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| The Forest Has Eyes by Budgielover | 13 Review(s) |
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| KwAIcqrixdl | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/9/2012 |
| Nice site you have there I’ve been hinavg a bit of success lately using ‘yourkeyword home’, so in your case you could try ‘cleaning home’ – if you try and put too many keywords in it looks a bit spammy imo. The company name could just about work too. It’s definately something to consider, as it’s a link that appears on every page and possibly more importantly, towards the top of the page too – this will be next post I think – content source ordering. | |
| Timmy2222 | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/20/2004 |
| Wow, that was a good one! Tight, gripping, in tune with the characters! And the trees are waking, yes! Tension is growing, now that the hunters will flee with speed. Is there help to be expected by the trees for the captives, or will Aragorn and the wizard be the ones to trail them? Good that you follow the main story first. Boromir and the rest of the Fellowship are left behind, but I suppose you will go back to them later. - T. | |
| Jaylen | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/13/2004 |
| Great Chapter, very cool!! I love the trees coming to life and rallying to the elf's help. Can't wait for the next chapter. Jaylen | |
| bri | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/12/2004 |
| LOVE this story so far!! ARAGORN AND GANDALF GET IN THERE AND SAVE LEGGY AND FRODO NOW!!!!!*glares at them as they move through the forest*..one thing i cant belive is tha leggy would actually fall out of a tree!!i mean suuuure...it was a dead one..with moss and mushrooms growing on it..but really!!ah well..it works with the story!update soon bri | |
| Elenar | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/12/2004 |
| Exciting! I can't wait for more. | |
| Galimeril | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/11/2004 |
| Ohh! This is getting better and better! Update soon, REAL soon! Galimeril ;D | |
| Nikara | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/11/2004 |
| Oh my gosh, this is amazing. You need to continue soon. Great job so far, you have caught the characters beautifully. | |
| pebbles66 | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/11/2004 |
| I had forgotten all about this story. Another great chapter; I can't wait for more. Poor horses, and poor Frodo. What do you have in store for him next? Somehow, I don't think it will be good. | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/11/2004 |
| "Now the trees were becoming aware that one of the revered folk, one of those who had gifted them with thought and voice, was captive and injured in their midst. And those that had hurt him rode among them, unaware and unwary." Oooh, Budgie, what a marvelous description. The trees altered the path so the Men would get lost.... wonderful! And what a great team 'your' Legolas and Frodo make. | |
| elwen | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/11/2004 |
| Wow Budge! Your work just gets better and better. This was such an intense chapter. Your whole plot is so carefuly planned and I love your idea of the Ring influencing the thoughts of the trees. | |