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| Words by Mallorn | 5 Review(s) |
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| MaidenofValinor | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/28/2004 |
| Beautiful descriptions! | |
| Annamir | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/12/2004 |
| The first blossoming of love is unmatched bliss. Eventually, however, you *must* come down from the clouds. I would think that the engaement was a time to dispel illusions and see the person as he / she truly is. True, Eowyn is not one to give up all her secrets. Marvelous short story -- although I wonder at Faramir taking Eowyn to the ol hideout and not because of the smell. Everyone must have a place to retreat to, alone. Yes, especially dependable, reponsible Faramir. :) Is the old word "borne" no longer in use -- to be bourne upon = to be carried ? see the first long paragraph for the typo (born). | |
| pipspebble | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/16/2004 |
| *happy, happy sigh* This was lovely. I do so adore these two together. You have captured them marvelously. Thanks for giving us this gift of your words so beautifully put together. | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/15/2004 |
| This is exquisitely written. Words may not convey everything, it is true -- but thank you for crafting this gem of a story for us. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/15/2004 |
| I always like the stories that praise story tellers. Who but we writers understands that? I was interested in Faramir's observation that Gondor demanded extremes, or maybe forced people into extreme with us/against us positions. I wonder if that's often true in times of great stress. Maybe subtlety goes out the window when you're trying to survive. Although the Valar know that Denethor could be subtle. I can see that Faramir would want to show Eowyn this place that had been so important in his life. In a way, if she loves him, she is loving what he became, what he lived in that place. | |