anon · 24 May 2004 · Chapter 19: Take Courage, Lover
This is a great fic! Please let them run away togather and get married! That would be great! This is wonderful!!!! Update soon!!!!
Stars May Collide by Rose Gamgee
anon · 24 May 2004 · Chapter 19: Take Courage, Lover
This is a great fic! Please let them run away togather and get married! That would be great! This is wonderful!!!! Update soon!!!!
shirebound · 24 May 2004 · Chapter 19: Take Courage, Lover
Goodness! Where are they going? This hardly seems like the right way for Pippin to show Diamond's family how responsible and serious he is, but love does strange things to people. Ah, romance... :)
Pervinca · 24 May 2004 · Chapter 19: Take Courage, Lover
"Very Important Things" was an understatement! Wow, you managed to fit so much into one chapter, and not make it seem crowded. I was nearly crying! (Of course, that may have had something to do with RotK playing in the background!) Now you've got me wondering where they're going to run away to! It would be really great if they held the wedding in Gondor (I had Pippin joke about this in one of my stories, lol), though I suppose Merry and Sam (at least!) would be slighly upset by this. Please update soon :) - Pervinca
Grey Wonderer · 24 May 2004 · Chapter 19: Take Courage, Lover
so glad to see a new chapter of this one. Also am very glad that Pippin has decided to take action and marry Diamond. Can't wait for more.
Diamond · 23 May 2004 · Chapter 19: Take Courage, Lover
More!!! Must have more!!!!!! *goes through withdrawn from fanfiction 5 seconds after fic ends* nooooo!!! cliffie!!! so, without further ado, I love your fanfiction. *hops out random window*
darksun · 15 May 2004 · Chapter 18: Rainy Weather
What an absolutely wonderful and beautiful story. Honestly. The emotion, your display of characters, everything. It breaks my heart to see someone as meek as Diamond going through what she's going through. And Pippin. Ack! Such a lovely way you write him. So romantic. *Sigh* Hehe. He kissed her hands again, his eyes bright with tears and longing, burning into her soul. Oww, okay, pain. Beautiful, dearest. Can't wait to see more!
Pervinca · 8 May 2004 · Chapter 18: Rainy Weather
Oh, that was so sweet! Poor Diamond :( But at least you're into the most important year now. It can't be too much longer before the wedding happens (or so I hope :P). Good to see that Di's finally found someone she can trust to tell. I just hope the Opal keeps her promise. You're forgiven for the big break between updates, but if it happens again, I may not be so forgiving ;P lol
ming eledhwen · 7 May 2004 · Chapter 18: Rainy Weather
ahhh!!!!! *melts into a puddle...* *then remembers that rose hasn't updated for a loooong while * wohoo! you've finally updated! whhhhyyyy!?!?! did you take so long to give us such a fantastically written and angsty chapter? huh, huh, huh? oh, forget it, i'm still in puddles over the kissing scene...rain, cloak, kissing...perfect! keep it up!
Valerie · 6 May 2004 · Chapter 18: Rainy Weather
Damn you and your skillfull angsty romantic writing! *sniff* I can't handle much more of this rising action. That was an evil, tantalizing A/N. What is going to happen in the next chapter?! This was written so well. So emotional. It made me REALLY wish that I was Diamond during that intense kissing scene :P. Good job!
Samwisegirl12 · 6 May 2004 · Chapter 18: Rainy Weather
Oh great, Rose Gamgee, thankie for this wonderful update. *bows* Oh great, Marigold, thankie for being beta-reader. *bows* That's so sad that they have to hide it!! *tear* Yay!! More! ~ swg ~
Bluegrass Elf · 5 May 2004 · Chapter 18: Rainy Weather
I'm so glad you updated. That was beautiful.
Elendiari22 · 5 May 2004 · Chapter 18: Rainy Weather
Meh! Poor Diamond, I wonder what will happen next. I hope that they get caught, or can at least start into the process of engagement and whatnot soon. Lovely chapter!
Hai · 5 May 2004 · Chapter 18: Rainy Weather
At least Diamond tole her sister about Pippin, at always helps when someone else knows! I hope that Diamond and Pippin reveal this pretty soon! It would be better if they didn't have to sneak about, yet I hope it doesn't end when it all comes out! Looking forward to more, thank you!
songspinner · 21 April 2004 · Chapter 17: Birthday Wishes
oh, I loved this story so far...just discovered it and now I'm waiting breathlessly for the next bit.! Wonderful dialogue, very natural, and good characterization.
Author's reply
Thank you, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :)
Cm · 3 April 2004 · Chapter 17: Birthday Wishes
Another wonderful chapter! And more Merry interaction ^_^ always something I like, I loved the line Merry said about swooning to Pippin and when he handed Lily over to him he said, 'Here, hold this.' Very Merry. Poor and Diamond though... well update soon! Great job.
Author's reply
I'm having a lot of fun with Merry in this story, and I'm glad you're liking how I write him. :D Thanks for the comments!
Kristy · 3 April 2004 · Chapter 17: Birthday Wishes
I just found this story and read every chapter fearing the time when I would come to the end of one and not see that welcome Next link. Now that I've arrived I'm just as sad as I expected to be. I am very much enjoying this story and hope you will continue to write it and update often. I feel so sorry for Diamond having to hide her relationship from everyone and my heart hurts for Pip. He's missing his love and mourning for children he thinks will never come. Thanks for writing this. I can't wait to see what happens next! Kristy
Author's reply
Thanks so much for the feedback! :) Don't worry, Pippin and Diamond will be back together soon enough...
Valerie · 31 March 2004 · Chapter 17: Birthday Wishes
Awww...poor Diamond :(. Lying to one's mother is never fun. I just hope that everything works out for them SOOON!!! And Merry should have made his own supper! lol just kidding :P
Author's reply
I know, I hate lying to my parents. And I'm sure things will work out for Pippin and Diamond eventually, but I'm disinclined to say when... O:) Hehe, Estella should take a day off and make the lads do all the domestic work! Though I'm sure they do help her out here and there... ;)
Le Rouret · 31 March 2004 · Chapter 17: Birthday Wishes
All right, everyone together now: "Awww . . . *sob*" Another great chapter. And that first half was chock-full of good lines! "I don't know how they do it in Rohan, but knights of Gondor do not swoon." And, "Right again! And whose colors do we like best?" "Gondor!" Pippin snorted while Merry hurried to correct her, whispering, "Rohan." "Rohan!" But my favorite was, 'He set his daughter on Pippin's lap. "Here, hold this." He then walked out of the kitchen in search of his wife. ' "Here, hold this"? Only a guy could come up with a line like that! You nailed him. The relationship between Diamond and her mother is interesting; I hope you're going to develop that soon. And I love the hobbit names -- they're perfectly "Tolkienish"! Le Rouret
Author's reply
Glad you liked those lines! I've had a lot of fun putting Merry and Pippin in a "family men" situation. And hopefully I'll have time to develop that mother/daughter relationship more. I'm *very* glad you like the hobbit names! For me, thinking up a good name is probably the most difficult part of making a new character, especially with the hobbits. I mean, there are only so many decent flowers and jewels to choose from! It's always great to hear from you, you leave wonderful feedback. :)
Hai · 31 March 2004 · Chapter 17: Birthday Wishes
I liked Lily saying her favorite colors were Gondor's! I guess Merry is going to have to work on her loyalties! :D Poor, Diamond maybe it isn't too late for her to speak to her mother, or at least for her mother to become more involved in her life! Looking forward to more, thank you!
Author's reply
Hehe, Merry will have to work hard to turn her into a true child of Rohan. ;) Thanks for the feedback!
Pervinca · 31 March 2004 · Chapter 17: Birthday Wishes
Oh, this started out as such a happy chapter, and it ended so sadly! Not that it makes it bad, I just felt like crying at the end, like Diamond did. I hope you were telling the truth about the next chapter coming soon - I really want to see what happens next. (Of course, that's hardly any different to how I felt after the reading the rest of the chapters in this story :P)
Author's reply
Thank you! Heh, I realized while I was writing the second half that it was going to be a happy-yet-depressing chapter...
ming eledhwen · 31 March 2004 · Chapter 17: Birthday Wishes
"and whose colours do we like best?" "gondor" haha! I do love lily, she's so sweet! but i hope you find someone who dianmond can talk to, she really has no-one when pip's not around. keep it up! ;)
Author's reply
I've had so much fun writing Lily, and I'm glad other people are enjoying her too. :D Thanks for your comments!
Lyta Padfoot · 31 March 2004 · Chapter 17: Birthday Wishes
Its always hard to keep secrets from family. So Diamond's mother suspects something... should start to complicate things. Diamond's birthday present and Merry's quip about swooning were hysterical. Lily is a real charmer.
Author's reply
Oh, things will definitely get complicated soon. :D Thank you!
Grey Wonderer · 31 March 2004 · Chapter 17: Birthday Wishes
Poor Diamond! I hope she and Pippin are together soon. I also hope she finds someone she can confide in as Pippin has his dear Merry. Diamond needs a friend. Waiting for more.
Author's reply
She'll be confiding in someone in this next chapter, as you'll see. Also, Pippin and Diamond won't be apart very much after this. Ahem. O:) Thanks for the feedback!
Elendiari22 · 30 March 2004 · Chapter 17: Birthday Wishes
Aww, poor Diamond! I hope that she'll come to terms with her mum soon enough. I love Merry and Pippin's banter, those guys are too funny. The scarf was a brilliant idea, too. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's reply
Thanks for the feedback! I think Merry and Pippin are at their best when they're engaging in the playful banter. And I'm glad you ilked the scarf!
Cm · 21 March 2004 · Chapter 16: Anxiety
This is wonderful! I love Merry especially, as he is my favorite character, and even though his appearances are somewhat short in this fic (as obviously Pippin and Diamond are the main focus here ^_^ ) you still portray him excellently. Continue soon, great job!
Author's reply
Thank you! Merry is my second-favorite LotR character, so it's always nice to hear good feedback on how I write him. And he'll have a pretty major part to play in this story, though yes, the focus will remain on Pippin and Diamond. Still, you can't have a story about Pippin without a good deal of Merry involvement, right? ;)