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| Acceptance by eokat | 4 Review(s) |
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| Glory Bee | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/24/2011 |
| sokat I am moved yet again by reading this story for the second time. Tears streaming down my face and the nobility of the great Chieftan of the Mearas and the trust displayed by Eomer and finally Lothiriel. Its just a beautiful well crafted story. :) | |
| songspinner | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/23/2004 |
| Ooooh...okay, I'm impressed. I had not a whit of an idea where you were going with that and I loved the ritual! Mearas indeed...that makes perfect sense. You write beautifully, for characters and their relationships. Author Reply: Thank you songspinner, glad you enjoyed it, Eokat. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/22/2004 |
| OH that was lovely. I've been so curious to learn what the ceremony would be and you've made it so appropriate to the Rohirrim. I also liked the idea that Lothiriel becomes one with her new people on this day too. You wrote the baby very well. I could just picture him chewing on his fist. Author Reply: Thank you Daw, glad you enjoyed it. I too love little Elfwine. Sigh, takes me back....Eokat. | |
| Drake | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/22/2004 |
| Very well done, Eokat! So this was the rite? A mearas, swearing fealty and protection for the newborn prince. I don't know how you came up with all that, but it was pretty impressive. I look forward to more of your work. :) Author Reply: Thank you Drake, so glad you enjoyed the last chapter. I have got a few more irons in the fire, so watch this space...Eokat. | |