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Shadow  by fael bain 2 Review(s)
Chathol-linnReviewed Chapter: 52 on 9/13/2004
I liked the brisk pace of the dialog and action. Fael Bain (great name by the way), you've portrayed the characters with feeling and economy. Nice job. This is the first time I've seen your closing song. I like it better than the one you quoted; no offense intended toward it. It's just that I knew your original work would suit your story better. Best regards - Chathol-linn

Author Reply: Hi Chathol-linn!
Thanks for making me believe that I could do it! I agree with you that it was a lot more appropriate for the purposes of the chapter, and of course there was the sense of accomplishment in that it was actually mine! =) I'm very glad you like my name and the story! =)
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Elf messengerReviewed Chapter: 52 on 9/12/2004
Recociliation. That was a very good chapter. Legolas and Thranduil are finaly acting like a family. I can't wait for your next up date!!
Namarie.
Elf messenger

Author Reply: Thanks for the encouragment, as always! It's good that Legolas finally has his father on his side! Perhaps now it's everything is going to be better, but I wouldn't count on it, of course! ;)
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