These poems are loosely based on the haiku form and may not conform entirely to the 5-7-5 syllable rule!
*** Middle-earth weeps at The departure of the fair Immortal Eldar
With the Eldar gone Soon the mellyrn, elanor Become a legend
Lothlórien soon Passes into time’s grey mists Vanishing forever
The fate of the Realm Imladris is no better With its Lord absent
For never again Shall such timeless beauty grace The mortal homelands
Now come is the Age Of the Dominion of Men Ilúvatar’s Secondborn.
“If love were a choice, who would ever choose such exquisite pain?” - Anna and the King
=== Exquisite, precious Arwen Undómiel Noble Maiden, the Evenstar
Arwen, the brightest Star in my sky following Celebrían’s loss
With Ilúvatar’s Grace did I not cherish my Daughter’s love enough?
By cruel fate she does Feel compelled to surrender Her life’s ample grace
Surrendered for a Mortal man’s love, so very Very fleeting love
She has traded an Eternity in Aman’s Light for such brief bliss
Yea, once did I call the Man Estel my son afore His gall was displayed
Since he won Arwen’s Hand, my son no longer is he But Isildur’s Heir
To a King only Will Undómiel’s grace go To a King only
O Celebrían! Our children did you entrust To my safekeeping
Alas, my love, I Have failed you, I have failed us Our daughter will die
What exquisite pain Love has been called, and indeed Love that is what it is
The heart’s exquisite Sorrow it is, yet I would Not have been denied
For without it in My heart, instead I would have Been denied her love
My daughter’s love Was worth eternal sorrow O eternal sorrow
What shall I tell your Naneth, my daughter, about Your mortal life, hmmm?
Shall I tell her you Found happiness however Fleeting in my eyes?
Shall I tell her the Price you paid was too great for A mortal man’s love?
Shall I tell her you Will not be joining us in The Uttermost West?
Shall I tell her the Price you paid was too great for A mortal man’s love?
Shall I tell her you Will not be joining us in The Uttermost West?
Shall I tell her that Aragorn, Arathorn’s son Was worthy of you?
I cannot tell her This, for I believe no man Is worthy of you
So I shall tell her This man will love you as best His heart will allow
Aragorn will lend What comfort he may against The great sea-longing
He will dry your tears Shed in vain when you wish to See my face again
Yes, my daughter I am not long for this world With the One’s unmaking
O, my child, know this My heart will weep for you ‘til Arda’s unmaking
The hope that will keep Me from Mandos is the hope Of our reunion
If Ilúvatar is Indeed merciful we shall Be reunited
=== *Naneth / Mother
Royal Chief Archivist Note: The following was found within the annuals of Rivendell, and is directly translated from the manuscipt written by the she-Elf Celevoniêl, daughter of Iphanterien, to whose tale we sadly do not know the end of.
Could it be that the Mortals' part of Ilúvatar’s Song could be sweeter?
Could it be they whose Laterns burn hotter, brighter Than immortal lights
Be the sweeter part Of Ilúvatar’s plan for The world He hath wrought?
Yea the Eldar live Scores of years longer than the Secondborn children but
Perhaps in their brief Existence upon Arda’s Vast lands is the more
Joyous, and perhaps It is sweeter than honey More glorious than
Varda’s handiwork That glitter as diamonds in The curtains of black
Could the Edain know Greater joy than the Eldar? Surely they know less
Sorrow than those of Ilúvatar’s creation who Endure for as long
As Arda itself? Since they are not bound to the Circles of the World
Can they see their Gift For what it is: Freedom from Eternal despair?
I know that there are Those of the Edain who would Give up Ilúvatar’s
Gift to them if they Could live forever in their Present form
Could have our own gift Of immortality; but As one who lives with
The Gift, it is not All the Secondborn believe or Dream it to be
I, Celevoniêl, daughter Of Iphanterien have lived long enough To become wearied to the very core of my soul
Will the West truly Offer me the rest I seek Or must I go to the Halls to find rest?
Even then I am in Doubt Mandos can offer me The rest I so crave
O, Ilúvatar, Hear the cry of your child Give my soul its rest!
Or else I beg thee To release me from the bonds Of this World’s oppressive Circles
Hear my cry, release Me from this curse of the Eldar, make me as one of the Edain...
Archivist Post Script: Her Majesty the Queen Arwen I, has informed me it is known through the Elven oral history that Iphanterien o sell Celevoniêl departed into the West shortly after she wrote these verses. It is however unknown whether or not Celevoniêl found her peace as those who go do not return from far yonder shores of Aman.
Royal Chief Archivist Note: The following was taken from the journal of Queen Arwen I, the Evenstar of Gondor; published in the Chronicles of Minas Tirith by Her Majesty’s explicit permission
In my mind’s eye I Knew the exact moment My father left this world
I beheld the grey Ship as it unfurled its sails Wind carried westward
“Fare thee well, *Ada!” I whispered, weeping because I was not with him
But only on that Day did I weep for what I Had lost, only then
Never again did I weep for **Nana, Ada Parted forever
Not until this hour, Estel, did I regret the Sweet and the bitter
Indeed was the choice I made both the sweet and the Bitter, so bitter
“What if I had it To do over again?” I Ever ask myself
My choice would not be Any different even To gain Elvenhome
For as Lúthien Had no light without Beren So would my plight be
Even in the Light Of Aman, I would have died For the want of you
This and more said I To Ada, still he bid me “Come West, my daughter.”
Ada was so sure Aman’s light would full heal me As it healed ***Naneth
Healing there was not To be found there for me none Ever without you
And so I renounced The Twilight and embraced a Mortal’s brief lifetime
Learning to live as A mortal was difficult More than expected
But your presence, love, Eased the transition, and made It more bearable
Bearable until This moment when I am faced With the loss of you
In the moment you Declared your intent to seek Sleep with your fathers
As I labored on The Banner of the White Tree Ada did warn me
Saying “Thy time with Arathorn’s son seem will seem all Too brief, too fleeting
As he lies down to sleep Forever, thy heart shall be Utterly broken
In nothing and in No one shall thee ever find Any comfort again
Not even in thy Own children will be able To mend thy torn heart
Thou shalt know only Great despair and sorrow ‘til The end of thy days comes.”
I remember, Estel Gazing into his ageless Wise grey eyes, saying,
“If such a moment Comes, then I will seek out rest In Lothlórien
To Cerin Amroth Will I go and there I will Lay until my soul flees
Flees towards the great Heavens, and into the arms Of my only love
We will then flee the Circles of the World to seek Ilúvatar’s Halls.”
Many in our Realm Would be shocked to discover Their Queen was naïve
Enough to speak such Word without any thought as To their consequence
Yea I am naïve Though I have walked this earth for Nigh three thousand years
Was I naïve to Think the time I spent loving You would be worth the cost?
Nay! Nay! Nay! Estel, Loving you was worth the cost And a privilege
I would hasten to This course again, without a Moment’s hesistance
=== *Ada / Daddy **Nana / Mama ***Naneth / Mother
“If love were a choice, who would ever choose such exquisite pain?” - Anna and the King
It may be awhile before I post any more poems or fics as I want to turn my attention towards working on my own original novel now, if only for a little while...
Thanks for reading these poems and for greatly encouraging me with your kind comments!
Until I post my next poem and/or fic I say: Namarie, lothron i Valar tirith or le!
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