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Envinyanta  by Noldo 3 Review(s)
LeraReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/13/2004
This looks extremely interesting. Aragorn is an incredible character and I look forward to studying him along with his great grandson!

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/13/2004
'The king laughs, an odd, almost bitter laugh.

"Fond! Fond, ay, and more than merely fond, for well I remember the nightmares he had after Elessar's passing. Once I heard him calling out in his sleep, in the dark watches of the night, and he said - " here the king stops suddenly. '

This sounds interesting - did Eldarion's son feel that his father overlooked him for Elessar? That he couldn't possibly measure up to the legendary figure?

It's not easy being the close descendent of a legend. What, a few generations on, becomes interesting can be, in a parent or grandparent, totally intimidating.

This is a very interesting beginning - and I want to know more about the girl, too. And how old is Elentirmo?



Author Reply: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you found the beginning interesting.

To answer questions very thoroughly here would be to paste the later bits of the story in, which I obviously can't do. Instead, I'll just say that I'll probably be answering most of this later.

Unofficially, Elentirmo is twentyish.

Thanks for droppning by!

LadybirdReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/13/2004
This is a great start, extremely interesting. I already like Elentirmo and look forward to reading more about his discoveries about his great Grandfather.

Author Reply: Thanks for dropping by. Glad you enjoyed the story!

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