Reviews (69)

Larner · 28 June 2013 · Chapter 9: Nine

Hmm. Alwunn appears to have found a means of getting rid of unwanted competition. Although I doubt sincerely that Eomer is going to give up once he realizes that Alwunn has left Lothiriel out in the woods unprotected. And I think that Alwunn will end up getting a rather nasty comeuppance in time.

curiouswombat · 27 June 2013 · Chapter 9: Nine

Meep! Now that really is a cliff-hanger. I wonder if Alwunn has already convinced everyone that Lothiriel has set off for home, or something similar, hoping that she will therefore be out alone all night?

elliska · 26 June 2013 · Chapter 9: Nine

Terrifying! I didn't see this coming when we met the jealous girl! I'm sure she led Lothiriel off to be mean, not to set her up (or at least I hope so), but boy it turned out badly! I hope you update this one quickly!

Larner · 17 June 2013 · Chapter 8: Eight

Young Alwunn sounds to be quite the girl, one who sees Lothiriel as competition when in reality she herself is not even in the running! Hope the visit continues to be warm and instructive.

Linda Hoyland · 17 June 2013 · Chapter 8: Eight

A most enjoyable chapter.I felt as if I were in Rohan.It seems Lothiriel is the last one to realise that Eomer is interested.His reaction to Arwen in the book shows he likes dark haired beauties.

Linda Hoyland · 15 June 2013 · Chapter 7: Seven

A most enjoyable chapter. I felt as if I could see the room and loved your scene for Eomer and Lothiriel. One tiny typo you might want to fix "she pulled the quilt strait" should be "she pulled the quilt straight."

Marinelli · 9 June 2013 · Chapter 7: Seven

Hmmm he needs the money, she has a dowry. She may be really angry when he finds out how much he needs the money. Esp. since she seems just a little bit frightened of him, because she's not sure what he wants. She's thinking, no way, he might have a girlfriend somewhere.

Larner · 4 June 2013 · Chapter 7: Seven

She does have a good deal to tame in him, doesn't she? Heh! The room sounds breathtaking!

curiouswombat · 2 June 2013 · Chapter 7: Seven

Oho! We have more sparks flying, a knowing Éowyn, an almost apologetic Éomer... wonderful!

Linda Hoyland · 28 May 2013 · Chapter 6: Six

I enjoyed this chapter very much, not least as I live in a town known for salt!I hope Lothiriel gets her apology from Eomer. I enjoyed the first view of the Golden Hall and the humour of Lothiriel's and Eowyn's bedtime conversation.

demeter d · 22 May 2013 · Chapter 1: One

I am often glad that this site lets us post more than one review per chapter. I had forgotten to add that I very much like your inclusion of a living mother for Lotheriel. Tolkien's stories are full of grieving widowers and dead mothers. I suppose he grieved his whole life for his own mother. But surely some of them lived to grow old in peace! And your Mrs. Imrahil and her daughter are doing just the kinds of things I would expect them to do after such a war. Very nice!

demeter d · 22 May 2013 · Chapter 1: One

Oh, yea! Another Lady Bluejay E/L story. I believe that you and Lialutherveril have the greatest variety of different versions of how those two might have met and courted. Both of your stories are some of my favorite Middle Earth "drugs of choice"! Back in the Sixties and Seventies when I was a girl,my mother read a lot of "Romance Novels". A lot of what Harlequin Books printed then, a lot of Barbara Cartland and Georgette Heyer. Mostly a LOT less graphic than what is on the book-stands now, PG 13 rated, really compared to now. One of my favorite formula stories involved variations on this; a plucky, bright young woman takes a job as; a governess to a gloomy young widower in a remote estate; or, a personal assistant to a domineering but brilliant corporate captain; you get the picture. The employer is insufferably blunt, rude, bossy, etc. They have a few volcanic, very entertaining confrontations, after which he grudgingly begins to respect, then finally love her. This tale reminds me of my favorites of my mother's "Harle Q's". I will particularly be following how you develop Eowyn. Is she really cold and rude, or merely hurting and proud?

Larner · 20 May 2013 · Chapter 6: Six

Well, he's listening and so indicating that his attention is truly caught by Lothiriel. I wonder when he's going to make it clear to his people that he's planning to claim her, not that his own haven't begun to pick up on which way the wind's blowing. Lothiriel just doesn't take all that in on a conscious level as yet. Heh!

Celeth · 20 May 2013 · Chapter 6: Six

Eomer does it again! Poor man, has he got a lot to learn about dealing women, or at least this woman in particular. I hope Elladan stays in Rohan for sometime!

curiouswombat · 19 May 2013 · Chapter 6: Six

Oh Éomer - all too ready to jump first and ask questions afterwards... if at all! It makes for a very good tale. And I do like the foil provided by the sons of Elrond in this story very much.

UTfrog · 19 May 2013 · Chapter 6: Six

This was a fun chapter. Elladan seems to be enjoying the byplay. Thanks.

Linda Hoyland · 12 May 2013 · Chapter 5: Five

I can well imagine some folk would be angry at Eowyn leaving them to ride to war. Poor Lothiriel seated between Elladan and Eomer. A most enjoyable chapter.

Larner · 7 May 2013 · Chapter 5: Five

A most interesting situation, being between Elladan and Eomer. Love that Elladan also intends to give Eomer a bit of a comeuppance. Seems several people feel that the new King of Rohan needs a bit of--discipline! Heh!

Larner · 7 May 2013 · Chapter 4: Four

Of course, Eomer isn't the only one who has needed to lighten up, and now both are doing so admirably. Loved the appearance of the pigeons!

Larner · 7 May 2013 · Chapter 3: Three

Ah, a wonderful start to the journey, and it appears Imrahil has decided to let Lothiriel prove herself. Excellent! He does need to lighten up!

Larner · 7 May 2013 · Chapter 2: Two

He's intent on making an impression, isn't he? Heh!

Celeth · 7 May 2013 · Chapter 5: Five

I thought Lothiriel was going to tell Hungife about how she lost her betrothed in the war. But I guess it wouldn't really count, since she wasn't really in love with him and didn't really grieve that much? Oh ho, so the fish is starting to circle the bait? Not that Lothiriel would appreciate being called a bait! But I love it that you included Elladan here, and in a teasing mood too. Poor Eomer doesn't stand a chance. I look forward to reading more about what Elladan (with his partner in crime - er, twin Elrohir) will cook up to torment Eomer. I found it a pity that the sons of Elrond had only a few speaking parts in the LOTR book, and nothing in the movie at all; all the glory went to Legolas.

ana · 7 May 2013 · Chapter 5: Five

What an interesting triangle! One of the beautiful twins at last. The description of Aldburg very detailed. What would the elf be thinking of elven Lothíriel? Waiting for more! The young widow, an interesting addition too.

Larner · 6 May 2013 · Chapter 1: One

Well, that was unexpected, I'm certain! Beautiful and temperamental! I commend Lothiriel for her honesty with herself and her mother and Faramir, and for her forbearance in the face of such rudeness from Eowyn!

UTfrog · 6 May 2013 · Chapter 5: Five

This is getting better and better! Love the final interactions between Eomer, Lotheriel, and Elladan. I am always interested in any references to the widows and orphans and how they managed.