powerwriter · 8 March 2004 · Chapter 16: Anxiety
Enjoying this so much, and waiting patiently for some conflict to arise ;)
Author's reply
Don't worry, major conflict is very close now. ;) Thank you!
Stars May Collide by Rose Gamgee
Reviews (138)
Hai · 6 March 2004 · Chapter 16: Anxiety
Poor Pippin! It would be terrible to think about but hopefully adoption or something will be possible! Of course we actually have to have a wedding first! I was glad to see that the new baby was Boromir, I always wondered why Pippin's boy is named Faramir, I'm glad that Merry's lad is! Looking forward to more, thank you!
Author's reply
This story will span several years, including Faramir's birth, so you'll get to see how that situation works out... Thanks for your comments! :)
ming eledhwen · 6 March 2004 · Chapter 16: Anxiety
i agree with all of the below, esp. elendiari ;) man, how can you write so well?!?!?!?!?! i loved merry and pippin's little interchange whilst estella was giving birth, it was all very believable, and nicely humourous too :) keep up with the updates please!
Author's reply
Aww, thanks! The Merry/Pippin friendship is one of my favorite aspects of LotR, so I always love getting feedback on how I write them together.
Valerie · 6 March 2004 · Chapter 16: Anxiety
Aww, that was such a good chapter! You got that first scene from 101 Dalmatians, didn't you?! Yes you did, there's no denying it! Hehe. Poor Pippin. My heart broke for him. You are such an awesome writer; I can feel the emotions of the characters as plainly as if they were my own. I felt anxious and excited everytime Estella cried with pain, just like Merry. My heart broke everytime I remembered that Diamond would not be able to have childrn, like Pippin. And even like Estella, I felt confused at Pippin's odd mood change (even though I knew what was bothering him). I'm so excited to see another chapter with Diamond. I wanna see some action! I wanna see Pippin get in Diamond's father's face and be like, "I love her, and I WILL marry her!" lol, I love romantic angsty stuff, especially if the guy has to fight for the girl. hehe Good luck with writing the next chapter!!
Author's reply
"You got that first scene from 101 Dalmatians, didn't you?!" Heehee, YES, and I was thrilled to find that someone had picked up on it! It's sad, how influenced I am by Disney movies (but hey, 101 Dalmations was my favorite movie growing up, I have a soft spot for it). I'm so glad that the emotions in that chapter came through for you. I wanted it to be a very strong scene, because I think of it as the moment when Pippin's will is set on the issue. It's where he finally says to himself, "*This* is what I want, and *this* is what I'm going to have, no matter the cost." And trust me, this story will not be lacking romantic angst. *rubs her hands together and cackles* Thank you for the wonderful feedback!
Elendiari22 · 6 March 2004 · Chapter 16: Anxiety
Agh!!!!!! You can't leave us hanging like this! Keep writing! Sit down and do it now! I want to know what happens next!
Author's reply
You'll find I have a downright naughty tendency to leave my poor readers hanging in suspense an awful lot... O:) But really, I'll do my best to update quicker now (and I don't think it'll be too difficult, because the *really* interesting stuff is about to come up...)
Samwisegirl12 · 6 March 2004 · Chapter 16: Anxiety
Yay!!! Finally, an update!! It's so sad how Pip is about Diamond not being able to have a child! So cute! I second what Le Rouret said! ~ swg ~
Author's reply
It's amazing how Pippin is cute even when he's sad, isn't it? ;) Thanks!
Le Rouret · 6 March 2004 · Chapter 16: Anxiety
All right, darn you, you take so long to update and then you make me CRY ON A SATURDAY MORNING!? Bad Rose, bad naughty wicked Rose!!! On the other hand, that was a clever, moving segue. Can't wait till the next chapter! *brandishes horsewhip* Quick, quick! If I can update every Monday, so can you!!! Thanks, by the way. I was afraid you'd abandoned "Stars May Collide" and was very relieved when I got the story update. Le Rouret
Author's reply
Hehehe, sorry! And don't worry, I'm far too involved in this story to ever consider abandoning it. I know it takes me a while to update, but as long as there's interest, I *will* update eventually! Thanks for the feedback! :)
Grey Wonderer · 6 March 2004 · Chapter 16: Anxiety
Beautiful and sad at the same time. Loved how nervous Merry was while waiting for the child to arrive and the way that both he and Estella included Pippin.
Author's reply
Yeah, I think that Merry is way too close to Pippin for him to be left out of that event (and I don't doubt that Estella understood this very well). I'm so glad you're liking this! :)
Pervinca · 6 March 2004 · Chapter 16: Anxiety
Boromir Brandybuck - how cute! Certainly a good set up for Faramir Took. My heart is aching for Pippin. No one should have to make such a difficult choice. I'm so glad that I *know* it will all work out in the end, but even so, you have me dying for anothe chapter!
Author's reply
I was uncertain at first as to whether Merry would've named his son Boromir, but it just seemed right, especially with Pippin naming his son Faramir... And I'm so glad that knowing the outcome already doesn't make the story less interesting to you, that was something I was a bit worried about. Thanks so much for the feedback!
Lyta Padfoot · 5 March 2004 · Chapter 16: Anxiety
How perfect, I especially loved the last line about hope.
Author's reply
Thank you! My beta reader actually convinced me to put a closing line about hope in, so thank her for that. :)
Samwisegirl12 · 19 February 2004 · Chapter 15: Gifts
yeah!!!!! "no more of that cheek nonsense" PLZ update! I luv this story! ~ swg ~
Author's reply
Thank you! :)
Hai · 16 February 2004 · Chapter 15: Gifts
Well they sure did get along nicely! I liked that Diamond kept the rock from Lily. Looking forward to more as always! thank you!
Author's reply
I'm wondering if the rock will be mentioned again later on... I hope I can find a place for it. Thank you so much for the feedback! :)
Diamond · 16 February 2004 · Chapter 15: Gifts
yay!! wonderful chapter!!! *clap, applaude* I love it!!! write more!!!!! I can't live until I read more of this story!!!
Author's reply
Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
Valerie · 16 February 2004 · Chapter 15: Gifts
YAY!!!!!!! *sets off a few of Gandalf's fireworks* That was an amazing chapter! Bahaha, it was even better because it's so easy to imagine myself as Diamond *wicked grin*. I love how Pip was so proud of himself about ending that "cheek nonsense". *sighs happily* This story just keeps getting better and better.
Author's reply
Mmm... lucky Diamond. ;) Thanks so much, I really appreciate the feedback! *chases after the fireworks*
Pervinca · 16 February 2004 · Chapter 15: Gifts
These chapters just keep getting better. It began with so much beautiful romance, and you managed to finish it with an adorably amusing moment between two of my favourite characters. Fantastic work - you're making me fall in love with these characters all over again.
Author's reply
Aww, thank you so much! That's one of the reasons I love writing LotR fan fic, because I get to work with the greatest characters. *hugs the hobbits*
Elendiari22 · 16 February 2004 · Chapter 15: Gifts
Oh! Oh, he kissed her! Whee! All's right in hte world. :)
Author's reply
Well, all's right so far, at least... O:)
Grey Wonderer · 15 February 2004 · Chapter 15: Gifts
Thank goodness, she been kissed! I love that she had to be the one to start things! Pippin is dear. I also love Merry's reaction and am very glad that Pippin didn't miss out on the baby's birth. Hope there is more soon.
Author's reply
I think Pippin's going to let Diamond do most of the initiating in their relationship. Because he's just sweet like that. :D Thanks so much for the feedback!
Chigger · 15 February 2004 · Chapter 15: Gifts
Diamond's so cute! :) She's so innocent, loving, trusting, considerate . . . pretty. :) I enjoyed this chapter very much; and I hope Merry's happy. (Because I know of two other hobbits who are. ;) ) Keep up the good work!
Author's reply
Hehe, yes, I think everyone was happy after what happened in that chapter... And I'm so glad you're liking Diamond! I've really enjoyed getting to know her, and I'm always pleased to hear that other people are enjoying her, too. :)
Lyta Padfoot · 15 February 2004 · Chapter 15: Gifts
How wonderful, I adored the interaction between Pippin and Diamond. Merry's comment to Pippin upon his return was priceless. 'Heinous act' LOL!
Author's reply
Hee hee, glad you liked it, thank you!
Le Rouret · 15 February 2004 · Chapter 15: Gifts
"Happy Valentines Day to me . . . " Thank you for your gift of warm fuzzies! (insert *awwww* sound here) Who's Mel? Le Rouret
Author's reply
You're very welcome! I'm glad I could help make it a happy Valentine's Day for you. :) (And Mel is my beta reader, who has been helping me out a lot with this story.)
Diamond · 15 February 2004 · Chapter 11: Miscreants
but Pippin have a kid named faramir!! it's in Pippin's family tree! how can she be infertile?! anyway, wonderful fic!! I love it!!! great job- your probably one of the best writers I've ever seen. :D ~D!AMoND
Grey Wonderer · 10 February 2004 · Chapter 14: Of Cousins and Kings
I just know that trouble is coming because Merry knows it. Now I am worried. It was so sad to read about Pippin thinking of children and this is such a wonderful story. I was glad to find a new chapter, or new to me anyway. Keep it coming as Merry and I are now both worried.
Author's reply
Hee hee, sorry, didn't mean to worry you (or Merry). I can't deny that trouble's on the horizon, but I won't specify when exactly it'll arrive. O:) Thank you for your comments!
Hai · 9 February 2004 · Chapter 14: Of Cousins and Kings
I like that Merry is so worried about Pippin! Sweet! Lily's present for Diamond was cute! Sad though for Pippin to be thinking about children and knowing if he stays with Diamond it wouldn't be probable, but at least he already knows and it isn't something to come out later, when it coule be more painful for both of them. Looking forward to more, thank you!
Author's reply
Yeah, it's been tough to write Pippin thinking about not being able to have children, because it's not a very Pippin thing to think about (and it's just plain depressing for me). But I'm afraid that's only the tip of the angst iceburg for this story. O:) Thank you for the feedback!
Elendiari22 · 9 February 2004 · Chapter 14: Of Cousins and Kings
I'm eager to see if Diamond gets her kiss, and how you'll get them past the problem of her supposed barrenness. A very good chapter!
Author's reply
Thank you! Fear not, all shall be sorted out eventually...
Valerie · 9 February 2004 · Chapter 14: Of Cousins and Kings
"I think our kings, not to mention your Steward, would say that you need to stop this 'cheek' nonsense and give that poor girl a real kiss!" Hear, hear! I completely agree with Merry on that point :P. I loved the little scuffle; it was really cute, teehee! The whole thing about Merry being worried about Pippin, and also disappointed that his cousin is growing (grown) up, is really sweet. I looooove this story! Bah, I almost hope they get caught, just to add more drama into this fic. I'm a stickler for Romeo/Juliet-esque stories, minus the dying, of course.
Author's reply
Hee hee, thanks for pointing out that line, I was rather fond of it myself. :) And oh, don't worry, there will be *plenty* of drama in this story. *adjusts halo*