It by White Wolf
Tiinaj1 · 24 October 2015 · Chapter 18
Now this was a different kind of LOTR story. I do not like snakes but you made me want to know more. Great job!!!
Author's reply
I like to be as original as I can get on most of the stories I write. I think snakes are neat, but I have a healthy respect for them, especially the ones with venom. I think its also neat when anything I write can inspire someone to learn more about something or someone. Thank you.
Larner · 26 February 2010 · Chapter 18
The snake dead, but its progeny possibly hatching at some untoward time in the future? But of course! At least this one danger is past, and the trees merely rejoice that Legolas was spared! Now, to see what dangers these two get into next time!
Author's reply
Yeah, the snake is definitely dead, and hatching progeny is a distinct possibility. It's unlikely that L & A will have to worry about that one. I had to get Legolas back to the forest, and of course, the trees would forgive him and be happy he came back. You can bet it will be another wild ride. I tried to thank everyone who reviewed my stories at MEGA, but I'm sure I missed some. If I missed you, please know I appreciate all of your kind words very much. :o) Author Reply: EEEPS! I meant MEFA.
Larner · 26 February 2010 · Chapter 17
Thank heavens for the unwieldy bulk of the snake! Now, to get out of there!
Larner · 26 February 2010 · Chapter 16
And we so hope they do not fall to that fate. For It is on Its way, and they are still within reach. However, adrenaline is a powerful thing....
Larner · 26 February 2010 · Chapter 15
At last--some leisure to read and comment. Good--the weather for the moment works in their favor. Now--if they could possibly behead the serpent as they leave, it would rid ME of one more horror....
Sulwing of Mirkwood · 23 February 2010 · Chapter 18
Ohhhhhh, classic horror story ending there! They think everything is okay but it's not! I can just see some years in the future, Aragorn and Legolas will decide to show Eldarion the site of one of their near-death experiences and SURPRISE! It will begin all over again. Well, they made it. Finally. :) Legolas should thank his lucky stars that he was born an elf, or Aragorn would have got him killed years ago. Speaking of death though, I can only imagine Elrond's reaction when they return *this* time. Aragorn and Legolas have survived orcs, trolls, and a giant snake, but I think one of these days Elrond will just finish them off and save everyone a lot of trouble later. Great story, thanks so much for the good times! Love how you write Aragorn and Legolas! P.S. So, when is your next story going to begin? :)
Author's reply
Yeah, I couldn't resist. A fellow writer/friend from Germany called the snake she in a review on another site, and when I asked why, she said the Germain word for snake was in the feminine, so that gave me the idea for the ending. I love stuff like that. Oh my. I like your idea about the future. What fun that would be. Yes, they sure did. I agree that Legolas has a big advantage on these misadventures because he's an elf. I imagine Elrond will surely give them a very stern lecture, then he might finish them off. :o) I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the way I write L & A. I have a new story that I'll post soon.
Sulwing of Mirkwood · 23 February 2010 · Chapter 17
Who ever said humans were weak? Aragorn is living proof of the contrary! I would hate to be going through what the Dynamic Duo is experiencing right now. Poor snake, can't get at the little humans. Still, I wouldn't get to comfortable, Aragorn. You guys NEVER have luck go your way for long. Though maybe it will this time. Legolas can't keep going forever without proper care.
Author's reply
That man does have an enormous constitution, doesn't he? Me, too. It certainly is a test of endurance - and luck. It isn't for lack of trying, that's for sure. I don't think Aragorn's been comfortable since he found out that the tunnels weren't empty. :o) No, not even an elf can survive every time when things like this happen. The next chapter will resolve a lot.
Sulwing of Mirkwood · 23 February 2010 · Chapter 16
At least they made some progress, but it looks like they're about to lose out to the cold and It is on the way! Oh no!!!! Why can't they EVER luck out? :O
Author's reply
That's true, though it wasn't easy. The cold can be very dangerous, so we must hope they'll be all right, even though It is coming after them.
Elflingimp · 22 February 2010 · Chapter 18
Oh Jeez!!!! You just can't let it go can you? LOL! Good Thriller.
Author's reply
No, the plot bunny had to have his way. :o) Glad you enjoyed it.
Sulwing of Mirkwood · 8 January 2010 · Chapter 15
I suppose the snake freezing to death would be too much to hope for. But if It's sleeping, now would be a great time to find a way to kill it. Lovely, now the elf is not only torn to pieces, he has a high fever and is going to be dragged out into the snow in all of this. Poor guy. Oh, Aragorn's thoughts are so amusing. :) "That idea excited the ranger, that is, until he realized that he and Legolas would likely freeze to death long before the snake did. Why did practical facts always seem to come along to dash a hopeful thought?" I hate being practical. *"You will be no more of a burden to me than I have been to you under similar circumstances,” the ranger declared firmly. It was Legolas’s turn to laugh. “When have we ever been in anything remotely resembling these circumstances?” “Point taken.”* Lol, I can't remember anything like that either. True, I've read plenty of stories where they are either stranded in a blizzard nowhere near help or are up against some evil creature, but being in a snowstorm with a giant snake? I think that's a new one! :) As for Legolas not being suicidal? HA! You wouldn't think it half the time. And Aragorn can't say anything either.
Author's reply
If our guys were in a position to kill the snake that would be great, but alas, they aren't. Yeah, it is a bad situation. But, they can't stay where they are. So, leaving the cave is their only real option. Practicality can be a drag sometimes. I'm glad you seemed to like those quotes. I did, too. :o) I try to be original with my story plots. I think being in a snowstorm with a relentless giant snake is rather unique. I've never read anything like it before, either. Considering the messes those two get into, being suicidal seems to be a forgone conclusion, otherwise they'd stay in bed. :o)
Sitaray · 21 December 2009 · Chapter 15
omg...poor guys can't catch a break! Damn the snow!! Hopefully they'll be able to get out of this one :) Merry Christmas to you too!
Author's reply
Yes, I have to agree with you. And, I have a feeling that snow is not going to be a mixed blessing. We can only offer the guys our best wishes. Hope you had a good Christmas.
Sulwing of Mirkwood · 16 December 2009 · Chapter 9
just rereading the story while waiting for the next chapter...love it every time! and by the way, i for one would have loved to watch elrond's hair curl, lol! that'd be a sight! :)
Author's reply
Wow. What a compliment. Thanks. If you remember, Elrond's hair was curled at Aragorn's coronation, and it looked awful. :o)
Sulwing of Mirkwood · 14 December 2009 · Chapter 14
hey, at least they didn't have to run anywhere in this chapter... lol it would be cave! (even if it is a sorry excuse of one, Aragorn) not that i feel bad for the snake or anything, but to think of a knife in one's tongue, ow...and i thought biting my tongue was painful if only Aragorn had just stuck his sword down It's throat, i mean, how else are they going to kill it? hmmm...
Author's reply
Right. They were able to get a little rest. I guess that little cave is better than nothing, and Aragorn didn't have much of a choice. Biting one's tongue is very painful, but I can't scare up much sympathy for that snake, considering all It's done to our guys. I know It's just doing what snake's do, but It doesn't have to be so relentless about it. Who says the snake will get killed? :o)
Larner · 1 December 2009 · Chapter 14
It's a matter of time before they find a way to get past the snake and to their horses and safety--ane hopefully new supplies. But at least Legolas is capable of awakening and bantering--always a good sign.
Author's reply
It may be a matter of time, but time is slowing down for them, at least in their minds, I'm sure. It seems that no matter the situation, they can't help the humor that often creeps into their conversations.
Sulwing of Mirkwood · 12 November 2009 · Chapter 13
eewwwwwww. It licked him! ick ick ick. Snakes don't normally freak me out, but a big snake chasing me around, biting at me and LICKING me is just disgusting. ick. ;) Yay Aragorn! Snake got a little too close that time! :) But...still in cave, snake planning who knows what, Legolas in very bad shape. Lots of fun coming up!
Author's reply
Yes, it most certainly did. I was grimacing while I wrote that part. I think it's safe to say that Aragorn probably feels exactly the same way. You summed that up pretty nicely. I do believe I see some 'fun' heading in our direction.
Larner · 12 November 2009 · Chapter 13
Next time he might try for the eye, I suppose. Good planning. Now to do what he can for Legolas.
Author's reply
I think he just reacted. The tongue was the offending object, so it got the knife. I agree on both counts. The elf definitely needs tending to.
daw the minstrel · 7 November 2009 · Chapter 13
What a narrow escape! And I'm not punning on the size of the cave entrance! The slimy tongue would have freaked me out. Thank Eru that Aragorn is braver.
Author's reply
Well, hello. I haven't heard from you in a long time. Welcome back. It was a narrow escape. Punning is acceptable, since it's true both literally and figuratively. Yuck. That slimy tongue would have definitely freaked me out, as well. Luckily, Aragorn is braver than both of us.
Sulwing of Mirkwood · 15 October 2009 · Chapter 12
O.o ...oops... ...um... ...little help, please? someone? it looks like they'll be dinner this time. and there i got all excited that they were together again. :( ...please don't kill them...surely legolas has suffered enough today p.s. decaying stuff on the snake's teeth...ew
Author's reply
I think our guys are alone, no help coming. Unless, of course, you consider the author help. :o) Excitement comes in many forms, good and bad, but they are together, which has to be a good thing. Legolas probably has suffered enough, but that may not make a difference. We'll have to see how it goes. I thought of Kimodo dragons when I wrote that part, because their saliva is septic due to diet and not from venom. Ew is right.
Larner · 10 October 2009 · Chapter 12
Good--Ranger and Elf connect, and Ranger bids fair to escape with wounded friend. Now, to make certain the snake doesn't capture them again!
Author's reply
Finally. That's the plan, but when have you known those two to have a plan work out the way they originally hope it will? It may take several plans, since I'm sure my plot bunny has plans of his own.
Larner · 10 October 2009 · Chapter 11
Oh, dear--can they meet, now? Aragorn is doing his bit, but Legolas is unwittingly moving away from him? At least the snake's poisin doesn't appear particularly potent.
Author's reply
Good question. Poor Legolas doesn't know Aragorn is coming. I think he just wants to get away from where the snake left him, in case it comes back. Legolas will wonder about that, too, I bet. ;O)
Sulwing of Mirkwood · 2 October 2009 · Chapter 11
:) ...Hi...I'm back. I have been reeeaalllly busy lately, so please forgive me! But It was the first story I read when I had the time! :) I almost forgot that the sun could actually come out, they had been running around in the dark for so long. Anyway. Legolas, stop worrying so much about Aragorn and sit STILL. He is coming to you. And it won't be of much help in any circumstance if you puncture your lungs. Not to mention I'm a little scared that you could have been poisoned. So just stop moving. Aragorn, HURRY UP! If the snake sees Legolas again, well, what with the state he's in, they will be IN VERY BIG TROUBLE. AGAIN. Incidentally, I can't see that the horses will be much help now either. It would be very dangerous for Legolas to bounce around on one of them at this time. So, how do they get out of this one? :)
Author's reply
Good to hear from you. Thank you for coming back and reading this. I know they were happy to see the sun. (It's been raining for so long where I live, I'd love to see the sun again, as well.) Legolas doesn't know if Aragorn is able to come after him. Also, he's afraid to stay put and risk the snake finding him. I think VERY BIG TROUBLE is an understatement should the snake find Legolas again. Can you say DINNER? Not only would horse-bouncing be bad, though it would be preferable to being eaten, but I don't think the horses could even reach our guys at the moment. That's the million dollar question. We'll have to wait and see. :O)
Larner · 10 September 2009 · Chapter 11
Hopefully it is mistaken about "dinner waiting." I hope it is a good long time before it eats again--how about never? Heh!
Author's reply
I think It may be mistaken, since Legolas is on the move, though not very fast and probably not very far. Oh yes. I like that idea very much. Now, if only the snake will cooperate.
sofia · 18 August 2009 · Chapter 10
really enjoyed the chapter (sorry I haven't reviewed in, like, ages!). I'm feeling like something is gonna happen in the next chapter- like an attempted rescue? At any rate, I look forward to seeing what comes next!
Author's reply
I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Don't worry about not reviewing for a while. I'm glad you're back. I think you may be right. Whether it's successful or not remains to be seen.
LadyLegolas · 14 August 2009 · Chapter 10
Ai! Poor Legolas. :'( Be safe, Aragorn!
Author's reply
Poor Legolas indeed. We'll have to see how safe Aragorn turns out to be.
Sulwing of Mirkwood · 14 August 2009 · Chapter 10
oooooooh.......snap. THEY'RE ALL GONNA DIE, THEY'RE ALL GONNA DIE, THEY'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!! Actually, that should be "they're both gonna die." Well maybe not. After all, the elf might taste good, but the ranger...who knows how long ago he took a bath, might give It indigestion. Also, I can't see It delicately removing arrows, swords, and knives from quivers and scabbards before dinner and somehow I think those might cause the snake at least a little pain. Who knows? Maybe they're all gonna die anyway. Okay, sorry, that was weird. So Aragorn was travelling away from Legolas, who is lying incapacitated. It has spotted Aragorn. Not looking good here. Could use a little estel and luck. And maybe something more, like an identical twin or two, a wizard, or SOMETHING! HELP! Snake at twelve o'clock! :)
Author's reply
Yipes. I hope you are wrong. The ranger would certainly be a little gritty, however, snakes don't chew their food, so that wouldn't be a problem for It. Having all the weapons sticking out at odd angles definitely would be unpleasant going down. We don't know yet if Aragorn has really been spotted. Let's hope not. The trouble with outside rescue is that no one knows where they are. One of the Palantíri would be helpful right about now.