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Kaylee Arafinwiel · 5 June 2012 · Chapter 32: Snowed-In

Atya, Sincerest apologies. *hugs* I was pretty sick myself (not Norovirus, so I wasn't as bad as Alex, but still) and then Emma was worse. Once she was well, I had her departing for New Zealand to worry about. Now all I'm suffering from is heartbreak - I miss her so very much!! :( But catching up on reviews will comfort me at least somewhat, I'm sure. :) Oh, Alex, Alex Alex! Ruining Amroth and Nimrodel's honeymoon like that, how could you! *snort* Kidding, kidding. *backs away from the "intelligence officer" with the gun* Of course I know what happens to Alex, at least during the next few chapters up to yesterday's, but still. *hides behind Atto* :P That Norovirus sounds like a nasty thing to be going around, especially in Alaska of all places. I hope it won't come back. :( Ick. But as ever, your writing skills have me in awe of you. Have you ever had to be stuck in a place with Norovirus going around? Tye-melin, Atto! Kaylee

Larner · 5 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

So--what's going on at the sheriff's office? At least Derek is of the type intended to work with the Elves, I think. I've wondered at times if he was one of the three non-identified agents, but if he is I suspect he is more likely to ally himself with Alex rather than Farrell. Oh, but Farrell is definitely a baddie, and I still can't wait to find out who has been inspiring him. Some dark Maia appears about ready to surface, I suspect.

Agape4Gondor · 5 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

I'm sorry. I really have to laugh at Glorfindel. Talk about the pot calling the kettle black. I remember a certain elf ranting and railing against the Valar for the same behavior!

demeter d · 4 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

I am glad to hear that you are slowly getting back to a normal schedule. Do be careful! The last few chapters I have begun to wonder if this whole affair is somehow personal for our Mr. Farrell. In fact, I am wondering if he is somehow connected to the agency head who had blackmailed "Ambrose" into service...as, was the man perhaps his father, or grandfather, uncle, etc. Or, perhaps he was Farrell's own mentor-trainer, as Amroth was to Alex. I suppose Farrell does realize how long Amroth served in the Agency, and how old the man ought to look by now. I wonder just what Farrell either suspects, or has found evidence for, about both "Ambrose's" true nature, and just what happened to their one-time Agency Head?" You do know, I check my inbox eeeaaaaaarrrrly every Monday and Friday?

Sunny · 4 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

Tee-hee. "And you thought I was just another pretty face, didn’t you?" I have decided that I really, _really_ like Derek. Smart, with hidden depths, _and_ evidently damn near unflappable. It wouldn't surprise me if the Elves are more than a bit disappointed at the way Derek has taken the Big Revelation without batting an eyelid. They have probably become used to the spectacle of jaws hitting the floor when they tell people that yes, there really are such things as Elves. Perhaps they'll find some excuse to call in a Maia or two just to get a reaction out of him? ;-) I don't think Glorfindel and the other Elven warriors truly realize how high-handed they are here - it is probably the elven Superiority complex rearing its ugly head. They had better learn that if they want to forge a true partnership, they _can't_ treat their putative partners like children.

Soledad · 4 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

I wonder if Glorfindel realizes he's treating Mortals the same way the Valar and Maiar used to read him - and if he remembers how much he used to hate that?! It would be high time for him to come down from his epaulettes, or he could turn Alex away from them and their case a lot more easily than the Valar had persuaded him to join up. Derek is great - still assuming that he's really a good guy, which I very much hope. "Not just another pretty face", indeed! The sheriff's office not answering is an ominous sign, I'm afraid. Evil cliffie is evil!

Lyana · 4 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

Uh oh... Glorfindel's very much off his game, and the sheriff being incommunicado doesn't sound so good either! Granted, Glorif's way out of practice for working with mortals (how many tens of thousands of years have passed since he fought alongside Aragorn?!?), but "pride goes before a fall" as the saying goes. Love how you've written Derek! He's becoming my favorite character, and his lack of surprise very much makes sense with his background as an intelligence analyst. He and Alex will certainly have some interesting conversations!

Fantasia · 4 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

I love Derek! what a smart young man. His comments about Sindarin language were priceless. I know that Glorfindel is under a lot of stress and not in his best moments, but he has a very short memory for his time fighting along with mortals, a little more respect, please. I will say Poor Alex, only because Derek bested him in his reaction after finding out about Elves and figuring out that something wasn't right.

Idril Celebrindal · 4 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

Fiondil, I have liked Derek from the start so I'm glad he's been brought in finally!!! I hope my trust isn't misplaced with Derek.....LOL I like the banter between Alex and Derek and that Elrohir concurs! Well done, waiting patiently for the next chapter! fingerstappingtappingtapping...LOL Idril

6336 · 4 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

Go Monalex!!! Woo! Hoo! Lynda

6336 · 4 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

Oh,oh. I think Alex is a teensy bit pissed! I just hope Ratty is in Chandaler and not witing out in the parking lot for him. I do wish Amroth would stop calling him son, it makes Alex seem like a four year old. Now what's going on in town, unless all the sherifs department has been called out, some thing is going down! I have the feeling though, if it was that big the sherif would have called in his Deputy Elves! Hope all goes well today, take it easy. Huggs, Lynda

obsidianj · 4 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

Oh, boy. Does Glorfindel realize he is playing with fire? Neither Alex nor Derek will take this treatment for much longer. Alex is bound to go off on his own shortly - and Derek will not be far behind. So Derek has a background in naval intelligence. Interesting... More talent that is needed.

Lady Edlyn · 4 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

Good morning, meldonya! What a great chapter; lots of information, Derek finally being taken on board (so to speak), more mystery, and some Elf-Man headbutting. :-) I think that Glorfindel needs: 1) about 36 to 48 hours of unbroken sleep; 2) a counseling session with Dan or Ron; 3) a wrestling session with the Maiar or a run with some wolves; and, 4) a moderated meeting with Alex so they can get some things said and out in the open. I think Amroth would probably be the best one to moderate any such meeting, because he has a much more balanced view of what Alex is actually capable of than Glorfindel does and he can help Alex fit Glorfindel and the other Elves into his "chain of command". I'm also guessing that Glorfindel needs a reminder about how he felt back when he was a Reborn when he felt the Valar and Maiar were treating him as a child and have it pointed out that is the exact same thing he is doing to Alex (and now to an extent, Derek). Of course, Alex needs to realize that he's not in his usual position of autonomy any more. So they are both going to have to make adjustments. I'm glad that you are no longer under "medical house arrest" and look forward to reading what happens next to our favourite Elves and Men on Friday. I finish my finals on Thursday so it will be a nice treat! Be well! Edlyn

Monalex · 4 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

I really hate GLORFINDEL!!!!! And I never thought I would say this!!!! "Mortals mucking things up" BASTARD!!!!! A more arrogant elf I have not read of in this story, well maybe AMROTH who gives him a run for his money... Also I don't think it justify this arrongance that they haven't interacted with mortals in a long while, they are living in the world of men not elves, dwarves and hobbits, MEN!!!!! If they made hermits of themselves it's their fault and mortals shouldn't be paying for their decisions. So I really hope ALEX and DEREK have sweet revenge upon this arrogant elves, if not because ALEX is curious and feels responsible for FARRELL and the other agents, I think he would have been long gone.... with the kind of respect they offer mortals its a wonder they have mortal "friends" at all!!!! Or maybe that's the point up until now most of the elves had not encounter type A personalities, those who could be classified as leaders among men, they are used to persons like ZACK and the others from Elf Academy who were content to be led by the nose... So I think the Valar and Maiar should put in their place this overbearing elves by showing them that they are also nothing compared to them, so where would they get off treating MORTALS as second class citizens????? Yes they may be young compared to them, but that is what gives them the advantage since they are more prone to do foolish and brave deeds. After all didn't ARAGORN made a foolish-brave decision to atack Mordor with a desiminated and tired army in the vague hope some hobbits would finish an errand to destroy a ring of great evil??? And really what a way for DEREK to surprise everyone... not just another pretty face indeed.

Kitty · 4 June 2012 · Chapter 40: Explanations

Glad to know Jack is okay. He was not involved in anything and doesn't deserve this, after all. *raises brow* Derek was another intelligence officer? Now that is interesting. And they shared a room? The Valar must have had their hands in this. In any case, he took the whole thing rather well, and I am not so surprised that he had been wondering already, he was an intelligent guy, after all. His reasoning [i] No one would actually make up something like archaic nasalized stop mutations unless they were truly evil.[/i] left me laughing quite a bit, though! [i] "Makes it less likely for me to slip up, but now explain to me what the hell is Homeland Security or the CIA doing shoving their noses into the affairs of this Academy? Don’t they have better things to do with themselves?"[/i] Exactly what I thought! Really like Derek and his sarcastical remarks. He'll be an asset to their group! Well, that confirms my feelings that the way Farrell went about the whole thing wasn't how an agent was supposed to act. Maddy giving him hell for it sounds good to me. Assumed they get to send him back in one piece, that is. Oh no, another emergency? And I'm off to France on Wednesday and have to wait for Monday to read the Friday update! Oh well, at least I'll get two at once! But you know, even if it's true that the Elves can get faster to the Sheriff's office, I still don't like the way how they treat Alex and Derek. It's a bit too arrogant for my taste. Anyway, I hope your first day back at work went well!

Whispy · 3 June 2012 · Chapter 39: Night Raid

Interesting. Ve-ry interesting. Glad the intruders were caught before they could cause any serious damage, and nice to see that Derek can hold his own. I wouldn’t want to be in the intruder’s place…two very, very pissed off Elves interrogating me? –shudders- Yeah, no thanks. It’ll be interesting to see how Derek reacts the revelations that the Elves will give him. (Oh, and also, I think Glorfindel needs a hug, stat. I VOLUNTEER!) Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter! Whispy

Clouded Leopard · 2 June 2012 · Chapter 39: Night Raid

I am glad that Elladan has acknowledged that Alex is kin even though distant kin. As for Glorfindel, he has a lot to deal with both emotionally and mentally at this time. I feel he will deal with all issues and come out on top. As for Farrell, he is up to something. I think he was using the two locals for a diversion to what he is really up to. It would be a big mistake on his part if he really went after someone else close to Amroth while the elves were busy interrogating Snyder and Ersck. I wouldn't want to be in his shoes. Can't wait for more action between Farrell, Alex, the Elves and even Derek. Is Alex seeing Derek now as a little brother?

obsidianj · 2 June 2012 · Chapter 39: Night Raid

Woa! Action came back with a vengeance. It was too quiet in the last chapters. The break is over. I'm getting ticked of at the elves for treating the mortals like they are not able to understand anything and are little kids. Granted, most of the students are very young, but they have a brain and especially Alex and Derek are older than most and have some experience. I like it how Derek could hold his own and calling the goons 'bozos'. Luckily, I don't have to wait long for Monday. Let's see how Derek reacts to some revelations.

Midnight Promise · 2 June 2012 · Chapter 39: Night Raid

Hello! You know, as much as I love the elves, I really hope Alex and/or other Men show them up and make them realize this is a team effort. ;) One thing that really stood out was how you kept Glorfindel's emotional issues current. You have his scene and when he comes in later, you have just those few lines about Alex noticing his (Glorfindel's) distress. Since you would expect some signs of Glorfindel's distress, or even relief if it had gotten to that stage, to show through. Very well done. :D And YES! I was looking forward to the time when the Twins (or even Glorfindel for that matter, considering how he's basically "family") referred to Alex as a family member. :D Heh, loved that part, and I hope there is more of that to come. :3 It also makes me wonder how Alex will react to having an "extended" family since he has basically just had his mom in his life. Or will he feel uncomfortable and think the Elves are trying to replace him for his ancestor, Aragorn or Beren? There is one thing that I have been waiting for and that's how Serindë is acting towards Alex. They have been in the general vicinity of each other for a bit now, and granted Alex was at death's door for a bit, but I was expecting a conversation/confrontation by now. o.o; Its actually kinda makes me nervous. Glad you are doing better and thanks for the consistent updates! You are one of the few authors I have read that consistently update. :) Best, MP

Kitty · 2 June 2012 · Chapter 39: Night Raid

Yeah, that's what I thought ... it's going to be hard for the Elves to go on when their friends leave this world one by one. In any case, the Elves really do their best to take good care of the students, as Ron's suggestion about watches once again shows. I wonder where Alex's premonitions come from – is it more his experience as an agent, or is it his lineage? Or a mixture of both? In any case, I am glad he encountered Elladan and could give him a warning. Lol, so they finally reminded Alex that he's in fact a descendant of the twin's sister and of Misty? Has to be rather unsettling for Alex, particularly after everything he had to deal with lately. But I hope he's going to appreciate it in the end. Argh, that was to be expected that Farrell couldn't keep quiet any longer, after the enforced break during the storm. Glad Alex sensed that something was wrong, so they were warned. The end of the chapter was fun to read – Alex and the Elves (and Derek, actually) worked very well together to catch the intruders. Glad Derek woke up and was able to defend himself, I was really worried they'd use him as a shield and blackmail the Elves if they got there first. And I'm glad Jack was only knocked out, but not otherwise injured, even though that is bad enough already. Hm, I find it strange that the agency should hire local scroundels for their operation instead of using their own agents. Makes me wonder about Farrell again – is he really there on order of Maddy Washburn, or is he working on his own? Alex and Derek won't be happy to be excluded here, but I can't wait for the next update to find out what that was all about!

Kitty · 2 June 2012 · Chapter 38: Casualties of the Storm

Good, it seems things are finally looking up, at least as far as the weather is concerned. All things considered, I'd say the Elf Academy weathered the whole storm and virus very well. Hm ... looks like Glorfindel could make a career as burglar ;) And everyone would think it was opened with a key! Oh, I am sorry about Martina. While we didn't really know him, it's still sad that he died there. But I liked the memory of him arguing with Glorfindel and them solving the argument with swearing in Sindarin! Glorfindel took it rather hard; I suspect the Elves haven't worked that closely with Mortals for a very long time for exact that reason, and now that they can't avoid it any longer, it's going to be difficult for them to lose them. I'm glad Námo came to comfort him. Interesting how Alex felt the need to go and seek Glorfindel out. He's really switched sides completely, seeing how he acts around the Elves. For some reason I was thinking of LotR when that reading of a thick book was mentioned, until I remembered that it doesn't exist in this universe. What a pity. Oh no, Edhellond is damaged! And of course you had to chose Glorfindel's room, did you? No wonder the poor guy is getting agitated – I get the feeling he can't take much more. Even Elves need a break now and then!

Lyana · 2 June 2012 · Chapter 39: Night Raid

Oh, so many goodies in this chapter - yay for Derek! I don't think he's going to be too shocked by the revelations. But those two baddies should be afraid, very afraid! One peeved, sleep-deprived elf lord is incredibly dangerous, but two?? They have NO idea how scared they should be... And Farrell - I'd really love to see him on an ice floe with a hungry polar bear or three in the very near future. Can't wait for Monday!

harrowcat · 1 June 2012 · Chapter 39: Night Raid

I am so glad that I have an exceptionally busy weekend and that Monday isn't too far away. You do know how to rack up the tension. At least Derek might begin to get some answers and, I suspect, give a few of his own. Poor Glorfindel! So much for 10 hours uninterrupted kip! My,...those Elves get around quickly! 'grin'

Sunny · 1 June 2012 · Chapter 39: Night Raid

Being frequently in danger certainly has taught Alex to listen to his in-built early warning system is screaming at him to do (or _not_ do) something. and not surprisingly it was Farrell who was behind this night's trouble. I am sure he will blame it on his dupes - but since Farrell recruited a pair of known criminals for this little job (and what was it? Killing, kidnapping, or just beating someone up? And was the target Alex or Derek, or perhaps Farrell just did not care, as long as the two stooges he had recruited got some blood flowing?) So Elladan has acknowledged Alex as a kinsman. The big question now is, is Alex going to want _Elves_ as relatives? I wonder what the young people of the Academy would say to Elrohir's statement that any warrior's orders are to be obeyed, and that they (the students, that is) are subject to their orders? Trying to give orders to people like that would be rather like trying to herd cats, I think! ;-) I guess Derek is going to learn that Elves really exist very soon now. It will be interesting to see his reaction! (Especially if a Vala or Maia also pop in to say hello) ;-)

Tari · 1 June 2012 · Chapter 39: Night Raid

I'm beginning to think Farrell is more than a government agent. There is something very dark and sinister about him. Why would he be after Derek? I'm sure that question will be answered soon.