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Reflections  by Pipwise Brandygin 2 Review(s)
PattyReviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/13/2004
Oh my, did you have to end it there?

Good for Beregond! Without a word he gave Pippin hope.
I thoroughly enjoyed this. The tension was so thick you
almost cut it with a knife.

Author Reply: I'm so glad you enjoyed this - thank you for reading! :)

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 12 on 9/8/2004
Powerfully written. There is poetry in your prose.

There is a world of description in this brief, economically-worded snippet:

The ground shook beneath them and the air was malice itself, searing him as he breathed, for surely all fury in the world had boiled to the surface here and unleashed itself upon them.

And then Beregond, just as I imagine him.

Good summation in the last line.

Thanks!

Author Reply: I really appreciate the kind comments - thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it.

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