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Larner · 5 June 2008 · Chapter 13: In Which Finrod Runs Away and Glorfindel Sails Away

Bilbo was listening closely and doing his homework all those years in Rivendell. Nice interweaving of the poem's elements; and another knows that special Presence as is needed. And now he accepts the comfort he chased away earlier, and having accepted it the fear of abandonment is dismissed as Finrod returns. Lovely imagery.

Kitty · 5 June 2008 · Chapter 13: In Which Finrod Runs Away and Glorfindel Sails Away

I've written a long review, but the server refuses it :-( Nilmandra is looking into it to find out why it doesn't work, but it may take a bit of time - I hope to post it soon. For the moment I will only say that this chapter was fun!

Nieriel Raina · 4 June 2008 · Chapter 13: In Which Finrod Runs Away and Glorfindel Sails Away

Oh my, what a chapter! Even Atar is sometimes taken back by our Balrog Slayer? *laughter* Atar seems to be taking a more direct hand in the story. It's interesting to see your descriptions of him. Poor Glorfindel though. Seems he's being forced to grow up when he isn't quite emotionally mature yet. Its intersting to see his reactions. One never knows quite what to expect from him. *grin* Glad Finrod burned off some steam. I'll have to remember that. When life gets unbearble, go for a long run! So I wonder if Manwe will be explaining now, or if Glory still isnt' ready yet. Wonderful chapter! As always, I look forward to more!

6336 · 4 June 2008 · Chapter 13: In Which Finrod Runs Away and Glorfindel Sails Away

Why visit, just leave him there, they don't have internet?! Lynda

eiluj · 4 June 2008 · Chapter 13: In Which Finrod Runs Away and Glorfindel Sails Away

Well, it's been a day of surprises, including SoA being down again, and now finding this so unexpectedly soon. (Not that I'm complaining, mind! But I wonder, is this speedy posting a response to reviewers’ nagging? j/k! j/k!) "Glorfindel kept getting upset every time he thought about what the Valar had done to him (or what he thought they might have done to him)" -- *snicker* I'm trying to imagine the conversation if Finrod and/or Manwë ever tell Glorfindel that they had decided Morgoth would reject Glorfindel as a gift. [Maybe they should actually make Morgoth the offer: I suspect it would give him nightmares (surely a Good Thing)! *mental picture of Glorfindel chasing Morgoth around the Void*] "Glorfindel has had a rather rough first year since being released from Irmo’s care” -- Just a wee understatement there. I imagine no Reborn ever had a *worse* first year. Ah: the water of Life. [And now that I've thought of that, I've got Argento's "Revelation of St. John the Divine" playing in my brain. *Many* years ago, our college choral group performed it, and it's one of the pieces of music that plays at the mention of appropriate phrases (and in learning that piece, I apparently memorized half the book of Revelation, so there are a plethora of possible phrases). Yes, I have a weird brain.] Eärendil sailing Vingelot only occasionally: that's a new one, and it certainly makes sense astronomically. It's also infinitely preferable to the interpretation that he sails 24/7 and never sees Elwing at all. And once Middle-earth is no longer flat, he’d need to be in the sky all 24 hours (most of the year, anyway) to be visible across the entire planet, so this *really* makes sense. Of course, at this point the planet *is* still flat, but apparently the Valar added Venus before the world was changed. I’m wondering how the Valar gave Venus the quality of the Silmaril’s light, which presumably the “star” still had; I’m sure they must have had fun figuring that out. Oh, *please* write a story about the party in Mandos to celebrate Glorfindel’s being Reborn! It should be interesting when Ingwion and Glorfindel compare notes about their experiences, given how much was different. I trust that while everyone was gone from the camp site, Beleg's fëa hasn't been wandering the Tenth Dimension looking for G and F. [Probably the Hunt hasn't happened yet.] Re. Nahar possibly being one of the Maiar: I should have thought of that possibility, since I’ve read of that explanation for Manwë’s Eagles. Well, past time to go brave the poison ivy and the evil mosquitoes and the *ticks* (!!), so I’ll just hope this is more coherent than I think it is, and post. You may not have many reviews till people find the new address, but at least I’ve given you a long one to puzzle over....

6336 · 4 June 2008 · Chapter 13: In Which Finrod Runs Away and Glorfindel Sails Away

Actually, when you think of it, Finrod has had an easier transition after being re-born, he had his parants love and help and a familier place to live, plus time to come to terms with his life now. Glorfindel on the other hand has been dumped in at the deep end as it were, with no family to help him other than Finrod and Sador, plus things have been happening at an alarming rate with no time for him to aclimatise to them! Does he still have family in Aman? Let's hope Adar's little talk will help him and that Manwe's answers, those he is willing to give at this time, do also. I see this site has been under attack again, what is it with these people, obviously thay do not have anything better to do. Do you think a little talk with Namo would help? More please Lynda

Calenlass Greenleaf · 4 June 2008 · Chapter 13: In Which Finrod Runs Away and Glorfindel Sails Away

Did Glorfindel just run into... Eru Himself? *wonders what to do now--either grin or faint*

Kaylee · 4 June 2008 · Chapter 13: In Which Finrod Runs Away and Glorfindel Sails Away

*GASPS* Ai dear Valar...and Eru...oh, meldonya!!!!!! Glorfi ran into ERU!!!!!!! That's just...ohmygoodness, I was so awed by this...And I still want to know the answers to Finda and Glorfi's questions, lol. Will Manwe be more forthcoming in the next chapter, meldonya? (And is SoA going to stay broken? :( ) Namarie, Kaylee!

Ces · 4 June 2008 · Chapter 13: In Which Finrod Runs Away and Glorfindel Sails Away

Once again your descriptions are stunning. You definitely have a way with words that I envy. Glad to see Glorfindel managed to keep his humor and cheekiness intact with Atar! Who else but Lord Namo could help him do that, even if he wasn't there?! Poor elf though. You can understand his whining; here he doesn't see something everyone else can see and then finds out that it was kept a secret from him. Of course he's puzzled as to why. Finrod had to let all his anger and fear out. Glad to see it finally happen. The reunion between he and Glorfindel should be good. And I'm glad Manwe and Namo are there to help them. I'm sure it will be an interesting conversation. Ces

Radbooks · 3 June 2008 · Chapter 12: The Hunters Four

Well, this is an interesting turn of events. :) Namo is going to be very, very upset with Orome if Beleg shows up in his Halls again! I'm hoping that it's something like when Glorfindel slipped his leash and they'll be able to track him down really soon - I know the reborn's fea is different than that of the once born and he is so recently reborn that it doesn't seem like it would take too much for him to slip out of his body. At least that's what I'm hoping for! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Radbooks · 3 June 2008 · Chapter 11: Ingwion iYánassë Elenion

Incredibly moving. What a wonderful picture of coming to God and letting him ease you of your burdens... especially the past which cannot be changed. Well done!! I wish I could better describe how I feel about this chapter, but words are failing me. :)

Tari · 3 June 2008 · Chapter 9: Playing at World's End

The Valar certainly do a lot of betting. The thought of them suffering the same punishment as the Elves is hilarious, and a good example. They can take punishment as well as applying it to others. And, they do it with humor. Tari

Tari · 3 June 2008 · Chapter 8: A Discussion about Family

I have no doubt that the Valar would get frustrated with the Elves. More times than not I am sure. How many problems will come forth due to Vorondil Herendilion’s release? I’m willing to bet there will be more problems with Calalindalë too. She’s hateful. Nienna really has her hands full, but I have no doubt that she is up to the challenge. Drowning seems to be her choice way of threatening people. I love her humor. Dear Vorondil is really having a rought time. I would say to him if I could, "Hang in there, child. Better days are ahead." Tari

artistic sprite · 3 June 2008 · Chapter 12: The Hunters Four

Now things are beginning to get exciting. Keep up!

eiluj · 3 June 2008 · Chapter 12: The Hunters Four

Interesting idea that everything resonates with an echo of the original Song, and the Reborn resonate just a bit differently from everyone else. *Besides, I have the feeling we’re not meant to actually go to where Glorfindel and Findaráto are, but to provide them with an anchor so they can come to us* -- That's intriguing. And are Glorfindel and Finrod supposed to come with or without their hröar? I had previously assumed Eärendil would somehow bring them back (he always seems to be my choice of deus ex machina) but I suppose if any two elves *could* manage to teleport between dimensions -- and survive the experience! -- it would be those two.... When Beleg's fëa shows up in the Tenth Dimension, I'm imagining Glorfindel screaming, "He's dead! He's dead!" Though last time, it was *Finrod* who was screaming -- and neither of them would remember the experience. After this episode, I'm sure there's going to be another item on the list of Things Not To Let the Recently Reborn Get Involved In. Any thoughts about Nahar being immortal or not? Huan obviously lived much longer than he should have; and who knows how long he'd have lived if not for Carcharoth? And was Oromë the only Vala who collected apparently-immortal animals? [Wondered about Nahar again recently because I was playing Canon Police on another site re. elves having immortal horses in Middle-earth.]

Beruthiels Cat · 2 June 2008 · Chapter 12: The Hunters Four

Back to the hunting lodge from Mahanaxar...where there *the weather* conspires to keep these hunters isolated just as Glorfindel was by the snowstorm. Ingwion's experiences will be valuable before all is said and done. Impressions: Above what is said here, one wonders if the manner of Sador and Beleg's deaths and their experiences in Mandos are another thread connecting these two. Sador is innocence, and Beleg is a seeker. Laurendil for his loyalty. Lovely picture of them seeing each other as they truly are...beings of light. I'm not surprised that Beleg would be the one to slip the leah, but I think he's going to be surprised to find himself in a place he didn't intend, lol...although the nermir have collected him for the journey. Love the idea of them as the Song made visible. Not very coherent, but this chapter provokes a myraid of thoughts, and I'm still processing! Cat

GoldenFlower · 2 June 2008 · Chapter 12: The Hunters Four

*rapidtwitching* Oh, cant wait to see what happens next! Great writing! ~GF

Hel · 2 June 2008 · Chapter 12: The Hunters Four

And then they were three... Glorfindel and Finrod will shurely be glad to have Beleg´s company. Are the butterflies the same as those in Wars of the Valar? If yes, I think that there is a higher power meddling in the plans of the Valar and the Hunt. Could it be that by following Beren´s fea back to his body Glorfindel and Finrod are able to return?

Agape4Gondor · 2 June 2008 · Chapter 12: The Hunters Four

So there I am this morning, innocently getting ready for work, when a little nudge pushes me to SoA - I could swear, I honestly could, Fiondil.... To have to go to work after reading that chapter is a great sacrifice!!!!!!!!!!! As for the Hunt - I'm glad they started it, but was surprised the way it went. I remember when our hero went off with his fea and the Valar almost lost their lunches over that one! Imagine Beleg going off! I'm hoping that he at least stays in this dimension..... But it wouldn't surprise me that, of all of them, he'd be the one to find the lost... after all, he found Turin, didn't he!!! I'm afraid there is a Vala and some Elves going to be in hot water with Manwe! The best laid plans of mice and men - er, Valar and Elves.... Can't wait till the next chapter.

vampfan30 · 2 June 2008 · Chapter 11: Ingwion iYánassë Elenion

wow, this was an absolutely amazing chapter that just left me in awe.....I'm an atheist, but the way you describe Eru, very moving.

Tari · 2 June 2008 · Chapter 7: The Elfing Brigade

This was such fun to read. The eflings are almost as much trouble as the Reborn. Their thoughts are typical of children. They think they are smarter than adults and therefore they can fool them. Right. The pony is waiting excitedly for Lindorillë. How sweet. However, her failed attempt to return home has had dire consequences. It seems to me that she is fading from grief. She just doesn’t understand. It sounds like a good idea for Sorondil and Oromendil to play with the newly Reborn. Hopefully it will help them grow up a little. Tari

6336 · 2 June 2008 · Chapter 12: The Hunters Four

Oops! Looks like Orome's 'Hunt' was a little more sucessful than he had planned! :<( I don't think Manwe and Namo are going to be too pleased with him if Beleg's fae is 'lost'! Let's hope he can find his way to the 10th dimension and Glorfy and Finda, and find his way beck to his body! More please, Lynda (Oh, and by the way, old habits do die hard, I have learned the hard way not to shake my husband awake, but to grab a foot :<)!)

Larner · 2 June 2008 · Chapter 12: The Hunters Four

And they begin to find the lost, but are drawn back, save Beleg who had already unconsciously divined the path to be taken. Now they need to bring the other three back! A rude awakening for these three remaining. Perhaps Orome needed to trust them a bit more.

Larner · 2 June 2008 · Chapter 11: Ingwion iYánassë Elenion

Cleansing inside and out, trust renewed, he gives over his regrets and accepts what will come.

Kaylee · 2 June 2008 · Chapter 12: The Hunters Four

Namarie, meldonya!!! Oh...will Beleg be all right? Yay that they found Finda and Glorfi...sort of...but now I'm worried about Beleg!!!!!!! *Huggles poor Beleg* He will be okay, won't he?? Won't he??? He can't end up in Mandos again, Namo would be disappointed. He's already been there once. ~Kaylee!!!