day. I'd have wanted to turn back like the first day. :) I saw in one of your review responses that it was almost 10 years and I was shocked, I had no idea it took that long. You would be totally changed from such an ordeal. Anyway, I really enjoyed this and I liked seeing some of the backstory about Glorfindel's family. How sad for him. No wonder he never talks about them... well, about his father anyway. I liked the tension between Glorfindel and Calamandil. It seemed realistic and I especially liked that Calamandil couldn't even remember what the disagreement between their father's had been about. So typical of grudges that we hold onto. :) I felt bad for the cubs for a brief moment - you know they're cute and cuddly! *grin* And then I remembered how much worse it would be to leave them to starve to death on their own... that's much less humane. And, the elves did need the meat... it's too bad they didn't get it after all of their hard work and almost dying. Almost dying twice in the case of Calamandil. Very enjoyable story!
Author's reply
Hi Radbooks, Yes... it'd definitely not my idea of a good time, either... I think for most of them the only motivation that kept them going was the anger they must have felt for Fëanor's betrayal. Certainly that would've been true for Fingolfin and Finrod, among others. I did not expect Glorfindel to reveal anything about his family as he's never spoken of them before... I'm not even sure he remembers them in EI yet... I'm glad you found the tension between him and Calamandil realistic and hopefully the resolution of their animosity. As for the bear cubs... you're correct... I'm sure Glorfindel would have preferred not to kill them either but realized that doing so was more merciful. And yes... after all that hard work, to lose the meat... but at least they came away from it all with their own hides intact. Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it.
Kitty · 29 June 2008 · Chapter 24: MARCHES: Crossing the Ice
Lovely story, but a reminder of how terrible the long march over the Helcaraxë must have been, too. And it made it so clear that these elves had to bury the hatchet, so to speak, in order to work together to survive. To continue these petty rivalries and animosities would have been desastrous. Well, at least these two realised it and made their peace. Admittedly I had wondered about Glorfindel's family more than once - now I understand only too well why nobody was there for him when he was reborn, and why he refused to talk about his family at all, even if he remembers them. How terrible to know what his father did! Poor ellon *hugs Glorfindel*
Author's reply
The old social structures and ways of doing things were breaking down, had to be breaking down; it was no longer 'business as usual' for these elves and so they needed to put aside such things as petty quarrels and animositiies and work togethre to survive or they would all perish. When I started writing this story I was unaware of Glorfindel's family background (he refused to talk about it to me previous to this). I'm not sure if he does remember in EI or not... we may find out sometime. I'm sure there are many such stories like Glorifndel's... not only with regards to Alqualondë but also the other Kinslayings and divided loyalties between the different Noldorin lords and factions. Glorfindel, I suspect, is not alone nor his case all that unusual. They all were a bit insane to do what they did. Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it.
Larner · 29 June 2008 · Chapter 24: MARCHES: Crossing the Ice
I hate to see the cubs die--but in this case know it was necessary. And to see amity overcome enmity is always good! And Finrod is already showing himself a worthy lord!
Author's reply
Yeah, I didn't like that either, but they would've died anyway with their mother gone, so it was more a mercy killing on Glorfindel's part. Finrod, of course has a ways to go before he becomes King of Nargothrond, but he's beginnning to show himself a worthy lord indeed, as Thandir learns. Thanks for reviewing.
Beruthiels Cat · 28 June 2008 · Chapter 24: MARCHES: Crossing the Ice
Thought the thunderstorms had passed by earlier, and ended up having to duck out in the middle and come back later... This tale is a most welcome insight into more of the history of two of my favorite characters. Their interaction here in the face of such danger is a great beginning bridge for their friendship and later events in their lives. The more you add to your various stories, the more seamless they become. The best parts of this tale brings into focus the reality of the exodus across the Helcaraxë, something that also needed expanding upon, as the terrible conditions they faced lasted so much longer and were so much worse than readers tend to realize. Saw the dedication, *smiles* and the feeling is indeed mutual. Couldn't keep myself on track without your valued input! Cat
Author's reply
I don't think too many people really understand just how horrific the Crossing had to have been for the Elves... it took them nearly 10 years to reach Beleriand, and in all that time they were constantly reminded of the treachery and betrayal that forced them to make such a perilous journey... that alone must have made everytning that much worse for them. And thanks again for all your help with this story... you know what I was going through as I was writing it.
6336 · 28 June 2008 · Chapter 24: MARCHES: Crossing the Ice
Mm. I do like how you tie your stories together. Interesting insight in to Glorfindel's family, what happened to his father, did he make it to Endore(sp)?What a thing to happen, how many who followed tried to stop the slaughter at Aqualonde and died themselves,something else to lay at Feanor's feet, inconsiderate elf! More please, Lynda
Author's reply
I thought it was time to show WHY Glorfindil NEVER speaks of his family to anyone in my "Elf, Interrupted" series. I wasn't sure myself just what happened until I started writing this. Thanks for reviewing.
eiluj · 28 June 2008 · Chapter 24: MARCHES: Crossing the Ice
Okay, I am now very sorry I ever wondered about Glorfindel's family. And this makes perfect sense of his responses in "EI" when asked about his parents. [But wasn't he being called "Laurefindë" in "EI"?] I liked the details about what they hunted and ate. It really *was* a *long* journey; I suppose it must have taken months and months -- then again, if I look at the Atlas, it was probably at least two thousand miles to Beleriand, so maybe it took *years* (looking in the Sil just makes me want to pin Tolkien down to a few definite answers about geography, and exactly where certain things took place). Anyway: I never thought about this before, but it certainly was an ironic contrast to the older generation's journey to Aman. Interesting about the "wavering" lights. Is that your detail, or is it something Tolkien mentioned? It is actually *raining*!!!
Author's reply
I originally had "Laurefindë" as a possibnle back translation of Glorfindel in Ei and other stories where he appears, but I recently came across a reference by Tolkien where he specifically states that his Quenya hame was "Laurefindil" so I went back to change it as I like to stay as much in canon as possible. According to Tolkien in such things as the Annals of Aman and the Annals of Beleriand, found in various volumes of HoME, the journey took nearly a Valian year or 9.58 solar years to complete. So yes, they were a long time reaching Middle-earth. The Aurora Borealis is my input with the Elves thinking they were Maiar keeping an eye on them. Tolkien never mentions them excetp in ths "Father Christmas Letters". *grin* Thanks for reviewing.
Kaylee · 28 June 2008 · Chapter 24: MARCHES: Crossing the Ice
Ai, meldonya!! I get the shivers just reading this...both from the cold and the fear!!!! Question; during the snowstorm scene with the dead polar bears, was it Thandir and Glorfi alone or was Laurendil with them? Because occasionally you said Laurendil and sometimes Laurefindil and I was confused. ~Kaylee!!
Author's reply
Sorry, I thought I had gotten all the references to Laurendil changed to Laurefindil. Thanks for pointing it out.
artistic sprite · 18 June 2008 · Chapter 23: QUARREL: Confronting Námo
That was priceless!!!!!! And here I was sitting with a stupid grin at my face while my aunt passed by. She probably thinks I'm crazy. But who wouldn't be grinning after reading this wonderful fic!
Author's reply
Thanks, sprite. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Maybe you should have your aunt read it so she knows just how crazy you are. LOL
Ellie · 17 June 2008 · Chapter 23: QUARREL: Confronting Námo
Thanks for the warning. Loved the crabcakes and the smiles from namo's wife. The whole exchange with Thranduil was great. There were so many great lines in there, too like the one with beaing able to teach feanor a thing or two. Poor Leggy was hilarious in his "green-ness". What a delightful tale of fatherly love and annoyed Vala.
Author's reply
Thanks, Ellie. I'm glad you enjoyed this tale, especially the exchange with Thranduil and Legolas being 'green'. *grin* Námo certainly was annoyed but he kept his cool through it all.
Larner · 17 June 2008 · Chapter 23: QUARREL: Confronting Námo
Ah, thanks so for the chuckle! And they'd all move away if Thranduil moved it? Heh!
Author's reply
You're welcome, Larner. Glad you like this little fic. Apparently, dealing with Glorfindel in Mandos was bad enough, but no one wants to deal with Thranduil in a similar state. *grin*
eliza · 17 June 2008 · Chapter 23: QUARREL: Confronting Námo
Fiondil, First- about your warnings. The problem is I always seem to see the updates during my coffee break and no way in mandos, am I waiting to read them. So I always end up with coke up my nose. I love Thranduil, if I ever have to get rid of my husband he is definitely next in line. A great story as always.
Author's reply
Thanks eliza. I'm glad you enjoyed this tale. Sorry about the coke up your nose, but I did warn you. *grin*
Ces · 17 June 2008 · Chapter 23: QUARREL: Confronting Námo
Oh, thank you so much Fiondil! This little story has just totally made my day! Thanks for taking my question and giving it life. Where to start: "You have a lot of nerve, Vala, keeping my son from me." *snort* Who but Thranduil would barge in and not even give a hint obeisance to the Vala? "I gave Thranduil my most intimidating stare. Naturally, he didn’t take the hint." Is anyone but Thranduil not affected by Námo's glare? He seems to totally ignore it - nobody messes with a dad and his concern for his son! And Legolas must have looked just like a little efling trailing after his ada - I'm sure those two provided much amusement for Námo and the rest! Yes, Glorfindel and Thranduil in Námo's halls would have rocked that place on its foundations I'm thinking! I have a feeling Oropher must have given Námo a few grey hairs during his stay. Once again, a great big thank you for giving Thranduil's point of view! Ces
Author's reply
Well, I did say that if the right inspiration came along... and if the muse were cooperative... Well, it did and he was, and there you have it. *grin* Glad this little fic meets with your approval. Thanks for the idea.
Edlyn · 17 June 2008 · Chapter 23: QUARREL: Confronting Námo
Oh this was wonderfully funny! And now I have a taste for crab cakes and no way to get any (I wonder if Tol Eressëan crab cakes taste as good as Chesapeake Bay blue crab cakes?) in the immediate future. Poor Legolas. He was dreading that his embarrassing secret was going to come out afer all this time. But I can also understand Thranduil's feelings on the matter as well. But I think the thing I liked best was the byplay between the Valar and Maiar during the whole scene. Maranwe's comment had me howling with laughter and I could barely breathe for a couple minutes after reading Námo's comeback I was laughing so hard. What a great way to start my day. Thanks, meldonya! Edlyn
Author's reply
Legolas has a lot to live down and the last thing he wants Thranduil to know is just *how* he died. Too embarrassing for a wood elf and a prince at that. I'm glad you liked the byplay between the Valar and Maiar especially Maranwë's comment and Námo's rejoinder. And they say the Valar have no sense of humor. *grin* Thanks for letting me know how much you enjoyed this tale.
Rhyselle · 17 June 2008 · Chapter 23: QUARREL: Confronting Námo
I don't have time for a thorough review right now, but I have to say that I can't stop grinning. I'd always wondered whether Legolas had ever admitted just what happened to his Adar or not... now I know. And the idea of Lord Namo enjoying crabcakes just totally tickled my fancy! I wonder if a Tol Eressean crabcake would taste like the wonderful ones my grandmother would make when I was a kid in Baltimore? *grin* I'm so glad that Ces asked! Great job!
Author's reply
I'm glad this made your morning, especially as I know the night before was no fun for you. I suspect the Tol Eressëan crabcakes would taste even better, considering it's Elves who are making them, though I'm sure your grandmother's would come in a close second. *grin*
harrowcat · 17 June 2008 · Chapter 23: QUARREL: Confronting Námo
Hmm, crab cake, that does sound good. Thanks for the food warning. NOW I will go and have breakfast.
Author's reply
You're welcome. Bon apetit!
Kitty · 16 June 2008 · Chapter 23: QUARREL: Confronting Námo
Seems I have to remember to read warnings more carefully - nearly spit my cappuccino at the screen when Maranwë threatened to change allegiances ;-) Oh Fiondil, that was hilarious! All these reactions to Thranduil in the Halls of Mandos ... *ROFL!* Can you imagine Thranduil and Glorfindel team up there in Valinor after they sailed? Not to mention the Elrondionnath? *grin* Can Valar get grey hairs? Anyway, as funny it was, I felt a bit sorry for Thranduil. Behind his accusations it is too obvious how much he feared to lose his son. It would clearly have devastated him. This stupid elf shouldn't have told him anything - but we have probably to be thankful that he at least not mentioned *how* Legolas died!
Author's reply
The warnings are there for a reason, you know and not to be taken likely. *grin* Glad you found this so hilarious. I'm not sure if the Valar can get grey hair or not, but I'm sure they're working on it. Whatever Thranduil's faults, he does love his son and it would have devastated him to the point of possibly fading if Legolas had died indeed. I think everyone is happy that he never finds out just *how* Legolas died. No one would ever hear the end of it. Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it.
6336 · 16 June 2008 · Chapter 23: QUARREL: Confronting Námo
Aw, Ada Thranduil was just worried about his Little Leaf! Bad Fiondil for killing him off like that, but what a way for a Sindaran Prince to go, skewered by a tree,he's never going to live it down! (snort, giggle) I can just see Thranduil, "You WHAT!!! Fell on a tree branch, just don't let your Dearadar find out, for Eru's sake!" Lynda
Author's reply
Well if Legolas has his way, Ada Thranduil will never find out just how he died. Even Námo realized how embarrassing it would've been for him, which is why he danced around that particular bush as well. *grin*