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| Beauty for Ashes by Nina the powerwriter | 2 Review(s) |
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/5/2004 |
| As I told you, I like a perceptive Frodo. Your Frodo is a very nice one indeed. A good description of the restless nights of three troubled souls sharing the same home, their efforts not to disturbe one another are painful and realistic. Once more, I noticed you put "couple weeks" instead of "couple of weeks". Not a difficul fix. I hope to see a new chapter very soon now! I am intrigued as to how it will continue--you haven't left too many obvious clues lying around. Author Reply: All righty, I'll have to go fix that 'couple weeks' mistake. I started a new chapter yesterday. Hit a lot of bumps in it though. Hopefully they'll get worked out. | |
| Bluegrass Elf | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 9/21/2004 |
| More more! Author Reply: Thank you reading! The next chapter will be posted hopefully in the next couple of weeks :) | |