Larner
· 11 June 2015
· Chapter 4: Could the day get any worse?
The concerns that Elrond and Aragorn both feel are definitely valid! Alas that they are unable to communicate fully with Glorfindel to ascertain his true concerns as well.
Author's reply
Glorfindel will open up soon, yet this will not placate Elrond, I fear. Thank you for a most appreciated review, Larner. Lai
Ellie
· 10 June 2015
· Chapter 3: the sun is spreading no warmth
How sad and disturbing! I want to know more about this elleth and what Glorfindel may know of her that he is not saying.
Thank you for writing and sharing this story!
Author's reply
thank YOU for reviewing, Ellie. Glorfindel will talk eventually, yet the story of the elleth will remain disturbing, I fear. Lai
obsidianj
· 6 June 2015
· Chapter 3: the sun is spreading no warmth
An intriguing mystery. I can understand Glorfindel, but from the clues about her injuries, I agree with Elrond. She will never be whole again. But miracles happen. I just hope they can break the spell and it is not some kind of trap for the unwary. I don't trust Saruman.
Author's reply
and you are right to be wary of Saruman. We want to side with both elves but with an Istari involved......thanks for reviewing, obsidianj. Lai
curiouswombat
· 6 June 2015
· Chapter 3: the sun is spreading no warmth
This is a fascinating story and I am totally hooked!
Author's reply
I´m so glad because I was so unsure of myself. Thank you for a most appreciated reiew. Lai
lmamc
· 4 June 2015
· Chapter 3: the sun is spreading no warmth
Wow, this is getting very interesting. Update soon.
Author's reply
thank you. THe next update is almost done. Lai
shirebound
· 4 June 2015
· Chapter 3: the sun is spreading no warmth
What a truly evil spell. *shudders*
Author's reply
indeed, and they have only seen the tip of the misery yet. Thanks for a most appreiated Review, shirebound. Lai
Larner
· 4 June 2015
· Chapter 3: the sun is spreading no warmth
We cannot argue with Elrond's instincts, but I, too, wish to know the history of this woman and to see her freed from the misery in which she now exists. And why did Saruman wall her up as he did?
Author's reply
to heed Elrond´s instincs would not be bad advice. Glorfindel is maybe blind, only seeing her misery. Thanks for a most appreciated Review. Lai
Larner
· 4 June 2015
· Chapter 2: a dark place
So, there is apparently a reason why this elf woman should not be brought back among the living then, one that Elrond knows but not Glorfindel? I admit to siding with Glorfindel, myself.
Author's reply
I´m too but is Glorfindel really seeing reason? THanks for your Review, Larner. Lai
lmamc
· 30 May 2015
· Chapter 2: a dark place
Very interesting, maybe Glorfindel sensed that the female elf was his other half. Elves are know to be able to sense these things at first sight. Update the next one soon.
Author's reply
ah, you are near the core, but not quite. Bear with me and you will see. Thanks for the review, Imamc. Lai
UTfrog
· 29 May 2015
· Chapter 2: a dark place
Secretive! This is intriguing. Thanks.
Author's reply
indeed. Hang on and you will eventually learn the truth. Thank you so much for reviewing, UTfrog. I really appreciate it. Lai
shirebound
· 29 May 2015
· Chapter 2: a dark place
Goodness, I'm as confused as Aragorn. What a tragic and chilling discovery. Saruman truly was evil.
Author's reply
Confusion will turn to pure horror when the whole evil is revealed . Saruman is more than evil. Thank you for the review, Shirebound. Lai
ellie
· 26 May 2015
· Chapter 1: anywhere but home
Interesting beginning. Can't wait for more!
Author's reply
thank you, Ellie. More is coming soon, promise. Lai
Larner
· 26 May 2015
· Chapter 1: anywhere but home
Oh, excellent! Now, to see what the renegade Istar had hidden beneath the keep of Orthanc!
Author's reply
I´m glad you like the beginning of my new story, yet I fear it is nothing pleasant Glorfindel has discovered......thank you for a most appreciated review, Lai
Linda Hoyland
· 26 May 2015
· Chapter 1: anywhere but home
An exciting beginning to your new story!
Author's reply
thanks to you, Linda. LOL!
shirebound
· 26 May 2015
· Chapter 1: anywhere but home
I'm as eager as Elrond to learn what Glorfindel has found! I appreciate this gap filler very much.
Author's reply
I´m so glad you like the beginning of my new story. I was absolutely not sure of myself. Elrond will get big eyes, this I can promise. Thank you for a much aprreciated review. Lai
lmamc
· 26 May 2015
· Chapter 1: anywhere but home
The chapter was just getting good and you just had to end it like that. Upload the next one soon.
Author's reply
the beginning should be just a teaser and obviously it worked. I was not sure about the topic and timeline. Update is on the way. Thank you so much for reviewing. Lai
UTfrog
· 26 May 2015
· Chapter 1: anywhere but home
Good beginning. Hope you update soon.
Author's reply
thank you so much. The story is already written. I have a new and very quick beta - so the updates should come soon. I really appreciate the review, thanks. Lai