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Title: Climbing Author: Anso the Hobbit Beta: Marigold Characters: Saradoc, Merry, Bilbo and
Frodo Timeline: Hobbiton, SR 1388, so Merry is 6
and Frodo 20. Note: Written for Marigolds`s challenge #5
where the story starter was to write a story where a journey takes place. --------------------------------------------------------------------- ”Come on. You can do it. It`s not far, and
you`re such a brave lad. I`m sure there will be a special treat waiting for you
when we get to the top. There`s a good lad!” Your father had said, holding out
his hand so you could grasp it if you wanted. It was hard going for little hobbit feet
to walk all the way up to Bag End from Hobbiton. The Hill was steep, and even
if you walked the way that went past the Party Field, which was a rather flat
area of the Hill, it was a long journey for a six-year-old hobbit lad. You had promised loud and clear to all
that would hear, that you could very well walk the Hill by yourself, thank you!
You were not to be treated as a toddler. And you did not need to hold hands
with an older hobbit either. This was something you would manage all by
yourself. You had practiced too, walking up and down Buck Hill, and not
allowing yourself a rest before you came down again. There had been one or two
times that you had decided to roll down the grassy slopes of it, but mostly you
had walked like a big lad. When the day for walking the Hill in
Hobbiton came, you were quite ready and had asked your father several times if
you were there yet. Frodo would be at the top waiting for you, you knew that,
and that was maybe more of a treat than the treats your father promised on
behalf of Cousin Bilbo. Standing at the bottom of the Hill, your
courage failed a little. You didn’t remember it being that long and that steep.
You craned your neck a little to see if you could possibly see Bag End, but the
only thing you could see if you set your mind to it, was the top of the Party
Tree, and even that looked little and far off. “Are you ready, Meriadoc?” Your father
said, seeing you frown and scowl at the winding road. You squared your
shoulders, hitched your braces back in place on your shoulders (they had fallen
off while you sat in the cart, they were new ones, and still a little too big,
but you would grow into them soon enough). “Are you sure you want to walk up?
We can take the cart you know.” “It`s all right Da, I`ll manage.” And you
had set off, quickly at first, your curls bouncing in the summer breeze. Your
father let you set the pace, and for a while you walked on in silence. Slowly
you could see the Party Tree coming closer. Just before the Party Field the
Hill grew steeper, and you had to catch your breath a little, slowing down. “Merry.” Your father had stopped your
determined pace and put his hands on your shoulders. “You`re walking as if life
depended on it. Come on, I`ll carry you for a while. You`re all flushed and
sweaty.” But you wriggled out of his grasp and he set you down. “I have to walk. I want to know that I
will be able to come and visit Frodo on my own when he goes to live with Cousin
Bilbo.” You said, folding your arms across your chest. “Oh, but I`m sure you`ll manage that
Merry. Besides, when we get back home I will see about teaching you to ride, so
that you can ride to visit Frodo. But he`s not moving yet. You know that. It
has to be his birthday, and Yule, and maybe even your next birthday before he
does that Merry.” You walked on, and suddenly you could see
Bagshot Row, and the great Party Field beyond, vast and green. Coming level
with the field and walking it`s length you couldn`t remember it being that
large. You had to look back, several times, and once you even spun around in a
complete circle to see Hobbiton with the Mill and the marketplace and the
Water. You knew that Frodo was going to move to Hobbiton to live with Cousin
Bilbo, but you didn`t think that it necessarily was a bad thing. And you knew
that this was a getting-used-to-Frodo-soon-to-be-moving-trip. Frodo had been
staying at Bag End for long periods before, and you had come to visit then too. You could see Bag End! The bright green
door and the lush garden waiting for you with Frodo and Bilbo and stories yet
untold. And now, someone was standing there waiting, and it was Frodo. You
slowed down to wave at the hobbits standing by the gate, and then without
really knowing it you quickened your pace so that your father looked at you
with a questioning glance, calling “Merry?” at your disappearing back. “It`s Frodo!” You panted, setting of into
a run, not stopping before you were just in front of the opening gate. Through
ragged breathing you greeted your cousins and was soon enveloped in a great
hug. “You made it Merry! You walked all the way
from Hobbiton! My, but you`re a big, brave lad.” Beaming with joy over seeing your cousins
again, you hugged Frodo back. “I did it, didn`t I?” “I never doubted that you would, Merry.”
Frodo said. “Now, let`s see what kind of lad we have
here, that walks such a long way.” Bilbo said. “That is quite a feat! I`m sure
we have something extra special for lads like that.” You knew it then, as you followed your
cousins and father inside. That if you could climb the Hill of Hobbiton all by
yourself, then there was nothing in the whole world you couldn’t accomplish if
you only set your mind to it. ***** I`ll do my best, and no matter how
many steep hills I have to climb, I will climb them all and more, you thought, shouldering your pack and climbing another hill, your eyes constantly
wandering between Frodo, Pippin, Sam and Strider. And now it was over. You had
done your best and it was enough. END |
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